Hi,That was outstandingly and amazingly narrated... i mean you won my heart with your words... Fantastic pace, heart wrenching emotions were described from your heart... The pain, the suffering and the vulnerable state a person goes through was depicted in the most earnest way possible... Its been a long time i haven't read such impeccable work on forum...
I still have the effect of your words on my mind coz you made me go through every emotion from pain, suffering, that little hope we have in our life, death, the agony that comes with it... how relatives suffer after the demise of a person... everything was described with so much finesse and sensitivity...
I am feeling speechless right now and dear, i bow down in front of you and i have no qualms in accepting that you are a fine writer and i salute you for it.
Its one the most phenomenal depiction of emotions i have seen by a writer here on forum... i specially liked the scene where you depicted the illusions of Manik... People do get them... A week back i was sleeping till late in morning and what i saw give me goosebumps even now... I am single and i saw the face of my daughter and that was like a shock to me coz i saw a complete realm of events.. I still think how did that happen...
I feel i have to learn so much from you as a writer and trust me you taught me a lot by your work...What do i say, i just feel so happy that i am your reader and i'll be there with you on this journey...
Take care.
Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago
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