Manan-SS Unbreakable Bond. Part-13 updated at page-30 (25 oct) - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wowww..!!! Awesome..!!
Fab 5 and navnibh ROCkZzz..!!
Loved it..!!
Pls pm me wen u post the next chapter..!!
I vote for Fab 5..! 😊



Tysm😊
Please buddy Cutypie04 for pm.
She will send you pm after updates.
Ty again😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello dear...
Update was superb...
Manan mid night romance...was beautiful...
And their convo of baby was so cute...
Fab 5 aur navnibh rock ...
I vote for navnibh band...
I like their performance ...
Keep it up..
Keep smiling...see u soon..
Lots if love
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Posted: 9 years ago
FAB5 all time winner.
But it could be a tie up also.
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Update soon
I read it in a go and it was fabulous
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved it so much...
don't know who's gonna win...its gonna be really tight...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Superb update
And manan update was superb
But who will win
Plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii calina
Masst update and little long one compared to previous update
I liked their bonding yaar its really bliss to read
Sacchi mein unbreakable bond... Pretty please don't separate them in future track... After all this sweet but nothing talks they can't live with out each other
They are super romantic couples till date... We can't expect this on screen... If it happens na it'll be epic
Hayee abi se hi babies chaayiye manik KO naughty guy...nandu bhi baby hai but act as I'm so old... But yeah she's matured by her thoughts
Competition was superb...
I think it'll be tie BTW both band
Continue soonish
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just came across ur story it's intresting 2 knw nandu as kabir sis bt real sis nt mood boli...
Manik n nandu r really soo cute...
One thng I m hvng doubt pls. Clear it Wat if nandu get pregnant wid manik's child will manik accept her n his child too I knw dis is silly kind of quest bcoz v knw they truly love each other bt still our circumstances r nt in our favour always ...
Anyways jo b ho bas dnt seperate dem keep dem lyk dis always...
N ya till now lyk dat intragram post waala scene n how manik cmnted on her so wld b Mrs. Malhotra 2 keep fans more jealous n of course make nandu smile...
N pls. Do pm me ven ever u update I had snt u a buddy req...
Update soon...
N pls. Dnt seperate dem...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello people. 😆
Thank you so much for such a huge response. I am so overwhelmed. Please continue your support, it's really important.
Here is the next chapter.
Enjoy reading😃

Part ~ 12 ^_^ ⭐️

And the winner is

Navnibh

Fab 5's face fell down bit then they smiled. The audience cheered for them and the winners were beyond shock.🥱😲 Recovering they hugged each other - jumped and Navya did some thumkas! They moved towards the middle of the stage and took the trophy.

All three had a never leaving smile on their face - a proud smile.

" So guys the first runner up is Fab5. Let's hear for them as well. "

The crowd again started to hoot. Fab5 took the trophy.

"We have our winners and the Talent hunt has come to end. Enjoy yourselves.
Congratulations. "

Everyone were busy in the party organised by SPACE but not Fab5 and Navnibh. They escaped from the party and headed towards Dhawan Residents - not speaking a word.

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They reached Dhawan Residents and sat on the couch. Breaking the long and cold silence Navya spoke

So, Cabir. We won.

Congratulations!! said Cabir with a smile.

You're not sad?? asked Navya with confusion written all over her face.

Noope. Navya don't you know Jo tera he wo mera he, Jo mera he wo tera! So initially you won, I won. he said and came forward to hug her and she happily gave in.

They hugged each other.

Abi also hugged Mukti.

Manik came forward and hugged Nandani.
Congratulations. Baby you made me proud.
Thank you babu!

But hah, party chahiye mujhe.

Tho! We are going to party now.

Noope . Private party you know. Just you and me. he said nuzzling his nose in her neck.

Okay, just you and me.
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So guys let's celebrate then said Dhruv.

Dhruv let's celebrate tomorrow. Whole day. Now let's.. Uh, you know. said Mukti.

Okay the we will met here tomorrow at 10 then celebrate. said Manik.

Cool!

With that Dhruv, Alya , Abi and Mukti went.
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Baby girl congratulations!! You made me so proud.

Thank you Bhai! she said and hugged him.

You will be home tonight?? he asked.

No, me and Manik are leaving. You enjoy with Navya. Bye!

Bye! Take care.
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Manik where are we going?? she asked.

Patience babe! We are almost there.
He said taking her hand.

Manik we have been driving since half an hour now!!

We are here!

Finally.

Manik went out and opened the door for her like a gentleman offering his hand.

Thank you she murmured and took his hand.

It was a old small house out of the city. Both of them entered the house and Nandani saw looked around. The interior of the house was also old. There was fire place and a kitchen then the stairs leading upwards. There was couch with a small table in the living room. The window next to the wall gave a perfect view of the sky. Upstairs there was a room with a balcony. The room was well furnitured.

Nandani turned back and smiled at him. She hugged him tight and he hugged her harder.

Manik this house is so beautiful. So beautiful. I get a home feeling. It's so preety. Thank you for bringing me here.

Baby. I am glad you liked it.

Liked. I love it but whose house is this???

Ours!!! I bought it for us.

Seriously. You are kidding me!

No. I am cent per cent serious.

Aww!!! This is so beautiful. Thank you so much. I love you most.
She said jumping in excitement.

I love you more than most Babe.

Is that even a sentence Manik?? He he!!

Maybe!

And with that he carried her downstairs to the kitchen.

I will make coffee for us making her sit on the kitchen counter.

Hum. And I will watch you make. Okay babe!

He was making coffee when she jumped and hugged him from back.

Kya huwa??

Nothing. I love you!
She said kissing his shoulder. She ran her hands through his waist and tiptoed and dropped wet kiss on his neck.

Nandani.
He moaned and turned. She kissed him all over his face and neck. He pulled her close and kissed her face. Both od them kissed each other slowly, lazily and smoothly.
After some time they brome the kiss and Manik again dropped wet kisses over her neck.

Manik!!!! Coffee

He again kissed hwr lips and poured the coffee in a mug.

I love you. Now let's go to the couch and have coffee.

She took big coffee cup and he carried her. They sat on the couchlegs entangled, Nandani in his lap.
He hugged her and covered themselves with a blanket.

You comfortable???

More than anything!!

I love you!!

Me too!

Nandani kept the coffee at the table and took of all her accessories and he watched her do so. Having done she again sat in his lap and took the coffee mug.

Nandani.

Yes!

Let's play board game.

Okay.

Let's play scramble!

Okay.

They started playing scramble.

Okay!! Then E X O T I C . Exotic
Your turn

Hum!! T E M P L E . Temple
Your turn

P E E. Pee

Nandani that is not done!!! Cheater that's not allowed.

Why? Pee is a word.

Yea but it is not allowed

Yes I won and she started running all over the house laughing

Come here princess!!!

Tell me I won.

They ran and lastly Manik said she won and both fell on the bed .

I won!

She said catching her breath.

Yea!! he said and pulled her for a hug.

Manik????

Yes.

I am hungry.

Okay then let's go down and cook!! He carried her at his back.

What to cook???

What do you want to eat beautiful lady??? Your cook is at you service he bowed down dramatically after she sat on the counter.

Hehe!!!
Pene pasta please!

And they started cooking. Throwing vegetables here and there. Laughing at each other, kissing each other.

After lots of fun and romance they cooked. They kept it on the dinner table. Nandani arranged the plates and drink and Manik switched off the lights and lit the candles.

Let's start! I am starving.
She said.

Both of them were sitting on the sane chair. They fed each other.
After the dinner Nandani took the dishes to the sink and Manik helped her.
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Manik and Nandani are lying on the bed. Manik is sleeping on her stomach and she is reading her favourite novel "Notebook". She had been reading it for an hour now and he was just staring at her.

Love, in these last and tender hours is sensitive and very pure
Come morning light with soft-lit powers to awaken love that's ever sure.

She read it aloud and a tears fell down her cheeks.

God, babe why are you crying?? You fine!
He crawled up and wiped her tears.

Manik! Noha and Allie are together.
And she cried harder.

Manik had no idea what she was talking about. He pulled her close and saw the book lying. He took the book and saw the same line she said. There were even Noha and Allie. Then he got what she was talking about and smiled.

Babe. They are together. Isn't that beautiful and happy! Why are you crying??

Manik their love was so hard.

Sush!!! Love nah is always hard but when you have your perfect person nah! It will be easy - you should only love nothing else.

After sometimes she stopped.

So who is more baby-ish now! You are crying reading the novel you have read hundredth times.
He kissed her forehead.

Hum!!! Sorry.

Don't be! I love you!

I love you more!!

And both if them pulled each other for long passionate kiss! Moaning each other's name they parted and hugged each other .

The stary sky was visible from their window. Both of them looked at the sky and then each other. Nandani with her index finger drawed a half heart through stars and stopped at the end . Manik drawed the other half completing the heart and touched her finger. They joint their forehead and entangled their hands. Nandani was soon asleep.

Manik watched her sleep.

He pulled her close and kissed her angelic face beneath a blanket of stars, wondering how on earth he had been lucky enough to find his princess.
Soon he to drifted into sleep hugging his world.


Ok this was long and fast also. Do comment and like.
Thank you!! 😊






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Posted: 9 years ago
Soo bliss update. .
Loved it. ..
Manik and nandini are relationship goals. ..

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