2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 70

Originally posted by: mini_manan

Beautiful..seedhe dil ko chu gya..
Comedy ni tha but indeed best tha..
Nandini take his blame on her..actually not his...
usne actually apne vows ko nibhaya..uske liya bahut bura lag raha tha..being innocent use torture jhelna pada but manik ke hote hue koi kaise nandini ke upar aakh utha sakta ha...
Finally manik ne nandini ko innocent prove kar hi diya..
Nandini's word make him realise his sin..
He is feeling suffocated..
But he also know that where he will get his solace..that was beyonsld words..
Their little but more than little romance was damm hott..
Stupid mukti wrong timing..
Loved it.
Please cont soon..
LOVE,
MINI

thank u more romance is on the way wait for the next update probably i will update tommorrow coz more than half part is ready but little work is still pending so i will try to update tommorrow

Originally posted by: Nidhibansod

hey ashna,plz next update soon dear,its realy difficult to wait yar...n one mpre thing u r awesome writter..i mean kaise kar leti ho yar,etni badhiya story.. i always read n i was like wowww this girl is toh definatly superb,u r writting is so jabardast yar..i am loving it...
take care,stay blessd..
lots of love
nidhi

thank u dear i will update tommorrow coz more than a half part is ready so i will try to update tommorrow for sure

Hy guys i have good news for you all i will update today first i thought to update on thursday but more than half part is ready only 2 3 scenes are remain so today update is on
And pm is on i will pm u for sure everything is sore out now
Guys i want to suggest you one thing plz download one song for me aur ho song from rockstar

Meri bebasi ka bayaan hai, bas chal
raha na is ghadi
Ras hasrat ka nichod doon, kas
baahon mein aa tod doon
Chaahoon kya jaano na , cheen loon
chod doon
Is lamhe kya kar jaoon, Is lamhe kya
kar jaaon
Is lamhe kya kar doon main jo mujhe
chain mile araam mile"""

Here is the some lyrics of this story you really need this in today's update if you wants to feel the passion hope you will download this song
So how was my good news

Yippeee... Am so so happy

Update !!!
Waiting ...
One oe my fvrt song ...dwnld ke jarurat hi nehi hai... 😉
Wait avi sunti hu... update soon ... 😊

Originally posted by: shindesweety

Waiting
song which movie

song is from rockstar

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

ya no Doubt she is my inspiration but i not going to put devil's on hold when parth left i never wished to discontinue this story coz there is a place in my heart for devil's i wrote this story coz i luv writting more than manan i wanted to express my self infront of all so i m here wid devil's or i have discussed about it to aqsa but she said no readers ki kya galti why to punish thm now if i will put this story on hold tht to when you all are connected wid my story so much nope i will write for my wifey as u said she must be feeling proud on me you know i showed your comment to her she was on cloud 9 aftr reading your comment anyways as i said earier i can a essay on her but its not the time lol
And heartly thank u for understanding my feelings and thursday is going to be the update day i will update i m having a suprise for you all wait for it

Aashu i hope I didn't hurt your feelings by suggesting you to put story on hold
If its I'm really sorry kaan pakarke
Hehehe i would love to read not only essay if you write epic also na about aqsa aka your wifey i dont mind..in fact I'll be more than happy
About your good news... That song its conveying some sad thing about to happen...
Hame rulaane ka iraadha toh nahi hai na aapka
Fingers crossed...
I'll be waiting for update
Take care stay blessed and take good care of your wifey too I'm missing her story elevator

I am very happy...i will sure dowanload the song...excited for todays update..

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Hy guys i have good news for you all i will update today first i thought to update on thursday but more than half part is ready only 2 3 scenes are remain so today update is on
And pm is on i will pm u for sure everything is sore out now
Guys i want to suggest you one thing plz download one song for me aur ho song from rockstar

Meri bebasi ka bayaan hai, bas chal
raha na is ghadi
Ras hasrat ka nichod doon, kas
baahon mein aa tod doon
Chaahoon kya jaano na , cheen loon
chod doon
Is lamhe kya kar jaoon, Is lamhe kya
kar jaaon
Is lamhe kya kar doon main jo mujhe
chain mile araam mile"""

Here is the some lyrics of this story you really need this in today's update if you wants to feel the passion hope you will download this song
So how was my good news