2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 24

Ohhhooo finally cabiraaa is here <3 just love him re...:) ab aaya naa kahani me twist ;) CNT sooon :)

Originally posted by: -abz-

An umazing update !

Jealous Manik is a treat to eyes 🤣

Such a possessive hulk he is !

Ek din mein promotion aurapne biwi se dhoor rakhne ke liye chutti bhi 🤣

Nandu be too cute and such a pure soul to be very kind towards him !!

Loved the chapter ...

continue soon 😳

bich me kisi or fayda ho gya phli bar manik ne kisi ka fayda karaya h lol and yes my nandu is like this brave kind hearted or innocent but not a cry baby thank u fr u r cmnt i will continue

Originally posted by: cmamona

Hey
Update was so much hilarious yr
Wo Jokes wale msgs Wala part na bht Hi awsmstic tha oh god nandani k msgs ne toh hasaa hasa kar stomach ache kar diya
And moreover manik was laughing... Dat was too much and wo b nandani k Jokes pe...
And frndship Wala part b mast tha
And when wo pizza wala scene and sry Wala scene yr
Sooo cute awwwhhh cutties
Chalo manik ko kuch toh realise hua
"LOVE IS IN D AIR"
update soon egarly waiting :)
Thanks for d pm yr...

i read more than 100 jokes for thm i m glad like tht joke part it was most diff part as typ jyda nh kia but research god do din lg gye par chlo mehnat safal hui and ha realise krane ke liye abi bht kuc baki some twists are on the way thank fr the cmnt

Originally posted by: aadhya_cute

awesome awesome awesome👏👏

u described their relationship changes perfectly...wow that's amazing finally manan r friends

haha nandu messages..LOL to make manik angry/happy...soo cute

cabiras nd mukti plan rocks...abh ayega manik in right track😆

haha loved when he claimed her as his wifey infront of that sahil...promotion aise bi milega kya for flirting with others...nice idea😉

OMG finally manik said sorry to nandu😃...nd de dinner date is spoiled😭,,its kk pizza bhi chalega

but aur thoda manan chahiye😉

sorry to say but ye bhi mujhe funny update jaise laga...bcoz manan romance is soo deep😊⭐️

this is one of my fav ff..tqq for pm

well no need for this sorry ye romantic tha b nh it was only based on friendship coz i dont want to take those in hurry little little change sabar ka fal miltha bs two three more updates of this friendship than romance i promise or usme bilkul fun nh hoga its gonna b very intense trust me on this well thnk fr liking my ff so much

Originally posted by: neeharika__

👏

maza aya \the jokes o my god

n that typical wife attitude

whn her husband cam elate n dey wel nt able to go for d dinner

where were u main yahan bhuki bathihoon

n that tambo gadlo

n d end was quite sweet

n manik got so jelous of sahil😆😆😆

hehe my ff is kinda all in typical wife bhi aa gyi usme well i love to make manik jealous if its in his hand he will kick sahil out from the company but to his dismay he cnt widout any reason atleast phli bar kisi fayda bcz of manik malhotra poor soul sahil bch gya phr bhi

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Very good update. ..dear. now dosti time is on...nice. manik was in bad mood but Nandi ke jokes se manik to bechar kya bachta. ..main bhi has has ke pagal ho gi.🤣👍🏼. Comedy was full on. So full mark's for this.😛. Now comes kabir the cupid. .❤️. Ab yeh do no bach ke khin jyainge. Poor sahil. ..manik said. ..oh I didn't notice you. .🤪. Haha. He is such a notanki.😃. And pizza date not that bad. .😳. Now ek bister tak to pahunch gye. ..lagta hai doorian kam hone ko hain😳☺️. Manik is changed so much. I like the way story is going. Very beautiful.👏👏⭐️.all the jokes I heard first time and just loved it. .Thanks for sharing this different kind of love story. Stay blessed.😛

well i read more than 100 jokes for this joke part glad u like thm pheww mehnat safal and for liking my diff love story or ha dooriyaan to cum hone wali bs three parts more than romance is gonna take the place well thnk u fr ur cmnt

Originally posted by: vanivartika

ha ha ha
u know na u r damn good at it

yeah is was funny and some romantic update

I loved it Joke part...sweet Tom n Jerry


She just kept looking at him...he was still laughing


"Naa still not so funny"


"Khadus cnt he just praise me is tarah has to rha jor jor se still he saying not so funny

Huh khadus ...

She thought

thts true he cnt praise her god ego prob well i m glad u love tht joke part it was most diff part manik ko hsane ke liye jokes b to jordr chiye na 😉

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">aawww...it was ssooo cute yrrr...loving the changes in manan's relationship😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">i know there are some problems going to come in their relationship in future as according to the present time's story...but it would be solved soon too😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">plzzz show some moments of present too in between...its a request dear😃</font>

yes some twists are on the way or about the present i will try coz abi bs kuc 10 15 parts baki past hai romance make out thn mystery unfold nothing much but i will to show u some glimps of present well thank u fr the cmnt i m glad u like it

Mindblowing
loved it
Manik can't find anything without her!
Their cute fights are awesome
love them a lot
jealous Manik was worth reading
continue soon

i know m very late in commenting...sorry sorry sorry...