Manan ss - fireflies and stars are manan| PART-15ON PG-14

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sweet_kaur

@sweet_kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Just read your story in one go
Must say its a beautiful story
And it an awesome writer
Pls update soon
And manan patch up fast waiting for it!!!

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Thank you all i am so overwhelmed with your comments like srsly i cant even tell you cauz i never thought tht i will be getting so much praise on my writing ...ya guys manik knows to tie a saree cauz yaar woh india mai shuru se rehta hai

Ok now back to the update

Part-15

Manik and nandani was standing together, hand in hand

Someone was seeing them and said i will never let u be happy manik malhotra ...

Time was coming close for there performance

Now the announcement was made and they look at eachother, step forward towards the stage ...

Manik-lets start!!

Nandnai- yes

Uljhi si baatein dil
Mujhse bhi baantein
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)
Khud hi samajh ke mujhe samjha de
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)

Nandu sang looking in manik's eyes and manik was also looking in his eyes while he was playing his guitar

Ho meherbani jo dil de zubaani
Keh de wo jo na kabhi kaha hai

Manik stood up and kept his guitar nd start singing
Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu
Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu..

He looked in her eyes like he was saying this to her

Milte rahe jo aise hi dono
Lag na jaaye ishq ki nazar
Aye dil farebi, tham sa gaya kyun
Aisi waisi baat soch kar

Nandani continued and she came towards manik cupped his cheeks with one hand

Bas mein na mere ab ye raha hai
Tujh pe aake dil ye jo ruka hai

Manik too put his hands on nandani's cheeks and cupped her face

Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu
Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu
Jaise Mera Tu..
Aye.. oo.. ee..
Na na.. yea..

He moved back and twirled her around ...

(Mehar.. mehar.. meherbani ho)

They kept singing while manik pushed nandani towards him and she landed on his chest

Fariyad karti phir yaad karti
Sochti hoon tumko baar baar
Na chahatein hain, par chaahte kyun
Tumko yunhi mere aas paas

She sang while looking in his eyes as she is singing for him with all the love...

Kuch bhi nahi hai
Kuch phir bhi hai
Tumse milke dil ko ye laga hai

Manik sang and nodded his forhead they were looking perfect

Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu
Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Hoo hoo.. (jaise mera tu)
Meher.. meher.. meherbaniyan
Jaise mera tu..
Jaise mera tu!

They both end up the song while manik and nandani were resting there forheads together but the clap of audience broke there trance

They both blushed and thanked them ...

Rest of the couples also performed ...

After performances they were so happy, feeling proud on themselves and after that host came on stage and announced

4th- dhrulya

3rd-mukshad

2nd-cavya

1st-mAnan

And nandani started jumping and she hugged manik very tightly and said

N- manik we won

M- ya nandu we won

Someone was burning seeing them together

Nd then they all hugged eachother exchanging there congratulations

After tht manik took nandani aside and said nandani mere paas ek surprise hai ?

N-yaa manik

M- nandu surprise kaise bta skta hu u have to wait

N- manik tumhe pta hai naa mujhse wait nhi hota

M- nandu chalo ab everyone must be waiting

He dragged nandu towards everyone and said guys nandani ki chachi ka call aaya hai she is calling her home, toh mai isse drop karke ghar chale jaunga

Dhruv- itni jaldi we have too celebrate

Manik- i have planned a party kal shaam ko mere ghar so we all will celebrate

All said yes but cabir understood what he meant

And hugged him nd come close to his ear

Cabir- salle mai samjh gya tu chahta h

Manik was stunned by seeing cabir as how he got to know abt my surprise for nandu

And he moved back said thanks bhai u r the best

Cabir- chalo jao bhi chachi must be waiting

And they were in car

N- hum kaha jaa rhe hai

M- nandu i said naa suprise hai

N- made a sad face

M-bas trust me ...

N-always ...

They shared eye lock, after a while they reached

Spoiler alert : manan will be able to handle the coming storm in there lives ?

Pls guys dont kill me for the precap but i m telling its gonna be the best also and worst also be ready ...

Pls guys do comment i want loads of comments buddy me if u wanted pm

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Manishadevnani

@Manishadevnani

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Res

Tb tk unres nai krungi jab tk manan saath nai ho jaate h officially wo b sabke saamne...

Edited by Manishadevnani - 9 years ago

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad that manan won...waiting to see what the surprise is...

what storm is coming their way...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

kabeer knows manik inside out

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

hii guys many of you are reading the ss but i dont think you all are liking, rarely 4 to 5 comments like srsly. If u will not comment how will i get to know that you all are liking the story. I M SORRY but i think i should not continue this story on india tv forums

Thank you all for giving your precious time in this trash story