Manan ss - Our story ardent yet painful Last Part pg 16 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Prashi26

the update was nice!😊

i love the way you kept the seriousness of the fact of memory loss!

it was a touchy and beautifully penned down!

you write very good!😃

do write more soon!

and please write an epilogue!

pm me if possible!

prashi

am very happy that my readers understood what I tried to convey. Thank u so much dear. Wil pm u surely

Originally posted by: gagan1deep

Thanxx dear for the pm..
Nd ur story is jst awsm... U put emotions very well.. Thnxx
Plzz keep weiting lk this..

Keep smiling.. LoL

thanks for the compliment. Thanks for liking my story

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Wow nice update happy ending n pls give epilogue of their happy family with their second child

thanks a lot dear. Wil try to come up with this soon

Epiogue please.!
It would be an icing on the cake .

Manan in your story as so cute and genuine. :)

Great job
Keep it up
All the best of luck for furthur.!

PM me please for your OS and epilogue as well(hopefully)...!

Ok
Thank you
Bye :)


Love-
Luck :)

Originally posted by: lakshita03

Epiogue please.!
It would be an icing on the cake .

Manan in your story as so cute and genuine. :)

Great job
Keep it up
All the best of luck for furthur.!

PM me please for your OS and epilogue as well(hopefully)...!

Ok
Thank you
Bye :)


Love-
Luck :)

Thank u so much dear. Will try to come up with epilogue soon.

looking forward the read :)

It was an awesome ss dear..

nyc story
do continue writing such stories

Very well written dear ...:) loved it ...there was every emotion in dis story ..u showed the reality u know how bcoz...honestly speaking I loved the end coz tht was supposed to be its life & this is facet ...like kal ko u suffer with such memory loss incident u cannot all of a sudden remember each & everything like some ekta kapoor serial by seeing tht person fully gross 😆 ...bt yes we can't deny the fact our heart makes us believe jst by looking in those eyes ..those features ...& some wonderful may b blurry bt still tht some1's memory & says ki yes this person was ...is ..& will b the 1 of me & for me forever ...in MANAN's lang HAMESHA ...every end is nt supposed to b over all happy ending definitely life needs 1 ...bt as they say every end is a new beginning ...& this is where they are willing to LIVE again ...Thanks u so much for providing this story looking forward for many more ...Keep writing coz u will do it the best in any manner ...:)