Manan ff -Tum hi ho (part :73&74pg -139) thread 2 pg-1 - Page 8

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first of all a big SORRY fr late reply...
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dis story iss soo good..
plz continue soon
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Awesome update

Thanks for pm! I just read the whole story in one go! N I really really like it! Pm in future as well!! I hio nandini is fine!

very nice Update.
beautifully Written.
loved it.
thanks for pm..

The chapters was good.

Kya hua anythng serious???

All the four parts are just amazing one. Please post the next part soon. Thanks for the buddy request and pm. Thankyou so much.

TUM HI HO

Part 40

next mrng manik calls rings up

manik pick up the call in half sleep

manik : hello

doc. : manik come fast i have to tll u some thing serious about nandini report

manik come out of her sleep n gets tensed

manik : wht ??

doc. : u come i will tll u than

manik : k doc. i m coming

manik in hurry come out from
the house n start the car
manik is looking so tense

manik reaches to hospital

manik ask about doc. n reaches to cabin of doc.

doc. : manik come sit

manik :doc. nandini thik toh hai na

doc. : manik plz relax n u have to be strong

manik : kya hua nandini ko

doc. : nandini ko brain tumour

manik gets shocked to hear this

doc. : nandini ki jld se jld surgery krni padhegi tumour ki growth na ho

manik : nandini thik ho jaegi na ( low voice)

doc. : main kuch bol nhi skta
treatment bhut painfull hota hai khi log survive kr lete hai

tear roll out from manik eyes

manik : doc. plz kuch bhi karo bs nandini ko thik kr do

doc. : we will try r best
kl aap nandini ko checkup ke liye le ana

manik gets up n come out from the cabin n he was in a shock


scene change

navya is sitting on bed n nandini gets up n run to the wash room

navya : nandini kya hua

mukti n alai also get up

mukti : kya hua

navya : pta nhi nandini uthte hi wash room chli gye

nandini vomited. They all knocks the door of wash room

mukti : r u ok

nandini comes with cleaning her face with towel

alai : r u f9

nandini : ya better now

scene change

manik is driving the car n he fully lost in remembering doc. word
manik stops the car n come out from the car rain start
manik bend n start crying loudy screaming her name
he crys for 15 min. remembering her memory

bg song

Rabba hai... rabba
Rabba hai... rabba

Kisi da tu kya laage
Lo tute kache dhaage
Phire dil mara mara
Yaar da tuta sahara
Kyun hai bhala yeh dooriyan
Kyun hai khala ab darmiyan


manik says to himself "how i wll tell u nandini..
how..
n how i will
i will save u

main tumhai kuch nhi hone nhi dunga

kuch nhi .."

mukti calls manik

manik : hello

mukti : manik bhul gya.. kya..
aaj meri shaddhi hai aur tu kha hai

manik : i m just coming
mukti nandini kaisi hai ( he this controlling his emotion )

mukti : nandini is alright
nandini is waiting for u

manik cuts the call

manik reaches to mukti house

he is all wet n can't able to walk properly
he is fully lost in nandini mememories n doc. word

nandini is decorating the wall wid flower

manik comes

manik : nandini just come down

nandini : 1 min . manik

manik : maine bola na niche ao

nandini : manik main flower hi toh lga rhi ho

manik(shouts) : i said come down... now...

nandini come down

manik : i told u to do no
do this type of work

nandini : manik tumhai ho kya gya hai...

nandini goes

cabir : manik kya hua sirf flowers hi toh lga rhi thi voh...

tear start coming from manik eyes

cabir : manik kya hua sb thik hai na

cabir put his hand on shoulder
manik tears r not stopping

manik : main kya karu

cabir : manik...
u r scaring me wht happened

manik : nandini ko kaise btau ki
cabir : kya btana hai nandini ko
manik : nandini having...
she is having brain tumour

cabir shocked

manik : main kya karu... (manik start crying )

cabir try to console him

cabir : nandini will be f9
u will
no we will take care of nandini

manik : main nandini ko pain main nhi dekh skta
jb ushai yeh pta chlega toh

cabir : manik agr tu hi tut jaega toh nandini ko kon handle karega

manik : main nandini ko kaise batu

manik can't able to control himself

cabir hug him

cabir : sb thik ho jaega

on the other hand

nandini reaches to mukti room

mukti : nandini why u r looking so disturbed

nandini : nthng
where is alai n navya

mukti : they r getting fresh

navya n alai comes

alai : let's go down for haldi function

nandini : chlo

cabir give him white kurta
cabir : le manik go n change yr cloth

manik goes to change cloth



all girls reaches down stair

mukti mom start putting haldi on mukti face n than on hand

than alai navya n nandini
put haldi on mukti

navya puts haldi on nandini face n ran
nandini run after her try put haldi on her face but she get bumped wid manik
n nandini put hldi on manik face n start laughing

nandini : oh manik u r looking so cute
alai comes n put haldi on nandini face n nandini run behind her

manik also smiles on star laughing but remember that her happiness is only for sometime
tear start rolling from manik eyes

cabir saw him n put her hand on shoulder

manik clear his tear

cabir : mujhe lgta nandini ko sb bta dena chiye tujhe

manik : how i face her cabir
how

cabir don't say any word to say to manik becoz he himself in a shock

mukti : cabir manik why u guyz standing like this it's my marriage guyz...

they both gave fake smile n put hldi on mukti

nandini comes to manik n hold his hand drag him in the corner

nandini : manik wht happened
why r u looking so distured

manik hug nandini very tightly ( manik tear in eyes ) for 2 -3 min

bg song
Khamoshiyan aakaash hai
Tum udne toh aao zara
Khamoshiyan ehsaas hai
Tumhe mehsoos hoti hai kya
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zara.. haa..

Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan

nandini : manik...

manik clear her tear while doing hug
manik break the hug

nandini : plz tll me wht happened

manik : i need u nandini

nandini : manik i m wid u always
jb se u came in my life
i want that this life will never end

manik again hug her that he wanted safe her in her arms
n never let her go

bg music
Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan


#Tum__hi__ho

Part : 41

manik n nandini reaches to nandini house
nandini gets out from car
n manik too

nandini : u go manik
and get ready

manik : i m not going anywhere first u get ready

nandini : manik hum late ho jaege
we will meet at marriage venue
i have to ready mukti also

manik : no i m here wid u..

nandini : manik go na plz

nandini slowly pushes manik towards the car

manik hold nandini arm tightly

manik says in agressive way : maine kha na i m not going

nandini : manik...
it's hurting

manik leave nandini

manik : i m sorry nandini
bs i don't want go away frm from u

nandini hold his face

nandini : manik look at me
i m here only
i not going anywhere
bs kuch dr ki toh bt hai

manik kiss on nandini forehead

n sit in car n think that nandini main tumhai 1 sec. ke liye bhi akela nhi chodhna chta
i how i explain u nandini

nandini reaches to her room take out the saree that they purchase in mall
nandini remember that movement n blushes

nandini tug the saree
n sit in front of mirror n wear earing n than braclet n thinks that today will be our special day manik
i have suprise for u
suddenly she feels pain in head n says to himself aaj toh report ani thi
main kaise bhul gye ur manik bhi bhul gya hoga n than she take pain killer

on the other hand manik taking the shower n remembering doc. words n nandini words
n
nandini reaches to mukti room
alai n navya already there

navya : sorry i m late

mukti : it's k baba

navya : vaise mukti mujhe lgta aaj abhi tumhai chodh kr nandini se shaddhi kr lega
nandini u r looking so preety in this saree

nandini : tum bhi na

alai : u r looking so beautifull

mukti : this not fair
aaj meri shaddhi meri hai
sare compliment nandini ko mil rhai h

nandini comes to mukti

nandini : mukti u r looking fab

mukti : are... nandini i m just kidding
nandini really u looking like a doll in this saree

nandini : thank u guy

after sometime
nandini navya comes downstair

manik druv also reaches there

nandini is decorating the arti thali setting on the chair her hair again n again coming on face n she setting it

manik comes to nandini n hold her hair from back

nandini smiles

nandini : manik ...
nandini put the thali on chair n try to get up but manik put hand on nandini shoulder
n make her sit

manik : sit sit

nandini : manik...

manik sit with her

nandini : manik u forgot one think

manik : wht ?

nandini : aaj report lani thi na

manik again remembered doc. words

nandini pull manik

nandini : manik...
manik...
kha ko gye

manik : khi nhi
we will go tomorrow (controlling his emotion )

manik thinks kl nandini ka check bhi toh krvan hai
chlo report ke bhane kl ushka check up bhi krva lunga

tabhi sound of band bhaja started

nandini : bharat has arrived
let's go manik welcome them

navya alai druv cabir n manik n nandini comes to welcome abhi

mukti mom do the arti of abhi n welcome him abhi sit on chair

nandini navya n mukti brings mukti down

abhi n mukti see each other n smiles

cabir : manik tune nandini ko abhi tk nhi btaya

manik : i will not tll her

cabir : tu pgl ho gya hai manik
dekh main janta it's difficult
but isse nandini will life come in danger
agr ushe is bare main nhi pta hoga

manik : are toh hn na main uke sth

cabir : dekh manik nandini ko bta de

manik : kaise

cabir : agr ushai pta hi nhi how she take care of her
isse muskile aur badh skti hai

manik goes from there n said nthng

cabir : manik...

lights get off druv started the dance on song


Ouhh Ankhan De Katore Surma Batore
Lagde Chhichhore Bade Hi Fi
Dil Pe Daraati Saade Chal Jaati
Maare Dil Gulati Pucche Why Why

Ouhh Ankhan De Katore Surma Batore
Lagde Chhichhore Bade Hi Fi
Dil Pe Daraati Saade Chal Jaati
Maare Dil Gulati Pucche Why Why

Chai Mein Dooba Biscut Ho Gaya

Main To Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Ho Main To Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Main To Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Ho Main ToHo Main To Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya

(alai comes n push druv n start dancing)

Hat Re Nigode Neem Ke Pakode
Picchha Kyon Na Chhode Ghume Dayein Bayein
Tujhko Sudharoon Jutti Main Utaroon
Sar Pe De Maroon Tere Dhayein Dhayein

Romeo Bina Permit Ho Gaya

Tu Toh Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Tu Toh Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Ho Tu Toh Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Tu Toh Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya

( druv drag cabir on floor forcely he started the dance )

Baalon Ko Main Set Kitta Gel Mal Ke
Chaati Chaudi Dolle Sholle Dand Pel Ke
Kudiya Haraya Tune Chaal Chal Ke
Baaton Waali Baskit Ball Khel Ke

( navya comea n dance )

Gel Vel Dekh Chhori Patdi Nahin
Dolon Se Umar Saari Katdi Nahin
Khoob Pehchanoon Tere Dil Mein Hai Kya
Fitrat Chhoron Ki Palatdi Nahin

Gudh Dekha Makhi Jaisa Fit Ho Gaya
Tu Toh Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Tu Toh Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Ho Tu Toh Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
( navya druv manik n nandini to dance but manik says no but nandini start dancing )

Tu Toh Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Lut Gaya
Ohh Mein Tu
Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Mein Tu
Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Ainvayi Ainvayi


Ohh Mein Tu
Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi
Ainvayi Ainvayi Ainvayi

Mein Tu
Ainvayi ainvayi
lut gya

(Inlast manik snatching nandini drag her toward corner)

nandini : manik kya kr rhai ho

manik : i want to tll u something

nandini : first i want to tll u something

manik : wht...

nandini hold his hand

nandini : manik come with

manik : where ??

nandni : manik wait na

they reaches at terrace

manik sees the terrace decorated so beautiful
the moomis also looking so beautiful that night n stars r shining

nandini left him

manik : nandini...
nandini..

nandini : manik ..

manik turns n see nandini is bending on her knees

manik : nandini...

nandini give her hand to manik

nandini : will u marry me mr. manik mahlotra

manik is in a shock to hear this he didn't accepted this

manik hold nandini

manik : nandini get up first

nandini : manik i know
maine hi phle mna kiya tha shaddhi ke liye but now i realise that
duniya chahai jo bhi khai
wht matter is that we love each other
n if we r together than nthng happen to us n we will handle any problem
manik i want to marry u tomorrow

manik is in shock to hear this
n tear comes out from his eyes

nandini touch manik face

nandini : manik kya hua

manik hug her

nandini : manik...

manik : just stay here

they hug eachother very tightly
manik thinks nandini main tumhai yeh bt abhi btana chta but now i will tll after our marriage

manik broke there hug

nandini is blushing

nandini go to table n brings the rings

nandini : i brought the rings also

manik : nandini tum toh bhut fast nikli
( manik tryng to be happy)

nandini give ring to manik

first manik put ring on nandini finger n kiss on her hand n than nandini put ring on manik finger than they hug eachother

scene changes

all finding manik n nandini at wedding

cabir thinks( i think manik ne ab tk nandini ko sb bta diya hoga )

manik n nandini r sitting down nandini put her head on his shoulder n hold his hand she kisses on there

nandini : i want to marry u now
i wnt to give a name to our relationship

manik : tomorrow will be that day
our most special day of life

nandini smiles n manik peck her forehead

( manik thinks that nandini i don't want to losse yr smile )

nandini : vaise hum sb ko kya kahenge manik

manik : u don't worry i will manage everything

nandini : manik sb niche humhara itzar kr rhai honge

manik : hmmm...

they both come down

nandini is looking so happy
n manik is only happy frm outside but inside he was fully broken

marriage is over till that time
mukti n abhi taking blessing of elders

navya comes to nandini

navya : kha thi ab tk tb tum
nandini
manik ke sth na

nandini smiles

cabir thinks nandini ko dekh kr aise nhi lgta manik ne ushe ab tk kuch btaya hai

mukti hug nandini n navya n fab 4 too

mukti goes wid abhi
cabir drag manik at corner

cabir : manik tune ab tk nandini ko kyo nhi btaya
manik tu smjta kyo nhi h

manik : kaise btata
nandini proposes me
proposes me fr marriage

cabir : wht ?

manik : haan
she wanted to marry me tomorrow
agr main ushai bta deta
i know.. she surely cancel our marriage

cabir : manik fir kb btaega..

manik : i will tll him after our marriage

nandini comes there

nandini : tum dono yha kya kr rhai ho

cabir : voh nandini
manik is tlling about yr marriage tomorrow
tum toh bhut fast nikli

nandini see manik n blushes

manik : chle nandini

nandini : bye cabir

cabir : bye...

manik nandini sits in car

nandini : i m so excited fr tomorrow manik

manik n nandini reaches to nandini home

nandini : wait i m coming in 2 min.

nandini goes inside n change her cloth
n come n sit in car

at late night
manik n nandini sleeping in eachother

manik suddenly gets up n shout nandini...

nandini also get awaken

nandini touch manik

nandini : manik kya hua

manik hug nandini

nandini : manik ...

nandini forcefully break the hug

manik : tum thik toh ho na..

nandini : i m f9

nandini ly manik on bed n kiss on chicks n she also about to ly down but manik holding his arm stops her n comes close to her n flip their position now manik is on the top her.. than he twinned her wrist with his n nandini breathing heavily... n manik come close to her neck n kiss there... n than he come close to her lip n with in fuses his lip with her n both r kissing eachother like a there no tomorrow.. n b/w the kiss manik hand travels toward her kurti jip n about to open it but than he realized about her condition n immidaitly broking the kiss got away from her...n ly beside her... now nandini is blushing very hard.

"One more day.. manik.. than.. u n me.. will be together for... ever..." nandini thinks having a broad smile on her face than he hold his arm tightly.

"I love.. u.. manik.. " she said in his ear... n kiss on his cheeks

"Nandini.. i love.. u.. more.. "he said n immidiatly hugs.. her n like this nandini slept but the sleep from manik eyes is far away...

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