Manan ss - Our story ardent yet painful Last Part pg 16

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

awesome update...

loved the ending...

its quiet understandable that memory loss patients most of them never regain their memories...

loved it and can't wait for your new story...

thanks for not making aliya the girlfriend in the new story...

do add an epilogue of possible...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Edited by sharon.babu - 10 years ago

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Prashi26

@Prashi26

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

the update was nice!😊

i love the way you kept the seriousness of the fact of memory loss!

it was a touchy and beautifully penned down!

you write very good!😃

do write more soon!

and please write an epilogue!

pm me if possible!

prashi

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gagan1deep

@gagan1deep

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Thanxx dear for the pm..
Nd ur story is jst awsm... U put emotions very well.. Thnxx
Plzz keep weiting lk this..

Keep smiling.. LoL

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ruchi116

@ruchi116

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Wow nice update happy ending n pls give epilogue of their happy family with their second child

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Your story define the name. ..very painfully beautiful. Like the idea very much. Read in one go. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story. ..and definitely waiting for your other stories do continues. ..Thanks.

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riya4smartgirl

@riya4smartgirl

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Wow!!
Nice ending!!!👏👏👏
and yes it would be cherry on the top if u gave us an epilogue!😛😛😛😛😛

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suraiya77

@suraiya77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Mindblowing
finally they are together
I expected Manik to get back his memory
but it's ok
yup! plz give an epilogue

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

nyc ending

finally manan r back

hey jst gve eplouge

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

For Manan eyes always do the talking! I loved this SS and it was so realistic. Please give us an epilogue. Manik falling again for his Nandu is so romantic once you think about it.😳