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aniali

@aniali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

i just read your story in a go... and guess what.. itz sooo good.. awsome it is... waiting for the next update... do it soon.. pls...

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Part-11

Manik was coming out from the bathroom after taking shower and nandani woke up by stretching arms and said very sweetly GOOD MORNING (Manik look- towel and bare) chest,nandani saw him she cant take her gaze out of him he was looking damn hawt after some time manik shaking his hand infront of his eyes and said hello she come out of trance. And was blushing hard then manik saw her blushing face and manik said nandani u go nd fresh n up i will get u clothes nandani-okAfter some time she came out out from the bathroom and manik was coming in the room taking dress in his hand nandani was in her towel wrapping around her body,wet hairs some one said from back bahaut garmii ho rhi hai is kamre mai haina? Nandani turn around and saw manik coming close to her she was one step back nd manik one step forwad this continued till they reach towards the wall she stopped,manik also stopped coming close to her taking his hand around her waist he moves close to her face and come close to her face said in hisky voice said clothes for you she was shivering first tym (bold nandani was shivering) she slowly removed his hand from her waist relising her condition and hand over clothes to her

manik-come down waiting for u on breakfast table, i hv to drop u at your home also and move out for breakfast table nandani quockly changed move downstairs , had breakfast with manik , he also dropped at her home

After a wonderful morning...

nandani went to her room after eating breakfast,she changed and left for college

Her eyes were searching for someone Ofcourse Manik malohtra

Then suddenly navya came and saw her searching someone.

Navya- nandu hum toh idhar hai tum kise dhund rahi hu?

Nandani-ya but mai manik ko dundh rhi hu

Navya-aajkal manik manik bahaut kar rahi ho

Nandani-no woh actually we are performint together naa thts why(she was hestitating a bit)

Nandani- hmm

Then they headed towards canteen and nandani was shocked seeing

Manik fighting with a guy and they were fighting like hell

Rest fab 4 was trying to stop them but they both were not listening

Guy- i will not leave you manik

Manik- how dare u touch mukt!!

Guy- why are u interfaring its my life

And manik punched him hard and the guy felt on floor Manik- dont u dere come close to us (pointing finger towards him)

Alya stopped tht guy and he listened then manik left from there

All were just staring eachother like hell srsly

Precap- manan talk

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Manishadevnani

@Manishadevnani

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

I m seriously staring at manan fab5 lyk hell...

No separation track...

No sacrifice...

Update soon...

Wan MANAN TOGETHER N FOREVER

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

awesome update...

loved it so much...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Part-12

Fab 3 ran behind manik leaving tht guy and aliya dere

Manik was in the jam room he was hell frustrated and holding his head moving here and there

Manik- huhhh how can he do tht to mukti

Fab 3 came inside and aliya also came behind them

Mukti came forward to talk

Mukti- manik calm down i m fine see usne kuch nhi kara

Manik- mukti maine kitni bar kaha hai tum hume mai se kisi ke raha karo but tum manti hi nahi

Mukti- manik kuch nhi hua na see

And hugged him consoling him after few seconds The three step forward

Cabir-oh hume bhool gaye

Manik- cabirrr

And they all hugged eachother and sang song yaroon dosti badi hi haseen hai

Someone was seeing that moment from outside and she was smiling

But she was confused as

why manik is fighting with him...

after that friendship sequence of fab 5 nandani was in the jam room where manik and her have to practice was sitting and going to call manik but he was coming running and then he said i m here

Nandani- manik we dont have much tym left kal humari performnce hai toh lets start (nandani was looking little disturbed ) and manik sensed it

Manik- kya hua nandu

Nandani- kuch nhi lets start

Then after long 2 hrs practice they stopped and decided to move in the canteen as they were so hungry

But nandani told manik ki lets go to the cafe naya khula hai bahaar

Manik- ok lets go

They moved out of the college and headed towards cafe

And sat on the chair

Waiter came to take order and asked,both in unision said 1 BLACK COFFEE

they looked eachother and smiled

Waiter-ok two black coffees and something to go with it

Manik a sanwich for me and nandani tum?

Nandani- pasta

They remembered last night and blushed little and waiter moved towards kitchen Nandani-manik should i ask u something ?

Manik-haan sure

Nandani- pkka?

Manik- haa babaa say

Nandani- actually woh aaj canteen mai woh guy kaun tha ?

Lets see manik kya bolta hai ...

Guys yaar pls comments if u r reading otherwise mujhe kaise pta chalega that i have to continue or not ... Pls comment otherwise i will not continue the story

(Thank u all if u want me to continue then comments kardo )

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Manishadevnani
I m seriously staring at manan fab5 lyk hell...
No separation track...
No sacrifice...
Update soon...
Wan MANAN TOGETHER N FOREVER

Matlab u want twist ?

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: aniali
i just read your story in a go... and guess what.. itz sooo good.. awsome it is... waiting for the next update... do it soon.. pls...

Thank u all