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Posted: 10 years ago
Diyaaa... !!!!
sorrry i couldnt read the updates and comment before...had a week long of tough exams :( :( :(
sorryyy..bahottt ghande exams...practical exams... :( :( :(
yet u regularly sent updates...
thank u thank u thank u thank u !!!
now ill start commenting all over again...dont worry...
thank u for the regular PMs yaaar :)

ab se updates that ull send me ill comment...
keep writing...
mujhe abhi sab padhe ne hai...saare tere itne saaare bheje hue updates...fir bahottt saara commenting bhi...
thank u thank u thank u thank u :) :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it so much
Good one
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments ...and sorry kissi ko bhi reply nahi de payi ...I am hell busy guys ...bahot mushkil se likh rahi hu ...lunch time ha naa...to bas itna hi likh payi...please forgive me if u think it's short ...I'll try my level best to give a long update...but I hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛
Part-15
Manan are laying on the bed ...nandani was playing with manik's finger ...through manik liked it but he knew she needs rest ...manik said

Manik : Shona please sleep naa ...u need rest

Nandani : Manik please naa am not sleepy

She sit on the bed ...manik too sitted

Manik : Shona please sleep...u had ur tablets so u need rest naa jaan ...Even doc. Said that

Nandani : Manik please

She makes a cute puppy face to which he smiled

Manik : okay so tell me ...kya karna ha mere baby ko

Nandani thinks for a while and excitedly said : I want to go out

Manik horrifiedly said : what?No shona we are not going anywhere ...look at the time ...its 1:00a.m ...please understand shona

Nandani : No I wanna go out ...am feeling so suffocated over here ...please naa Manik chalo naa

Manik : dekho shona

Nandani cutely said : Please naa jaan

Looking at her cute face...how manik said no to her

Manik : okay

Nandani : yeah...Thank you sooO much Manik

She hugged him and kissed on his cheek...manik smiled looking at her childish behavior and said

Manik : arre meri baat toh puri sunlo

Nandani confusingly said : Matlab

Manik : Matlab yeh ki hum garden main jaayenge kahi bahar nahi

Nandani : Manik that's not fair

Manik : well everything is fair in love and war ...aur tumne hi kaha tha naa ...u wanna go out ...so we are going out ...but in garden

Nandani irritatingly said : Manik

Manik : Please

Nandani : huh...okay fine

She is about to move out from the bed but manik holds her hand and said

Manik : kaha jaa rahi ho tum

Nandani : Mr. Malhotra let me tell you ...u just said we are going in the garden

Manik : well mrs. Malhotra aapko chalne ki permission kisne di

He kissed her cheeks and his hands were on her waist ...to bring her closer ...she bitted her lower lip to control her blush

Nandani : Manik please

Manik : Please what nandani

He caresses her neck...and gives some wet kisses...and looked at her ...who was trying hard to control her blush

Manik smiled : okay ...okay chalo

He picked her up in his arms ...and went towards the garden ...He reached in the garden and make her sit in the chair and saw nandani who looked annoyed

Manik : Shona kya hua?

But she didn't said anything

Manik : Shona please naa tell me kya baat ha

She folds her arms around her chest and said

Nandani : am angry?

Manik smiled at her cuteness

Manik : Angry but why?

Nandani : kyunki tum mujhe bahar nahi leke gaye

Manik : ohh toh yeh baat ha ...toh meri baby mujhse naraz ha

She nodded her head as yes

Manik : achha toh matlab ab mujhse baat bhi nahi karogi

She nodded his head as no

Manik : okay

He goes from there and nandani looked at him confusingly

Nandani pov :
Arre yeh kaha chala gaya...kahi jyada toh nahi ho gaya ...nandu tu bhi naa sahi kehta ha Cabir bhai ...kabhi kabhi main sach main bacho jaise behave karti hu ...

Nandani : Manik ...Manik kaha ho tum ...Manik

Suddenly a second of guitar came...she smiled as she knew who is playing

Lamhe vele lamhe , vele pal yeh
Idhar -udhar tahel rahe

(He looked at her...and makes a puppy face ...she smiled ...looking at her smile ...he too smile)

Sahme sehme dil bhi
Keh rahe hain bina tere

(She looked at him ...and winked to which he smiled)

Mar jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian, tere bin mar jayian re


(He holds her hands as if trying to say ...if you go away from me ...I will die...his eyes were filled with tears)


Dil mein koi rag yun
Dhadakti hai, ki jaise bijli si daude
Saansein teri Saansein
Jalaati hai bina tere
Mar jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian, tere bin mar jayian re


( She cupped his face and wipes his tears...and kissed them ...he smiled and sang )

Girhon ko suljhao, tere bin kya o
Bata mujhe, bata mujhe
Girhon ko suljhao , tere bin kya jeena
Aa bhi jaa, aa bhi jaa, aa bhi jaa
Aa bhi jaa, aa bhi jaa

(He smiled looking at her smiling face ...and saw she is feeling sleepy)

Lamhe vele lamhe, vele pal ye
Idhar-udhar tahel rahe

Sehme sehme dil bhi
Keh rahe hain, bina tere

( He picked her up in his arms and went towards thrre room and gently placed her in the bed)

Mar jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian, tere bin mar jayian re


He lay beside her ...and cuddled her...she placed jer hand on his chest...he placed his hands on her waist and kissed his hairs ...she smiled

Nandani : Good night manik

Manik : Good night shona...I love u❤️

She smiled and kissed on his heart:I love you more jaan❤️





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Keep loving
Keep smiling
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Keep shining For Ur loved ones❤️
Love
Diya😛😛😛



Edited by diyaNarwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very cute update...
Loved it...
waiting for next Update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww superb update Dr...
Manan was so cute..
Continue soon dr.
Always stay blessed nd happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
niceee update. ..

manan was sooo cute adorable. ..

such a beautiful couple. .


thanksss for this beautiful update..


waiting for next update eagerly impatiently.

update soon




itsss a niceee update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Diyu
Update was very nice
Aaj sacchi baarish honge... Coz no dramas and no shocking news... Aaj glucose ki zaroorat nahi hua to over come from the shock which you always give...so peaceful update...missed cabir's leg pulling in this update... Manan were as usual cuteness overloaded... Continue whenever you're free... Pls take care don't stress too much... It may affect on your health
Stay blessed baby
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update was soo cute...
It was amazing...
Keep it up...
Bye tc stay blessed😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Good one
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Diya...
Update was amazing... lovely...
Full of manan... their convo ... romance... awesome...
I like this cute update...
Thanks for the update...
Keep it up ...
Take care ...
Keep smiling...
See u soon...
Lots of love...

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