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Sm0405 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
U really made me cry ... U know I love this story becoz it is different ... Very different frm the others ... Bt all the sufferings tht Nandini is going through ... It is really painful ...
The way Manik was behaving ... I know k ye toh bas shuruat hai, bt its going to b difficult ... To read the further chapters ...bt bt bt I'll continue reading till the end .. I jst can't leave this story ... No No No .. Never ...
The last lines of Nandini brought tears in my eyes ... Seriously ...

Was it a dream
I was waiting for him to hold me
and soothe me
but he never came .
There were times when i was so
desperately want to hold
His hand while sleeping
cuz of my fear of darkness,
but his hand never came for
support.
There were times when i was in
pain, that i just wanted
someone to sit closely with me, to
whispered sweet nothings to me or
anything to distract me from pain,
but that support was never there.
Every day, i wanted to share the
minutest details of my day with him
But life wasnt just fair to me,while
distributing happiness.
But i knew i cant blame him
or anybody else for that matter.
I was aware of this at the time of
My marriage itself and still i had
entered in it, but what else i
could have done.

I loved all these lines ... Nd there was tears in my eyes while reading them ... Seriously she is so much in pain matlb idk what will happen nxt ...
Nd then when she said "Manik muje itna bhi hurt mat karo ke tum chaho tab bhi un wounds ko heal na kar pao"
USS waqt mujhe bht bura laga tha Nandini k lie ...
Hmm waiting fr the nxt update ... Plz post sooonnniishh ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey plz plz send me link of thread 3...there is something error ...
😭
Aashna_chawla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manish7kumar7

i read ur story in one day...alll d 30 chap...it's awsomm...intresting fun...
nd abt 3rd thread? ...gv link plz...can't wait to read next chaps


umm u should search it on google actually link isnt working i dont know why well i have updated next chapter in new thread
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sm0405

U really made me cry ... U know I love this story becoz it is different ... Very different frm the others ... Bt all the sufferings tht Nandini is going through ... It is really painful ...

The way Manik was behaving ... I know k ye toh bas shuruat hai, bt its going to b difficult ... To read the further chapters ...bt bt bt I'll continue reading till the end .. I jst can't leave this story ... No No No .. Never ...
The last lines of Nandini brought tears in my eyes ... Seriously ...

Was it a dream
I was waiting for him to hold me
and soothe me
but he never came .
There were times when i was so
desperately want to hold
His hand while sleeping
cuz of my fear of darkness,
but his hand never came for
support.
There were times when i was in
pain, that i just wanted
someone to sit closely with me, to
whispered sweet nothings to me or
anything to distract me from pain,
but that support was never there.
Every day, i wanted to share the
minutest details of my day with him
But life wasnt just fair to me,while
distributing happiness.
But i knew i cant blame him
or anybody else for that matter.
I was aware of this at the time of
My marriage itself and still i had
entered in it, but what else i
could have done.

I loved all these lines ... Nd there was tears in my eyes while reading them ... Seriously she is so much in pain matlb idk what will happen nxt ...
Nd then when she said "Manik muje itna bhi hurt mat karo ke tum chaho tab bhi un wounds ko heal na kar pao"
USS waqt mujhe bht bura laga tha Nandini k lie ...
Hmm waiting fr the nxt update ... Plz post sooonnniishh ...


yeah it just the starting of dark parts and thank you much for this comment and about the next chapter its already updated in new thread or link is not working u should search it on google u will find it there
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Aashna chawla...I've started reading your manan's ff devil's bride..l lv manan...I'm a new user of this forum...believe me now after reading your work i lv urs soo much...i don't know how all this forum works but i tried to contact you this way...i don't know if this is the right way...how can I add u as a friend...please do let me know...I'm new to all these and don't have any idea...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey I came across your story few times..
But when I started reading it seriously I was stuck..
But I am really confused was manik pretending when he was with nandini..
All those lovey dovey moments they shared and when they both agreed they don't want a divorce were all fake???
Pls clear the confusion soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lily18

Hey I came across your story few times..
But when I started reading it seriously I was stuck..
But I am really confused was manik pretending when he was with nandini..
All those lovey dovey moments they shared and when they both agreed they don't want a divorce were all fake???
Pls clear the confusion soon..


there is a mystery behind all this you will came to know about this in future updates i have updated the next part in thread three
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4493950
here is the link if u want you can read this here
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Posted: 9 years ago
To, the writer of Devil's Bride manan ff
Haven't come across anyone who captures a woman's expressions as beautifully and as elegantly as You does.😊
Wow! Such a amazing writer you are. Today I read all your stories in one go. You seems to be
a scripts writer yr. Stay blessed. Keep writing :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congratulations for the new thread!

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