Manan ss - fireflies and stars are manan| PART-15ON PG-14

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: thamannamanan
nice update

next part on pg-9

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

nice ...

kitne eye locks the counting miss hogaie .
its good ...

cont ..

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

awesome update...

loved it...

manik and nandu are so lost in each other...

wondering when they will become close to each other...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Didiaish

@Didiaish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

It's nice update

But in middle I m confused

I mean feel like miss something in 6 part end they are in college n achanak 7 part start they are in middle road hugging and car stuck I m little confused

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Hii..I read yur all the chapters In one go...n I must sae...the story us good..

N the last update was nice...

Continue soon

Take care😊😊

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Part-8

After having lunch they moved to college then manik stopped the car and said nandani u go first i will come after few minutes

Nandani- but why manik whts the prob going together !

we are friends HAINA!!

Manik-okk (manik pov - pta nhi fab4 kya sochege)

Then they moved together in the class and all eyes were on manan'' Navya and fab 4 was also shocked to see them together, manik moved to fab 4 and nandani to navya and they were sitting in same row

Sir came to the class and he introduces nandani as she was new

After he said as guys friendships day is coming so i thought of something new ...

He made partners!

Manan

Mukshad

Cavya

dhrulya

Others...

Sir to all students

Guys i hv made partners so i m giving u one week and u all have to prepare song together...

Manan were very happy and mukti was very angry,alya and dhruv were fine being patners, cabir was thinking tht how he gonna mange wid navya!

The class ended and manan decided to practice at manik's house and nandani informed chachi tht she will come at 8:00pm as she will practice ... They moved in manik's car while sitting nandu said manik

Nandani- Ab firse car toh kharab nhi hogi?

Manik- woh actually kal tum first tym aayi thi toh car ko toh tumeh welcome karna hi tha

Nandani- ohh toh mujhe nhi pta tha aise wc! hota hai manik- he passes an evilish smirk

nandani pov- ab pta nhi kya chal rha hai iske evilish mind mai (manan were totally behaving like 8 yrs old couple in only 2 din woh ek dusre ko itne achhe se janne lag gaye )

They finally reached manik's house and nandu was mesmerized seeing the beauty of his house ...

then manik asked her to move in the practice room ( he was having the music room where he only practices wid fab-5)

Nandani nodded and moved manik called ramu kaka to bring some juice and snacks ,he also moved to music room where nandu was seeing the pics of manik and fab 5 manik was seeing nandani smiling ,his also lips curved in sweet smile

Nandani saw manik and asked her tht

U r very close to yr friends naa?

manik- yes i am , they are always there for me in my bad and good times

Nandani prayed frm his ayiappa tht may there friendahip be like this for thousand yrs!

Ramu kaka brought snacks and juice and kept on table ,moved towards kitchen

Then they had snacks and remembered tht they hv to practice for song

So they started thinking the composition

after tht they started practicing

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

sorry for the late update

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

nice update ..

thoda chota hai ..
plzz update quite long .
its intresting..
cont soon..

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Part-9

It was 9:30 they dont know ki kab itna tym ho gya, they both were lost in music!

Suddenly manik realized tht nandu have to leave for home as chachi will be worried!

So the decided to wind up.

Nandani- OMG manik ! (while nandu was opening the door)

manik- what happened (he was taking car keys )

Nandani- manik see kitna sara PANI is filled overhere .'' Manik- yes nandu how i will able to drive !

Nandani- yes, manik its not safe for us to drive (nandu decided to call chachi )

before nandu could speak something

chachi- nandu tum wahi rehna manik ke ghar pe roads are filled wid water

Nandani- ok chachi as u say but...

chachi- but wut kuch bhi nhi tum wahi raho aur haan manik usse phone doh!

Manik- haan chachi

chachi- beta tum pls nandu ka khyaal rakhna !

before chachi could say anything

manik- han chachi nandu will be fine aap tension mat lena, i am dere for her

chachi -ok bachha ab mujhe koi tension nhi... aur suno khana kha lena dono

manik- ok chachi bye!

Nandani -manik kya hua chachi ne kya kaha aur ...

manik kept the finger on her lips!

manik- shhh!ab shatabdi express ki tarah tum bhi strt mat ho jaana!

manan eye contact '' suddenly windows started moving and making noise!

they came back in real world !

manik asked nandani tht is she feeling hungry she said yes !

Manik- so wht u want to eat?

Nandani and manik both together say WHITE SAUCE PASTA WITH EXTRA CHEESE!

then they again say both together

- tum bhi ?

then they started loud manik ordered the pasta !

Nandani was feeling bored

Nandani- manik yaar i m feeling bored!

manik - nandu! hmm ok lets talk!

nandani- nhi i want to play!

manik- what kya khelna hai ?

nandani- ummm! yaar manik doh jano mai kya dekhenge!

manik- hmm achha ek idea !!! lets watch movie! nandani- hmm chalo hum romantic movie dekhte hai !

manik- nhi yaar i want to watch advantures!

nandani- no manik!

manik - hum adventures hi dekhenge

nandani - manik mai tumhari guest hu naa!

manik- tabhi toh mai keh taha hu adv. dekhte hai!

nandani - no and took remote from his hand he was checking setting

manik- nandani she ran,manik ran behind her they ran almost full house , then nandani stand on bed and raise her hand which was having remote so tht manik cannot take tht manik jumped a little and he was not able tonrake so he picked nandu and put her on the floor ,nandani ran but before sh could manik has already held her hand and he pushes nandani towards him and nandani's back was touching manik' s chest and they can feel there breathe nad they both were lookin continously lookingnin there house !! servant- yr pasta has came sir

manan no response lost in eachother

then servant manik sir ur order !

manik- then came out of his nandani world and said huuh! ohh haan tanle pe rakhh doh befote servant could she said to servant tht bring pasta in manik's room

and they ate dinner!

i hope u all liking ...

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Part-10

After eating dinner!!

manik- nandani u can sleep in guest room

nandani- ok but where is guest room?

manik- infront of my room (nandani pov- aayiappa thank u so much warna patnhi mai kaise sohti)

nandani was going towards guest room but suddenly light chali gyi!!! nandani- manik mujhe andhere se bahaut darr lagta hai

and hugged him tight

and background music- nazar laye naa''

they dont even ki unhe hug karte hue kitni der ho gyi after some tym they listened a knock on door and they come back in real world

servant- sir light chali gyi hai nd inverter is not working

( and he gave candle to him)

nandani - manik kya kare!? mujhe darr lag raha hai

manik- dont worry nandani ... mai hu naa!

nandani holds manik hand tightly ( Guess what? ab kya hoga?)

nandani and manik were sitting on floor and nandani was holding manik's hand tightly

suddenly she heard a voice

chi chi and he widened his eyes !

and start screaming \running here n dere

manik- kya hua nandani

nandani- ratt!! manik- nandani calm down!

nandani running here there

then manik picked nandani in hwr arms and said

shh!! nandani!! nandani stopped screaming!

nandani was in her arms and said

nandani- manik tum ho gye hoge! mujhe uttar doh i m fine

manik- (looking in his eyes) mai tumhe uthate-uthate kabhi thak nhi sakta .

nandani blushes

after tht arm picking session of manik !!

manik put nandani on bed and tell her to sleep

nandani- manik pls matt jao mujhe andhere se darr lagta hai

manik- ok but mujhe neend aa rhi hai

nandani- manik tum mere saath so jayo,mere paas ek idea hai

manik- ok

nandani took cushions and make wall between them

nandani - ab so jayo ! they both slept but ( aisa kaisenho sakta hai ki manan on one bed kuch na ho)

manik forget to told nandani ki woh raat mai bahaut legs chalata hai and he start moving his legs and hands !

and slowly nandani started coiling in his arms and manik legs are over her aur hands on her waist

sunrays fall on face of manik and he woke up and saw most prettiest girl in her arms she was looking so pretty ,she was smiling also in her sleep and manik woke up from bed and tell kaka to put breakfast on the table . He moved to take bath

precap- manik in towel

Guys as many were complaining tht it is short so i updated two parts together ...

Pls guys comment ...