2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 25

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

i know m very late in commenting...sorry sorry sorry...

u can kill me for it...😆

but awesome amazing superb update...

like seriously how do you manage to write such amazing update...

when i imagine manik and nandini i feel so nice reading it...

theirb friendship...😆'Bass baahe phailao aur battees daant dikhakr bolo ...swaagat nahi karoge aap humara' likie seriously ... from where you get such hilarious lines...😆

manik and uska gussa attitude and nandu and uske ayiaapa...😆

so manik is dependent on nandu and their cute fights with eye lock.. awww...😳

manik is sad and nandu trying to cheer up... with pjs...😆

all the pjs were awesome...🤣👏

seriously ek se badkar ek pj the...

and manik reaction on top of it was cherry on the cake with nandu reaction was choco chips on the cake...😉😆

cabir surprised to see manik aughing...

waise anybody would be surprise to see khadus monster laughing whole heartedly..

😆😆😆

cabir ne hamare monster ko jala hi diya buri terha..😆

and his instatnt reaction holding nandu by waist in front oh him...😆😆

manik nandu se dinner ke liye ask kar raha tha ya order de raha tha.. ufff monster...😆

and then he shifted that employee from office...uff so jealous...

keep up the good work...😊

nandu waiting for dinner and manik late...

and then he was just normal while nandu steaming in anger...😆

such cute dinner time of pizza nandu fav and his apologizing...👏mind blowing dear...

waiting for more fun... and drama...

well i was waiting for your comment tumhare comment ke bina ab aisa lgta hai part acha nh likha mene hehehe well such lovely reader u r thank u fr this and next update will be more hillarious fr u i promise wait for it 😉

Ohk i wanted to ask you something in next update i want to bring smurfy back and whole update will be hillarious for you coz i want to dedicate this to my little hero but it will be last update of smurfy coz now there is no place of humour in my story i want to bring romance in the story so one last comedy update and this tym i want to give you early update so what u want are you ok wid this hillarious update or should i directly move to my next update plz let me know what you want

K if u want bring smurfy back...BT from next chapter please man an ka hot and adult wala romance 😳

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

well i was waiting for your comment tumhare comment ke bina ab aisa lgta hai part acha nh likha mene hehehe well such lovely reader u r thank u fr this and next update will be more hillarious fr u i promise wait for it 😉

Hey I jst read u story..

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Ohk i wanted to ask you something in next update i want to bring smurfy back and whole update will be hillarious for you coz i want to dedicate this to my little hero but it will be last update of smurfy coz now there is no place of humour in my story i want to bring romance in the story so one last comedy update and this tym i want to give you early update so what u want are you ok wid this hillarious update or should i directly move to my next update plz let me know what you want

Dil tou kera hei to read ahmm some hot romance per if u want and as u said its gonna be last smurfy scene tou its OK...but on one condition next update should be updated early...jaldee se can't wait to read romanceeede

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Ohh AAshna m waiting for your hilarious update...

and bringing back smurfy...

and i m imagining manik reaction and his past experience...😆🤣

m to abhi se laughing thinking about it...

so m to waiting for it ...

and then you could carry on with your romantic side...

and m really excited to read that too...😊

well done dear...👏

infact your best friend crockomichi if m not wrong...

i really like her purest wala ff too...

its awesome and eagerly wait for it...

you both are amazing...

actually aqsa is my bestie writer of elevator zooni shah or i will update may be today i m in good mood actually so i will try to update

Pllzz next n next to nxt one plzZz update jaldi
requestng
i likd ths one nice
no dinner but pizza
finally sorted sab

Originally posted by: Fati.crisp

Dil tou kera hei to read ahmm some hot romance per if u want and as u said its gonna be last smurfy scene tou its OK...but on one condition next update should be updated early...jaldee se can't wait to read romanceeede

ya only last two updates this one is based on comedy and another one is based on manan masti and fun and thn frm thrd update surely u will get what you want i promise or is wale me b thoda romance hoga but you know about smurfy he is no less than kabir jo hmesha romance me tang adata h 😉