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Swarna

@PARTH11391

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Started reading now..!! Juz loved it !!
MANAN..!! I love them..!
Nxt part pls..!

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

hii guys i have 17 parts ready with me so if u want meto post fast-fast comment more and i will update...spread this Ss as much as u can

So here you go ...

Part-5

Next morning manik Was sleeping near the swimming pool only and the sun rays on his facethen he woked up ... After tht he went upstairs in his room and saw the time in his phone...

It was 7:00am then he relised tht he have to go to college so he wore his white shirt with his blue shorts which was till his knees as usual he was looking damn hawt '

but pta nhi he was feeling different not so happy not so sad... So he started heading towards alya's house but then he remembered what happened yesterday...then he took u turn and moved towards college -

On otherside nandani woke up and she was really happy so he wore her fav. White crop top and denim material shorts, left her hair open ...'

She was looking so beautiful tht any damn boy can fell for her . She moved down stairs and had breakfast,she ate cornflakes as she is very fitness freak but he cannot sacrifice ice cream and chocolates... She finished breakfast and give a side hug to chacha-chachi and left for college ...

Manik reached to college and nandani was near the college

Manik moved towards the jam room and he was alone as he come early today then he relised tht he forgot something tht was his phone so he went towards his car to takeout the phone.

Nandani finally reached her destination where she will start her new journey , she was really excited and happy ... Then she moved in the college but she was not able to see any student as she came early then she moved a liitle forward Nd she was quite impressed with the college then she was looking every place with the excitement .She suddenly listened a sound of guitar , the sound was really mesmerising as it have pain and nadani just get into the sound and was running here and there to see tht who is playing with so much passion ... Then she finally reached to jam room when she saw someone sitting and playing the guitar ,moved little forward she was facing his back but she is attracting with the sound then she places her hand on his shoulder suddenly he stopped playing guitar...

Then he stood up turned his face,he saw nandani

and they both said together TUM!!!

I know chhotu hai lekin u guys did'nt comment toh ...

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

AMazing but ssly bahut chota hai...
Thoda bada karo...
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

nice .

but seriously bohath chota hai..
next update a bit long one .

cont soon .

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sanjana

@krazzy_parthian

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

gr8 one dear...

bt a lil short...

awesome meet again..

continue soon

LOVE

SANJANA

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

awesome update...

short and sweet...

manan meet again...cant wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Swarna

@PARTH11391

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Its awesome..!!
Pls continue soon. !!
Swarna

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Didiaish

@Didiaish

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Hey nice story

Continue soon
N try to update little bit big chapter

Ok byee update soon

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Here you go i know maine last time chhotu update diys tha but guys mai kya karti u all were not commenting but guys mujhe bhi toh pta chalna chahiye that u all are liking my story or not . For that u all have to comments . Plsss plsss

Part-6

They both were shocked to see eachother ...

And become silent

Then nandani breaked the silence , said

Thank you aur u played very well...

Manik wants to say thank you but she ran from there as she was feeling awkward... They felt something really different meeting eachother again and again (nandani POV there is something tht we meet again and again,it cannot be co incidence,end of POV)

And manik was blushing he don't know why he was blushing like a fool ... F ...

Fab 3 reached at jam room and saw manik sitting ,they were shocked to see manik like that then thought tht he was upset as wht happened ... (Alia has told to fab3)

Then dhruv came to manik and hugged him... Manik was thinking tht why he hugged him but he responded with same... When they were hugging

cabir said from back guys mujhe aur mukti ko bhul gaye and they broke the hug and give a look to mukti and cabir tht come lets have hug then they hugged eacheother for a lontime...

Nandini runs away.. Manik tries to go behind her..and then on another side..cavir bumps to nandini..! and

Cabir- oh hello..slow slow..! Nandu runs away..

Manik tries to go behind her and then cabir says..

Cabir-tu..tu kahan jaa rha hai..! aur kaun thi woh..?! Manik-ermm...woh..kuch nahi..

Cabir-to chal lets practice..!

Manik-ok come..! Manik while going just again turns and looks at the door..! And smiles..and his pov

Kaun hai yeh ladki jahan jaun waha kaise milti hai..! End of pov

Nandini- aiyappa what..! Shakal se to nahi lagta ki itna accha music play karta hoga..! Weird people weird places..!

Peon- aap nandini hai na..?

Nandu-haan..kyu?

Peon- aapko principal sir ne bulaya hai..

Nandu-chaliye..! Principal- so nandini..this is ur new day in the college..so why don't u see the college..around..! He calls someone..! *Manik*

He takes time to come..! U know he is THE manik malhotra..!

As manik enters..! Nandu busy on the phone..! Principal-so nandini he is..*nandu still busy on phone* *manik looking at principal*nandu then turns to see who he is..and was about to say...tum!!! But stops infront of principal..and gives a weird kind of smile..! Principal to manik- go show her around thr college..! she is new to the college..

*he is good boy not that bad too*

As a gentleman he opens door for her..and she goes..

He follows her..

Manan in union-so..

They stop

Again..manan-i am...

Manik-ok u say first..

Nandu-giving a smile..i am nandini murthy..! From mangalore..!! Living in usaManik-i am manik malhotra *shake hands*

Nandini- u play really very well..!

Manik- i know that..! He shows her around the college..!

She says- i have some work with the principal..i will go..

Fab 5 practice late till night..

Nandu still in college..

Cabir-mukti i will drop you..!

Dhruv-alya u come with me..

Everybody leaves..

Nandu in corridor- Aiyaappa..it is so late..chachi will be so worried..! And ab how will i go home..! This principal pehle din hi itna kaam laga diya..! ' Manik overhears her convo with aiyaappa

Manik-can i help u with something miss murthy..! *talks in her ear going very near* ** she scares..!

Next part is on next page ...

Edited by ishikasharma - 9 years ago

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Part-7

Suddenly they broke hug..!" he opens door..and goes and checks the car bonnet..and as they were somewhere very forested area..no garagge around..he thought..! He asks nandini to comeout..

Nandini-Manik mere side ka door is jammed..i can't..

Manik-wait..there..

And he comes near to her..

He picks her up in his arms..and takes her out they both are lost in each other eyes..they walk some distance..! Nandini- Manik i can walk..

*manik in his senses*

Manik- umm..h...aa... Ok..!

They start walking...

Manik's pov

*what is there in her touch that..it feels so right.. It feels like 220 volts ka current lag gaya hai...its weird this feeling..!common what are u thinking manik..stop it*

Nandini-shitt..! Yahape to range hi nahi hai..what will i do now..chachi will be so worried..aiyaappa..wat shud i do..what will i tell her...! *manik giving a expression..!*

He keeps finger on her mouth..

Manik- sssh..! Kitna bologi..don't u get tired..kitna tension leti ho..now say smthng kya hua..haan?! *staring at her lips* ''

Nandini is stunned..! And points towards his finger on her lips..he then comes back and removes his finger..!

Listen i am sorry.. Nandu says..! Manik-its ok..!

They reach nandu's home somehow.. *don't ask me how..becoz i too don't know* Nandini- Manik, if u wanna stay here for the night..as its too late..and...

Manik- No its ok..its fine..

Nandini- arre..how is it ok..no its not u r staying right here for the night..

Manik- You are too stubborn..

Nandini- just like you..!

They share an eyelock..!

Manik-ok fine..! They enter the house..! Nandini- chachi he is manik, my friend wo actually..he came to drop me par woh uski gaadi kharab ho gayi hai..and so ab itni raat ko wo kaise jayega..so can he stay here for night..

Chachi-arre haan haan..kyu nahi..aao na manik..chalo main tumhe tumhari room dikhati hun..

The next day nandu wakes up and gets ready for the college..she goes down to help chachi.. Chachi-arre nandu,tu yaha kya kar rahi hai..arre wo manik haina use kya chahiye kya nahi zara puch ke to aa..Nandu-arre chachi,main to uske baare mein bhul hi gayi..accha main aati hun..

She goes upstairs..''

Mr.Malhotra is taking shower..nandu enters his room..

Nandu- Manik,tumhe kuch chahiye to mujhe bulao..

Manik-wo..haan..nandini..actually i had shower but main apna towel bahar bhul gaya hun..can u plzz pass it to me..

Nandini-Aiyappa..kitne hard tasks deta hau yeh..Manik-did u say something...Nandini-no..Manik-no.,i heard it..

Nandini-wait i will bring towel..

Nandu gives it to him through the door..but towel gets stuck in the door he tries to pull it..and nandu also gets pulled.. and she gets hurt as she hits the door..he rubs his hand over her head..she has her hands on his chest..then they come to senses..*

Manik- oh i am sorry..i am so sorry...*and just gets drowned in her eyes* and they share an eyelock.. *suddenly manik's hands goes to the shower..and the shower starts..he hugs her..and then pushes her away..so she stays away from water and then he takes all the water on him..* aww so cute*

Manik-Nandini..go out..

Nandu comes out..

Manik comes out too..he sees nandu is wet..*a bit* he takes the towel and wipes her up..they share an intense eyelock..! Chachi - arre kaha reh gaye dono..

They come back to senses..they smile..

Nandini-umm...han..wo i will..ok...chachi..hmm...ok..breakfast..come..ok..bye..

Manik-umm..hann..i will..

Nandu comes forward turns back and just smiles...he too smirks.!

I hope u all liked it pls comments dedo ...