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wow superb update dea...

Hey I Started Your Story On Last Friday & As Today I Ended With Your Part 27 What Should I Say You Are Amazing Writer You Write So Well!! There Is Everthing In Your Story Suspence,Comedy,Humor,Romance & Many More... Your Story Is Total A Roller Coaster Ride 😆 You Worked Really Hard 👍🏼 Your Story Is Best.Thanks For Writing Such Lovely Story Which Brings Smiles On Our Faces After Reading It Every Part Is Penned So Well.Waiting For Next Update. 😊
Stay Blessed 😉

Originally posted by: M_R3

Hey I Started Your Story On Last Friday & As Today I Ended With Your Part 27 What Should I Say You Are Amazing Writer You Write So Well!! There Is Everthing In Your Story Suspence,Comedy,Humor,Romance & Many More... Your Story Is Total A Roller Coaster Ride 😆 You Worked Really Hard 👍🏼 Your Story Is Best.Thanks For Writing Such Lovely Story Which Brings Smiles On Our Faces After Reading It Every Part Is Penned So Well.Waiting For Next Update. 😊
Stay Blessed 😉

wohhoo again got a new reader thanks for liking my story ya devil is indeed a roller coaster ride and there is so many emotions are still left i will show u them for sure wait fr the next if u want pm buddy me and thanks fr the cmnt

Originally posted by: sssinha

u r awesome...ur story is awesome...plz update soon

i will update on thursday for sure

hey ashna,plz next update soon dear,its realy difficult to wait yar...n one mpre thing u r awesome writter..i mean kaise kar leti ho yar,etni badhiya story.. i always read n i was like wowww this girl is toh definatly superb,u r writting is so jabardast yar..i am loving it...
take care,stay blessd..
lots of love
nidhi

Its been 5 days v r waiting for ur story plz update new part plzzz

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Yeah same here whatever i feel i penned it down and about the update i will add devil's touch in this update its gonna be rock for sure i want this part to knock in your senses i hope i will get success in this anyways thursday is going to be update day for sure i promise

now monster manik will change into nandani's manik

Beautiful..seedhe dil ko chu gya..
Comedy ni tha but indeed best tha..
Nandini take his blame on her..actually not his...
usne actually apne vows ko nibhaya..uske liya bahut bura lag raha tha..being innocent use torture jhelna pada but manik ke hote hue koi kaise nandini ke upar aakh utha sakta ha...
Finally manik ne nandini ko innocent prove kar hi diya..
Nandini's word make him realise his sin..
He is feeling suffocated..
But he also know that where he will get his solace..that was beyonsld words..
Their little but more than little romance was damm hott..
Stupid mukti wrong timing..
Loved it.
Please cont soon..
LOVE,
MINI