Manan ff- Trip to your heart. part 29 pg 148 17 may pms later' - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
nice update
bt confused abt divorce
revile the past
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
nice ff dear...amazing concept😊👍🏼
continue soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
what nandu is married
hell confused right now
but awesome story
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
I just read this ff n its really nice
But why does nandini drink so much
Naina asked nandino to sign divorce paper...is she married or some kind of legal breakup
Pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
so much confusion ...she is married to whom ...she has hangover ...why her mom is giving her paper to sign...update soon ...thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER:2B

Naina: divorce papers

Nandini: WHAT. Divorce paper kis k

Naina: beta r u uneducated

Nandini(irritated): naina r u out of your mind what do u wanna say

Naina: see it by yourself

Nandini(she took the paper and saw it): yeah to kisi college ka form hai

Naina: space academy India's top most music college u r going over there

Nandini(shockingly): u r saying this the one who force me to take business as my course

Naina: I know I forced u to take buisness as main but u only once said that music is your soul

Nandini: music use to be my soul

Naina: no it is still pnside u and only it can only help to bring u back my dear

Nandini(chuckled); when did i change I am still same naina agar tumhe apni personal life se fursat milti to tumhe pata chalta k mai kese hon

Naina: stop it Nandini tum India apne chacha chachi k pas jarahi ho if u want your freedom. But in a limit get that or I wont mind if u accompany me to newyork

Nandini: u know how much I hate my step father and sister

Naina: mujhe pata hai is liye tum india apne chacha chachi k pas garahi ho get that

Nandini:chacha chachi who?

Naina: tumhare dad k bhai jab tumhare dad ne wo sab kiya tab ams means tumhari granny ne un sai rishta tordiya or hum dono ko sambhala or mujhe himat di wapis apni zindagi guzarne ki tumhare chacha chachi or ams hum dono sai bht pyar kartain hai par main hi nahi samjh pai or tumhe leker un sai dor chale gai but know things r sorted between us

Nandini: tum kabhi kisi ka pyar smagh pai ho naina

Naina: I don't want to discuss about it u have to decide what u want to do either come with me to New-York or go to India.

Saying this she got engrossed in her files. And Nandini stomped her foot on ground and left from there angrily.

She furiously enter inside her room and threw herself on the bad.

AFTER SOME TIME

She opened er eyes and saw the form which was still in her hand "MUSIC" she uttered with heavy breath.

FLASHBACK

:Nandini, Nandini,Nandini"Audi was filled by the whole college who were hooting and cheering her name, just then she came wearing white top blue jacket and black tight jeans her hairs were thigh in high pony and her lips were curved in smirk.

Nandini: so gys r u ready

Everyone(shouted): yeeesss

Nandini: so lets get started

Everyone;ohhh

Her friends took their respective place behind her and she started playing her guitar

"This is the story about a girl named Lucky.

Early morning
She wakes up
Knock, knock, knock on the door

It's time for makeup
Perfect smile
It's you they're all waiting for
They go...

Isn't she lovely
This hollywood girl

And they say...

She's so Lucky
She's a star
But she cry cry cries in her lonely heart
Thinking, if there's nothing missing in my life
Then why do these tears come at night?

Lost in an image, in a dream
But there's no one there to wake her up
And the world is spinning and she keeps on winning
But tell me, what happens when it stops

They go...

Isn't she lovely?
This hollywood girl

And they say...

She's so lucky
She's a star
But she cry cry cries in her lonely heart
Thinking, if there's nothing missing in my life
Then why do these tears come at night?
Oooh I, I Uh-Uh Ay

Isn't she lovely?
This hollywood girl

She is soo lucky
But why does she cry?
If there is nothing missing in her life
Why do tears come at night?

And they say

She's so lucky,
She's a star
But she cry cry cries in her lonely heart
Thinking, if there's nothing missing in my life
Then why do these tears come at night?

She's so lucky. (she is so lucky)
But she cry cry cries in her lonely heart
Thinking, if there's nothing missing in my life
Then why do these tears come at night?"


She finished the song with unsaid feelings in her eyes and whole Audi was burst in clapping and hooting. Apart from all a tall guy was standing in a corner his face wasnt visible but a smile was on his lips . "amazing" he murmured.

END OF FLASHBACK

A lone tear ecaped from her eyes and wet the bed sheet beneath her

Nandini: q aye tum mere zindigi mai u took my music away from me I just hate u more then u i hate myself for letting u come this close to me but I wont let u affect me any more I will go back to my music u cant stop me from it.

She stood up with different determination and sign the form she then straight went to naina's room she was busy in her files before she can say anything naina interrupted

Naina: keep the form on table I will send it to to the principle of the college.

she was shocked her mouth shaped "o". How she knew what she was going to say.

Naina(still looking in her files): don't b shocked I am your mother I can understand u dear

Nandini(in taunting manner): ohhh mother who left her daughter alone when she was just 16 yrs old bcz her personal lyf was very much sweet to her rather than her own blood.

Nandini went away from there leaving a guilty and shatered naina.

NAINA'S POV:

I know I deserve every bit of your hatred I am sorry but I know I don't deserve u forgiveness when u needed me the most I was not there for u mughe to pata b nahi chala k kab mere innocent beti bcm lyk this but I know music will find the lost u my dear I am sure u fill find happiness and peace over there.

END OF POV

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before u guys threw tomatoes and chappals on me i am running b by i know i kept ur mind hanging around divorce paper i am sorry i couldn't continue i wanted to write more but i was feeling really really sleepy😭 soo


Edited by CROCKOMICHI - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
nice update
finally tht r adimssion papers
nandu was taking her music back in her life
revile ome of past life
hey were u go i will be back of u to keep safe from all the tomatoes
u pinned betifully
continue soon
keep smiling
stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Hahaha that was the admission form of Space
Interesting ... I'm quite curious with why he left ...
Very nice update gal
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
That was freaking awesome nooh..I just loved it..manik left Nandini..she became so cold and aggressive.. Wohoo!..and her equation with her own mother..is also amazing...like really really amazing...I just love the whole concept..want to read more n more..love you nooh...u did a great job..


Just watched kyy..and am very sad right now..where is manik and cabir..and Nandini ..my god!...kya ho raha hai yeh..seems lke no one knows where is he..chalk bye ab..


All the best Nooh!!

Loads of love
Kajal
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
nice update...hope she get all the happiness

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