Manan-SS Unbreakable Bond. Part-13 updated at page-30 (25 oct) - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yes do change colours but please use darker tones
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Atlast manan are together ha ha awesome update
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Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Yes do change colours but please use darker tones


I haven't used any colour fonts this time. Hope it is convenient 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
loved it
aww! They missed each other so much
their bro-sis bonding is amazin'
their romance was also wonderful
update soon
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Nice update loved it both r very special for nandu
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Awesome update dear
Cont soon.. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a sweet Manan romance. 😳
Loved it sooo much.
Love Nandu and Cabir relationship sooo much. 🤗
Thanks for the update.
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wow amazing updates dea...😊.
read all 10 parts in one go
continue sooonnn
if possible do pm me plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello there!!!
Well this one is not a chapter update but some thing more important.

You all have been amazing.
I don't send any pm's and still you all continue your awsomeness - support 😃

(Cutypie04 thank you again)

You all please buddy Cutypie04 for pm's.
Hope you all understand.

Thank you all again.
I will update soon-till evening
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Hello people. I am so sorry, I said I would update yesterday but could not. Sorry again.
Guys please buddy Cutypie04 if you want pm.
Thanks. Keep supporting.
Enjoy reading 😛

Part-11👏⭐️

It was midnight. Manik and Nandani were sleeping hugging each other when Manik woke up. He woke up and found he was sleeping with his head on her chest hugging her stomach and her hands around his neck.

He crawled and rested his head on the pillow. Nandani sensed him moving so she woke up.

Baby what happened?
She asked sitting in the bed.

Nothing. Arrey, why did you wake up! I thought it was difficult for you to sleep with all my weight on you so I just sifted.
He said keeping his head on her lap, encircling his hand around her waist.

Awww!!! I was much comfortable.
She said ruffling his hair.

He hummed and kissed her belly.

They sat there enjoying their mid night romance - she stroking his hair and he kissing her belly and waist.

Baby, how many kids can we have?
asked Manik out of nowhere.

Kids she said with atmost surprise.
She though for a while then said pulling Manik upwards, now he rested his head on her shoulder.

I already have one nah!! How many do you want??
She asked.

Me!! I want only one a sweet sa baby! Whom we will love and fulfill all his/her wishes. We will be the best parents darling!!
He said with smile but then it faded.
Wait a minute!! You already have a baby. Are you nuts???
He broke the hug and looked at her.

She smiled and said
Yea. I already have one. You are there nah Baby!! Actually more than a Baby.

Aacha!! I am baby hah!
He said moving forward.

Hum! My very first baby. Who is so obsessed with me that can't stay without me. Who cries in front of me and fight for chotu-chotu things and then again starts to manofy me because you can't stay angry nah! So first you grow up then we will think about babies.
She said playing along.

Only yours!!! But you are more baby-ish than me.
So small - so cute. You pout exctally like a kid. And then cry for everything. Who eats chocolate like manic - spoiling your dress and then show that puppy face. So bachha you are-look at your clothes. Even a born baby wears longer dress.

So you want me to wear longer dresses hah!!
She said pushing him on the bed and sitting on his stomach.
Come on! You have problem with my dress??

Dress?? I would me on cloud nine if you don't wear anything. It's you life you can wear anything you want.
I was just playing along.
He said a bit serious hoping he did not hurt his " my life-my wish - my independence " thinking girl.

So was I.
She said with a grin and lied over him.
It's late let's sleep baby.

He hugged her and both of them drifted in slumber.
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Another week passed in a jiff.

It was the Talent hunt night. Everyone were so excited and of course ready to perform.

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Back stage ***

Fab5 were in white and gray.
And Navnibh in black.

Wishing each other with loads of luck the lovers-rivals waited for their performance.

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@STAGE

The host started the Talent hunt.
After some number of performance.

Now we have the Fabulous 5 with us. Let's welcome them guys.
And every one shouted
Fab5
Fab5

**************

The drums beat and guitar started .
Navnibh were also in the audience at the front standing and cheering.
Tum logon ki, iss duniya mein
Har kadam pe, insaan ghalat
Main sahi samajh ke jo bhi karoon
Tum kehte ho ghalat!
Main ghalat hoon toh phir kaun sahi
(phir kaun sahi)
Marzi se jeene ki bhi main
Kya tum sabko arzi doon
Matlab ki tum sab ka mujh pe
Mujh se bhi zyada haq hai

Manik sang and the stage rocked - the audience mad at his aggressive yet soothing sound.

Sadda Haq Aithe Rakh

Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh

The audience repeated
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh

Na na na...
(Sadda Haq Aithe Rakh) [x4]

He sat at the stage and started at Nandani. She gave him a flying kiss and he saw her jumping with the beat crazily.

Hey!
Inn qataaron mein yaa udhaaron mein
Tum mere jeene ki aadat ka kyu ghot rahe dum
Besalika main, uss gali ka main
Na jis mein haya, na jis mein sharam
Mann-bole ke ras mein jeenay ka harjaana
Duniya dushman sab begaana inhe aag lagaana
Mann bole mann bole
Mann se jeena ya marr jaana hai..!

Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh

The audience repeated.

Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh
Sadda Haq aithe rakh

Na na na...
He stood up went to Cabir and sang.
Ooo...
O Eco-friendly, nature ke rakshak
Main bhi hoon nature

He sang along with Dhruv.

Rewaazon se samaajon se
Kyun...?
Tu kaate mujhe
Kyun baate mujhe iss tarah
ho ho...

Mukti and MAnik jumped and sang.

Kyu sach ka sabak sikhaaye
Jab sach sunn bhi naa paaye
Sach koi bole tto tu niyam kanoon bataye
Tera darr, Tera pyaar, teri wah
Tu hi rakh rakh saala

Alya gave the smooth background and the crowd sang.

Sadda Haq Aithe Rakh
Sadda Haq Aithe Rakh
Sadda Haq Aithe Rakh
Sadda Haq Aithe Aithe Rakh...

He stood in the middle of the stage - where others also joint him. The crowd was mad.

[Sadda Haq Aithe Rakh] (x4)

Sadda Haq Aithe Rakh...(x4)

The song ended with huge hooting and claps.
___________________________________

Wasn't it awsome!!!

Yea!!!!!!

After the power pop song by Fab5 we now have the last song by
Navnibh.
Let's hear for them.

Abi was the drummer, Navya a normal guitar and Nandani with a electric one.

This was the first time Fab5 were audience. There they were watching their love.

The crowd cheered and then they were silent.
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Nandani started with her tune so hard that the silent crowd went mad listening her tune. With Navbhi taking the tune she started.

Oh malang hua dil ye mera
Hey!
Mast malang hua dil ye mera
hey!
Ishq fiqar da chhadde balla
Mauj kar baahon ke jhalla
Jee ve.

Manik looked at her!! His girl.
Nandani had curled her hair for a rough look. Her black lipstick and smoky makeup gave her the bad girl look. Her boots and the black short with the hangings mane her look like a Rock Star!

Ishq me bilna ya ho ya faqeeri
Maange sab ki khair ...
Jee ve

She sang winking at Manik! And giving a half smile to Navya.

Gira deewane
laga lalkare
Ishq di masty de vich
sovey te jaage

She pulled her guitar and sang shaking her hair.

Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki laage

The audience repeated. Jumping with the beat.

Oh Dhunki laage re
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki laage
Oh Dhunki laage re

She came near the end of the stage where Fab5 were jumping and sat there.

Tu hawa paani aag hai
Tu daga daani daag hai
Jo bhi chaave tu woh ban jaave

Muklya winked at her and Dhruv showed thumbs up!

Hai fanaa mera dil khuda
Hai khuda kab mujhse judaa
khudko dhoonde toh isko paave re

Cabir was acting like a manic watching his baby-doll sing. And Manik was love struck.

Gira deewane laga lalkare
Ishq di masty de vich sovey te jaage
She stood up with a jerk and sang going back to Navya.

[Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki laage]

Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki laage
Dhunki Dhunki Dhunki laage [laage re]
Both the girls jumped and shaked their hairs and sang.

Oh malang hua dil ye mera
Hey!
Mast malang hua dil ye mera
hey!
Oh malang hua dil ye mera
Hey!
Mast malang hua dil ye mera
hey!

The song ended but the crowd didn't stop. There was big sounds of whistles, hooters and claps.
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Now we would like to call all the participates in the stage.

Fab5 and Navnibh were facing each other.

So whom do you think is the winner

And the crowd started to shout for their band!!!

Ok! So the result is in my hand! The winner is...


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So all vote!!! You decided the winner.
Do comment and like this is so long!!
Do vote and keep supporting.

And again buddy Cutypie04 for pm.



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