MaNan FF- Bleeding Heart- Thread2Pg146/ Chapter16 Page139 (03/04/16)

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#791

its really shocking karan is not there now

he is dead

varsha kileed him

Aditya is alive

karan was getting that feeling something bad was gonna happen

but

this was going to happen

never expected

karan already send that video to nandini s mail

but when she is gonna check that

she is completely lost now

manik how on earth r u going to find out wht happened to karan

n who took away Aditya n nandini from ur life

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88RUPALI

@88RUPALI

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#792

awesome update

emotional too

i am mum after reading. dont no how to react.

i wanted manan together but not expecting karan's death

waiting for next update

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#793

So shckin n emotional update yaar..

Read all prts of ur stry in a go..

It was fabulous .. No wrdz 2 say dear...

U penned d stry damn perfectly...

I lvd d character of karan vry much...

He ws d only supprt 4 nandu in her bad phase...

Varsha s such a bitch... Usi ki vajase kitne lifes barbaad hogya??

Manan ka... Adithya ka..

Really hpy 2 knw adhitya s alive...

Pakka vo varsha ne hi kiya hoga.

Karan ne sb kuch sun liya hoga varsha ki baad...

Varsha shud hv badly punished.. Ab manik usse chodenge nhi.

Nandi s broken... Karan's last wish s nandu 2 marry manik...

Really emotional n heartwrenchin update dear...

U depicted d emotions n feelings of all charactwrs perfectly...

No wrdz 2 say dear... It s as suprv n fantastic as ur earlier stry of manan.. U r awesum dear.. Do continue yaar...

Waitin 4 d update yaar...

Pls pm me also...

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Tasniya09

@Tasniya09

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#794

I was crying like hell... I want to kill that bloody varsha... how dear she...???? I don't knw what to say... nw finally manan'll be together

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Cooki

@Cooki

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#795

It's really heartbreaking..
Nandini is losing her dear ones...
Aditya is alive..
That's a shocker...
How can a woman stoop so low!??
Varsha is making me wonder about that!
Karan's last wish..
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon
Looking forward to read further parts

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alind713

@alind713

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#796

Waiting for the next part...

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gazal.lubna

@gazal.lubna

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#797

Ok so in the start I was like too much karan nandini romance because I am a manan fan so I cant digest nandini or manik with any other boy or girl

But in the last when things got changed suddenly I was shockingly hurt to see karan dying

I felt like crying on karan's dialogues

I can feel the depth

You have written it very well

And when I said I really mean it because in last I forgot about manan and was only thinking about karan and nandini and their baby

Hats off really you made me cry :(

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Avneet kaur

@avneetkaur28

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#798

Ohh damn...

What a twist...

I soo loved karans character...

I'll miss him...

N Jate Jate bhi he helped Manan by sending d audio recording to nandinis account...

N I m soo hating varsha yaar... I feel like killing her...

Waiting for d next update...

Stay blessed...

Stay happy...

Keep smiling...

Keep writing...

Continue soon...

AVNEET... (AVI...)

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twenkling

@twenkling

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#799

beautiful update with a lot of unexpected things...
karan is dead, aditiya is alive...
omg! varsha is such a bi*** girl...
she did a lot of crime...
though, its true that i never liked karan at all in this story...
in fact, i always commented bad about karan in every chapter...
in this chapter, i really felt bad for him...
i seriously doesn't expect this thing like that...
what will happen now???
continue soon...
and sis, i m really sry for my previos comments...
i didn't mean to hurt u but cant help it...
stay blessed...

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#800

Hello guys,

Thanks for the response, I am loving the splendid comments, this means a lot. You guys floored me, specially seeing the same pain reflecting in your words for my KARAN. I miss the character I created.

Once again, for those who are with me always or who have recently joined, thanks a lottts guys.

PS: I have done the needed edits, if any more errors please let me know.

I hope more people join us on this adventure and please, it is a hearty request, please promote the FF, by sharing the link, to your friends and people around (The direct Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4461839/manan-ff-bleeding-heart-thread2pg146-chapter16-page139-03-04-16)

I will update the next chapter today, hopefully.

Keep loving my work. Please send in comments and do like, as it means a lot to me. For a writer, your guys comments are their feed, so don't forget about the feedback my superb MaNan lovers <3

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Loads of love<333

Kashish