Manan SS - Soulmates ( second thread link on page 148)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys Am diya
I wanted to write
Something ...so
Here am I

Prologue:
A guy is sitting on the hospital bench and crying like hell...he is so lost
in his thoughts he didn't realize someone is patted on his shoulder...he looks at the guy
Cabir:manik sab thik ho jayega
she will be fine soon
Manik:its all my mistake cabir aaj
Voh jis halat main ha...its all my fault
agar main use sab sach bata deta toh... shayad esa nahi hota
Cabir:its not ur fault ...u r just trying to protect her...Please understand manik
Manik:No cabir agar aaj use kuch ho gaya toh main apne aapko kabhi maaf
nahi kar pauga
Cabir :use kuch nahi hoga manik she is our angle ...she is ur shining star
use kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta
Manik:Cabir Vo mujhe marna chahta tha
Par nandani beech main aa gayi...he was stammeringand crying...use kuch hoga toh nahi cabIr
And cabir is helplessly looking at him and trying to console him
Just then doctor came
Manik:doc how is she...he looses his control and grabbed doctor's coller and ask him tell me god damit HOW'S MY WIFE...


so how's it ... I knew am not a
good writer But I'll try
this is my first time
so please let me know
how it is...hmm a lot of
questions in ur head as
what happen to nandani?
why she is in hospital?
why manik blamed himself for everything?
if u want to knew
just be with it ...Stay tuned...


INDEX:

Part1=Page4
Part2 ( A)=Page10
Part2 ( B)=Page13
Part3=Page17
Part 4=Page23
Part 5=Page29
Part 6=Page35
Part 7=Page39
Part 8=Page49
Part 9=Page58
Part 10 (A ) =Page63
Part10 (b)= Page 64
Part 11 (a)=Page75
Part - 11 ( b ) = Page 81
Part - 12=Page89
Part - 13=Page96
Part - 14 ( A ) =Page105
Part - 14 ( B)=Page110
Part - 14 (C)=Page111
Part - 15=Page116
Part - 16 (A)=Page120
Part - 16 (B)=Page124
Part - 16 ( C )=Page130
Part - 17 (A)=Page137
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diyaNarwal thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: 198765

xcited for d update...nc cncpt

Thank you
Dear I'll try to
update soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice prologue.
waiting for Chapter...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow amazing prologue...
loved it...
continue soon...
maybe someone wanted to get rid of manik so they can have nandu...
please don't let nandu die...
keep up the good work and update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel_manan

Very nice prologue.
waiting for Chapter...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm...

Welcome dear
I'll update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

wow amazing prologue...

loved it...
continue soon...
maybe someone wanted to get rid of manik so they can have nandu...
please don't let nandu die...
keep up the good work and update soon...

Thank you
Dear and don't worry
I will update soon
And u will get ur answers
Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww... Interesting... .
Do Continue sooon
diyaNarwal thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nitisharma

Woww... Interesting... .
Do Continue sooon

Thank you
Dear I'll
try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Thank you SooO much
Guys for lovely
Comments
As it's my first
time it really means
a lot ...And about
Update I will try to
Update soon😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: shaanmaan

Its interesting
continue soon

Thank you Dear
I'll update soon😛😛😛

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