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Hey there a hearty congratulations on your story which expressional, romantic, pain ,hate, love ,life in short paisa vasool story sorry toda filmy hogaya...but seriously read ur story in one go n I was crying n anything in d middle of night.. U have penned it so so so beautiful .. In d starting I was really not liking seeing manan with others I litterly stopped reading after 3/4 chap n fen in d night I just thought of give it a try as to y would u like to pair dem with other as ky2 fans r head over heels in love with manan.. But den after reading it I was boweld out of words seriously .. F way u have penned it each n every chap n creating curiosity to know d exact reason of d betrayal n I was hating manik for not trusting nandini but eventually u showed d reason perfectly n karans character was beautifully penned.. Seriously d way u penned der pian was really heart wrenching. N I had a feeling dat adi was alive n manik will find him n he will b happy with him leaving nandini to karan, but u gave a very interesting twist liking it dho feel bad for karan but manan r for hamesha n forever ..
