Manan-SS Unbreakable Bond. Part-13 updated at page-30 (25 oct) - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved it so much...
manan are behaving like a couple who have been married for ever...on their nth honeymoon...they are just the cutest couple ever...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello dear...
Update was awesome...
Wow navnibh win...
Manan kitchen romance was superb...
Manan convo was amazing...
I really like this update...
Thanks for update...
Continue soon..
Keep it up...
Keep smiling...
See u soon..
Lots of love..
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW..!! Sooo amazing.!!
I wanted Fab 5 to win.. But navnibh won..that's ok.!!!
MaNan...I love them..
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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I mean its such a beautifull ff. N i jst luv the bonding btw. MANANBIR. I mean kamse kam yaha to hame inki bonding milegi. Ur updates r really sweet. U really penned it down very nicely. I very much liked cabirs understanding n caring nature towards manan n n n i jst luvd manans khulam khulla pyaar
Continue soon
Waiting eagerly for the rest.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a cute update.
Nandu won, but its actually Manan win. ❤️
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
😊wooww!!!!!!!!!
verrryy nice nd lovely update..
Manan's part is awsm..plzz give some cavya moments of celebration also..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww it's so cute update
Thank u for the update
And update soon
Eagerly waiting for your update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Next part plsss...!!!!
Pm me as soon as u post it...!!
Loads of love.!
Swarna!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey fellows!!!
Thanks for such amazing comments. Hope the same for this chapter too. Keep supporting.

Enjoy reading 😊

Part - 13 ⭐️
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Early in the morning the birds were singing and the sun had made his way up to the sky. Two insane lovers were peacefully sleeping in each other's arm until the sun rays pepped through the glass window and disturbed their slumber.

Good morning bachha!

Good morning honey!

They pulled for their morning kiss which turned out being much passionate.

Bachha let's go for bath. It's been long!

Readily she opened her arms asking his to pick her up and both of them made way to the bathroom.

...

They entered the bathroom and stood under the shower. Nandani turned the shower on and the water made it's way from all the sides. They let the water run through their bodies.

Manik could not control himself, he pulled her for yet another slow passionate kiss. Lazily he striped all her clothes dropping kiss everywhere.

Getting rid of her clothes she took off his dropping wet kisses with every piece that went off.

His control having reached to it's peak he turned off the shower and picked her to the bed. Covering themselves with the duvet he looked at her. She smiled and sucked his lips for approval.

The room was filled with laughter, cries and "I love you's" for the hour. They were slow yet passionate.

Manik gathered Nandani in his arms and kissed her.

I'll be wash up and come. You rest till then.

She bobbed her head and he went inside the bathroom.

Manik came out of the bathroom and saw her making the bed. He stood there towel hanging in his waist. She came and kissed him soft. They exchanged smiles and Nandani went for her wash.

Nandani changed herself into the clothes kept at the bed and went downstairs where Manik was waiting for her with breakfast. They fed each other and left for Dhawan Residents.

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When Manik's car entered the house the love birds saw Cabir, Navya, Alya and Dhruv sitting on the couch. They exchanged greetings and hugs.

So, where are Mukti and Abi???
asked Manik.

On their way.
replied Alya.

Bhai what's the plan for today then???
asked Nandani.

You will love it baby-girl, mark my words. And the plan is surprise. So patience!!
said Cabir.

I am so excited.
said Navya and hugged Nandani.

After some time Abi and Mukti joined them and they headed outside.

Whoo! Bike ride!!! I love you man!
said Mukti hugging Cabir.

There were two Royal Enfield - one polished black and the other silver and a jeep.

Bhai this is great!!!
said Nandani and ran to the black bike and grabbed the helmet.

Nandani baby let's see who wins!!
said Mukti grabbing her helmet.

[Nandani and Mukti have always been a crazy bike lovers and riders and race between them is normal. And yea Nandani owns the black Enfield and Mukti silver one. ]

Manik and Abi both the grabbed the helmets and sat behind their girls.

To the hill top then!
said Dhruv from inside the jeep and they drove off.

Nandani and Mukti showed thumbs and started taking different routes.

...

Mnik & Nndni

Nandani was riding the bike and Manik was sitting back hugging her. They were at maximum speed.

I missed this!

Me tooo!

Sitting behind you and kissing you is so fun baby. It's after really long time I am getting this opportunity.
he said nuzzling his face in her neck.
Really???

Hah!!
his hands travelled through her bare legs teasing her.

Nandani hit him with her elbow and he winched in fake pain to which Nandani giggled.

Manik hold tight. I am taking the rocky short cut.

Why???

I want to win and it shortens one hour ride in ten minutes. So hold me tight baby.

Always!!!!

After the rocky ride they reached the hill top first.

You look smoking hot when you ride.

Really.
she said encircling her hands around hisneck. She turned towards him-they are still sitting in bike.

He hummed and started to drop kisses on her neck and collarbone.

Manik!
she moaned and pulled herself.

They sat there talking and laughing and romancing of course until Mukti and Abi came. The four of them again started to ride till the resort.


At resort

All the boys were at the beach - shirt less waiting for the girls. The girls arrived in their bikinis as they had decided playing volleyball after breakfast.

Navya in yellow, Alya in pink, Mukti in dark purple and Nandani in black.

All the boys jaws dropped watching their lady love looking like goddesses.

They made two groups - boys vs girls. The game was going well but then Navya winked at Cabir and girls won. The girls jumped in joys and the boys smiled watching them happy. The all of them walked towards the sea for some fun in water.

They were splashing water to each other then suddenly Cabir started to sing.
I'll be all right
I'll be all right

He pulled Navya close twirling her then dropping kiss on her hairs.

Tu hai to tedhi medhi rahein
Ulti pulti baatein
Seedhi lagti hai

Dhruv carried Alya in bridal style and she pulled his cheeks to which he blushed.

Tu hai to jhoothe muthe vaadein
Dushman ke iraade
Sacche lagtein hain

Abi held Mukti by her waist and she wrapped her arms around him. Both of them joined their forehead.

Jo Dil mein taare vaare de jaga
Woh tu hi hai,Tu hi hai

Manik carried Nandani on her back and she ruffled his hair from behind wrapping her legs around his waist.

Jo roote roote de hasa
Tu hi hai wohi

All the couples had bright smile on their faces.

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Boys put the girls back to straight and sang pointing to their loves.

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

The girls smiled and danced with them.

Saari duniya Ek taraf hai
Ek taraf hai hum

Cabir sang.

Har Khushi to door bhage
Mil rahein hai gum

Abi sang.

But when u smile for me
World seems all right

Dhruv sang.

Yeh meri zindagi
Pal mein khil jaaye
Jaane kyun

Manik sang.


Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

All the boys hugged each other by shoulder turning to girls and sang.

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Girls hugged themselves and danced.

Yeah yeah yeah
I'll be all right
I'll be all right

Boys watched them move.

Yeah yeah yeah
I'll be all right
I'll be all right

All of them danced.

O
Chote chote kuch palon ka
Dostana yeah
Jaane kyun abb lag raha hai
Jaana maana yeah
Cos when smile for me
World seems all right
Yeah saare pal yehi
Yuhi tham se jaaye

Boys looked at each other and smirked .

Jaane kyun

They went closer to girls and picked them.


Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

They sang looking in their loves eyes.


Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

The girls also drowned in their eyes.

Tu hai to tedhi medhi rahein
Ulti pulti baatein
Seedhi lagti hai

Boys walk in the sea .

Tu hai to jhoothe muthe vaadein
Dushman ke iraade
Sacche lagtein hain

Water till below their legs.

Jo Dil mein taare vaare de jaga
Woh tu hi hai,Tu hi hai

Without breaking eye contact they dropped the girls in water

Jo roote roote de hasa
Tu hi hai wohi

They laughed and sang.


Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Boys laughed hard for some time and then offered hands to girls.

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Instead the girls pulled them down and all of them played for some more time in water and returned back to Dhawan Residents.

:) :D :')

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Dhawan Residents hall ^^

All of them were tired and were in hall after dinner.

Guys then let's call the day off and sleep.
said Alya.

Yea u and Dhruv take the guest room next to mine and Mukti and Abi take the other one .
said Cabir

Bidding good nights all of them retired to their rooms.

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Nandani came out of the bathroom changing herself into cotton shorts and tee and Manik had changed into his extra clothes and was already inside the blanket .

Today was fun.
said Nandani crawling into the blanket .

Hum! So much.
said Manik stretching his arms.

You tired?
she asking as he lied down.

A little back pain.
he said pulling her close.

Come let me give you massage then. Turn around.
she pulled herself and sat crossing her leg.

He turned and she rubbed his back smoothly. He adjusted himself in her lap as she rubbed his back and closed his eyes.
After some more minutes he sifted , took her hands and kissed them.
He mumbled thanks and she kissed his forehead.

They shared a few more love you's and kiss and drifted into slumber holding each other close.

*_*
Okay hell long and sorry am extermnly late. Hope you liked. Please like and comment. And yeah any confusion regarding story please do ask I will clear all.

Thank you again! 😛









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Posted: 9 years ago
A one big doubt tum k abi inka separation nai dikhaogi na...
Update soon...

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