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As i said i will update tonight so here big update.. hope.. u will not give harsh comment after reading this n one of u.. was saying to change if i written something separation part so i m sorry dear.. actually now it is not my hand to cahange the story as i written it's many parts in adv. Hope u undersatnd

TUM HI HO

Part : 58

Doc . : good news
That u r pregnant but

Nandini smiles n than slowly ask

Nandini : wht's the bad news

Doc. : yr body is weak
It can't able to handle the child

Nandini : but i want this baby

Doc. : nandini tum abhi abhi itni badhi bimari se gujri ho
Agr tum yeh bacha krti ho toh isse tumhri jaan ko khtra ho skta hai

Nandini say nthng having tear in her eyes

Doc. : dekho nandini u take yr time n inform me after

Nandini go outside remembering doc. Words n having tear in her eyes "
N she reaches home n sit on couch n thinks "main manik yeh sb kaise btaugi" n after to distract her mind she start reading the novel n sleep while reading the novel n at nite manik comes n see nandini is sleeping he takes book from her hand n put it on the table n cover her with blanket than kiss on her forhead after switch off the light sleep with her

Next mrng

Sunlight comes on nandini face she get up n go to washroom n get ready n go to kitchen for making coffee for her n manik than she go upstair with tea n than manik get up n she give cup of coffee to manik n he take it

Manik : gud mrng nandini
Aaj toh din bhut acha jane wla hai becoz my day starts with yr coffee

Nandini smiles n than manik put coffee on table n hold nandini waist

Nandini : manik... go n get ready aaj tumhre aaj bhut imp. Recording hai na

Manik : nandini ho jaunga ready phle apni wife ko achi taraha dekh toh lu

Nandini phn rings n manik leave nandini

Manik : jao apna phn pick krlo

Nandini take the phn it's doc. Call n manik go to wash room

Nandini : hello

Doc. : nandini decide kiya tumhne kuch aur manik se pucha

Nandini : doc. Isse mere bache pr toh effect nhi padhega na

Doc. : nhi tumhra bacha bilkul thik rhaiga chinta mujhko tumhari hai tumhri body bhut weak voh iss bache handle nhi kr paegi
Tumhne manik se iss bare main discus liya

Nandini : nhi

Doc. : nandini tumhai jld hi faisla lena hoga
Aur tum iss bare main manik ke sth discuss karo yeh tum dono ka bacha hai

Doc. Cuts the call

Nandini main manik se iss bare ushke ane ke bd bt karungi
Agr abhi bt kri toh manik preshn ho jaega aur ush uski bhut imp. Recording bhi hai
While nandini lost in her thought n manik came n say
Nandini...

Nandini : haan bolo

Manik : nandini kha koe hue ho
Nandini : khi nhi bolo

Manik : kiska call tha itni subha subha

Nandini : doc. Sharma regular check up ke liye bola rhai thai

Manik : okay chlo breakfast ke liye chle niche

Nandini : yeah

They both reaches at dinning table

Manik see nandini looking so lost n than manik hold her hand

Manik : nandini..
I m seeing from mrng u r looking so disturbed

Nandini : manik..
Pta nhi mn main bhut bechni ho rhi
I m feeling that jaise kuch bhut bura hone wla hai

Manik (holding her face ): nandini plz stop saying like this kuch nhi hoga aur jb tk hum sth main hai koe kuch nhi kr skta okay

N than nandini nods

Servant come with breakfast n put it on table n manik feed her with the breakfast n nandini too... feed him

N than manik hug her n go upto to door n nandini standing at dinning having tear in her eyes remembring doc. Words n manik again comes to her n than nandini throw the plate on floor to remove her tear so that manik can't see it n she get up n say

Nandini : kya hua manik

Manik : voh i keep the phn on table

Manik take her phn n do side hug with nandini n kiss on her forehead n say bye

Nandini : bye..

...
Nandini call navya

Navya : haan bolo nandini

Nandini : kya tum ghr aa skti ho
I need to talk to u

Navya : nandini okay i m coming

After sometime navya come to mahlotra mension nandini setting on couch

Navya : hi (hugging her)

Nandini : navya i need to talk to u

Navya : haan bolo na

They both sit on couch

Nandini : i m pregnant

Navya (hugging her ) : wao nandini congress hum tumhre.. liye.. bhut kush hai

Nandini : but complication

Navya : wht ?

Nandini tll navya about pregnancy complication

Navya : tumhne manik ko btaya
Nandini : nhi
Dr lgta khi voh mujhe roke na

Navya : manik..
Tumhai jarur rokega kyoki isse tumhri jaan ko khtra hai
Nandini..

Nandini : lekin navya
Manik has given me this life
Ushne mujhe ek nae jindgi di hai
Ek na ek din toh mujhe jana hi padhege na
Toh mera manik fir andhere Main chla lekin fir humhra bacha ushai roshni dega

Navya : dekho nandini..
Plz don't play with yr life

Nandini : i have decided i want to have this child
(She get up n say)
N i will tll manik today about that
N i have to decorate the room n bring toys
Tum chlo gi na

Navya : yeah..
But plz manik ko sb bta dena

Nandini : okay..

They both go n brings many toys n cradle n many more thinks for baby

Navya : nandini sorry i can't able to help in decorating the room i have to go for urgent work

Nandini : navya it's okay

Navya : bye nandini n take care

Nandini : bye

Navya go n nandini decorate the room n spread the balloon all around
The room is looking so cute

N than her phn rangs n she pick the call n see it's manik call

Manik : nandini missing u

Nandini : missing u so much
Jldi ao mujhe tumhai kuch btana hai

Manik : haan btao na

Nandini : nhi tum phle ghr ajao

Manik : main ghr hi toh aa rha hn btao na

Nandini turns around n see someone n get shoched n say tum yha kya kr rhai ho tumhai andr kisne ane diya n put the phn down

Manik : hello..nandini
Nandini kya hua

That person hold nandini hand n he flung nandini on floor n nandini phn fall down n she shouts manik...

Manik : nandini ..
Kon ho tum


Part : 59

Note : grab yr tissue as they needed for this part i m sure..

That man flung nandini on ground n nandini shouts manik...

Manik : nandini...
Kon ho tum

That man pick the phn n say
Itni jldi bhul gye mujhe tum (nandini lying on floor n trying to get up )

Manik : karan teri himmat kaise hoe mere ghr ane ki

Karan : tune mujhse panga liya na ab dekh main kya krta.. hn..

Manik : agr nandini ko kuch bhi hua na than i will not leave u

Karan throw the phn ouside the house n nandini shouts manik...

Manik start driving the car very fastly n say hello hello nandini..

Karan(bend down n touch her face ) : oh nandini.. dr lg rha hai

Nandini having tear in eyes

Karan (jerks her face ) : dr lgna bhi chahie

He gets up n start breaking the thinks n he trys to throw cradle on nandini but nandini sides away n shouts aa..

Nandini start begging : wht do u want
Plz mujhe chodh do

But karan become more angry after listening this he get her stand up by holding her hair tightly nandini is crying very badly

Karan (holding her hair ) : tumhai kaise chodh skta hn main
Yeh mauka main nhi chodhunga

Nandini : tum yhi chte ho na hum complain vapis lele toh hum lelenge
Plz mujhe chodh do

Karan throwing her on bed n shouts : no i want to see u both suffering...

Nandini saw vase kept on bed n she pick it up n throw on karan head n ran down stair n hide herself at the back of sofa
N karan came down holding rod

Karan : nandini kha ho
U r playing with me hide n sick na

Nandini put her hand on mouth to control her sound of crying

Karan : nandini...

On the other hand manik reaches home but outside his house 3 4 goons standing
N manik call cabir n ask him to come with police

Manik start fighting with them

Scene changes

Karan is finding nandini

Karan : where r u nandini..

N he saw nandini n nandini got scared to see him n start moving backward but karan put his leg on nandini hand n nandini start sceaming aa..

Karan : ab kaha bach kr jaogi

Nandini is crying badly n begging to him n than karan move around to pick up the rod mean while nandini get up with support of sofa n karan turns around n Hit nandini with the rod n nandini fall on dinning table n she shouts manik... very loudly n manik listening this beat all the goons n he also shouts nandini... n entered inside n than nandini again try to get up n start running towards main door n karan hit rod again on nandini head n than manik comes in n nandini fall in manik arm n she shouts "manik..." blood start coming out from nandini head n he say "nandini.." n he puts his hand on her head n see the blood n than manik bend down holding n nandini see him n say manik... mujhe pta tha tum jarur aao ge n he smiles n her eyes got close n manik start shouting holding nandini face nandini...
Nandini...
Open yr eyes

Karan start laughing

Manik leave nandini on floor n start beating karan but karan having no guilt n his smile is not going from his face manik again punch on karan face n shouts tumhne nandini ko mrne ki himmat kaise ki

Cabir came with police n police control manik n cabir call the ambulance

Manik not leaving karan n saying tune nandini.. ko hath bhi kaise lgya
But police control him n take out karan with him

N manik go towards nandini n bends down n put her head on his lap n hold her face n say nandini open yr eyes plz pz
Plz open yr eyes (crying )

Ambulance come n put nandini on stretcher n manik holding her hand reaches to ambulance n sits in ambulance
Holds her hand n touching her face plz nandini open yr eyes
N doc. Put oxygen mask on her face n manik tears can't stopping from coming out
He was fully broken

N than they reaches hospital n doc. Start taking nandini to icu n manik is also going with nandini holding her hand n than at door manik leaves her hand n all came their n try to console manik but he can't able to control himself n crys in cabir arm

N after sometime doc. Came out

Manik immediatly ask to doc.

Manik : nandini kaisi hai

Doc. : i m sorry but patient ki halat bhit critical hai
Unka bachna bhut muskil hai
Humhne unhai observation pr rkh diya hai kl hosh ajata hai toh sb thik hai

Manik listening this get shocked n hold doc. N say tu kaise keh skta hai ki voh bach nhi skti khuda hai tu n cabir control manik n manik leave doc. Collar
Manik goes to door n see nandini from outside having tear in his eyes

Bg song lyrics

(Ab Doorie hai itni Hai
Aankhe mere nam Tujh bin
Rona aaye par aansu Hai kam
Aye khuda maholat de dekh
Kahte Hai hmmm
Hmmm hmmm-(x4)
Rona hai mujho ab to rone do
Khoya hai sab kuch isko bhi khone do
Ruk rahi hai yeh sansein inhe rukne do
Hmmm
Hmmm hmmm-(x4)
Hahahaha...!)

Navya goes to doc.

Navya : doc. Plz ek min. Mujhe aap se kuch bt krni akele

Doc. : okay come in my cabin

They reaches to cabin

Navya : nandini ka bacha toh bilkul thikh hai na

Doc. : yeah but jb tk nandini ko hosh nhi ata kuch kha nhi ja skta

Navya : doc. Ek request
Plz abhi bhr kisko mt batna ki nandini pregnant hai
Vrna sb tension lenge

Doc. : okay ..

Manik phn rings but the his phn is with mukti n it's inspector call

Mukti : hello

Insp. : aap manik ko inform kr dijea ki karan fir se bhag gya hai

Mukti : wht ??

Mukti tells about this to all
Manik become angry n say main ja rha hn ushe dundne aur ab main ushai nhi chodhunga

Manik goes out n cabir say to mukti tumhne manik ko abhi yeh jaruri batna tha

Cabir also ran outside after manik

Manik is driving the car n remembering nandini words that manik..
Pta nhi mn main bhut bechni ho rhi
I m feeling that jaise kuch bhut bura hone wla ha
Manik he looking very depressed n than after some movement mukti calls come

Manik : haan bolo mukti

Mukti crys n say manik plz jldo ao...

Manik : kya hua
Nandini thik toh hai na

Mukti : manik tum bs jldi ao

Mukti cuts the call manik shouts hello mukti nandini thik toh hai na n manik turns the car

Cabir sitting beside her

Cabir : manik kya hua
Sb thik toh hai na

Manik : pta nhi mukti ne kuch btaya nhi she was crying
Tear start rolling from manik eyes n manik prays plz nandini ko kuch mt krna plz i begg u


Manik n cabir reaches to hospital n fastly go into the lift n reaches upstair n see mukti navya alai n druv are crying with dead body n its covered with white blanket n manik stops there n get bumped with the wall n about fall but cabir hold him n he slowly comes to nandini body n cabir also come with him holding manik becoz he can't able to move properly n both having eyes full of tear n manik having no word to say
N mukti h hold manik n crys n say manik...

Bg song lyrics
(Ab Doorie hai itni Hai
Aankhe mere nam Tujh bin
Rona aaye par aansu Hai kam
Aye khuda maholat de dekh
Kahte Hai hmmm
Hmmm hmmm-(x4)
Rona hai mujho ab to rone do
Khoya hai sab kuch isko bhi khone do
Ruk rahi hai yeh sansein inhe rukne do
Hmmm
Hmmm hmmm-(x4)
Hahahaha...!)

Manik removes the blanket from her body n see that her body is fully burnt n manik get shocked to see this
Manik(slowly says ) : yeh sb kaise hua

Mukti crys n say : nandini ke room short circuit ho gya tha n doc. Ki voh phle hi n crys

Manik bend down n hold nandini hand n tears fall on nandini hand n manik losts in thoughts of nandini

Bg song lyrics

( Thama jo hath kyu chhuta
Kya tera sath bhi jhoota
Kya in sawalo ka jawab doon
Kahne ko sab hai pure
Tere bin mere gham bhi aadhure
Hai baddua ki ab bhi jinda hoon
Main...!
Ab Doorie hai itni hai
Aankhe mere nam Tujh bin
Rona aaye par aansu Hai kam
Aye khuda maholat de dekh
Kahte Hai hmmm
Hmmm hmmm-(x4))

Manik start screaming nandini... nandini ...
Tum mujhe aise chodh kr nhi ja skti
Get up nandini (holding her face )
Nandini utho na n crys very badly

Bg song lyrics

( Ab Doorie hai itni hai
Aankhe mere nam Tujh bin
Rona aaye par aansu Hai kam
Aye khuda maholat de dekh
Kahte Hai hmmm
Hmmm hmmm-(x4))

Doc. Comes n manik gets up angerly n holds doc. Collar n say tumhari vjaha se meri nandini mujhe.. dur chli gye.. hai.. sirf tumhari.. vjha..se
I will case on this hospital for this irresponsibility

Doc. : dikhiye unki aag lgne se phle hi death ho gye thi

Manik : main itna badnasib main nandini ko akhri br achai dekh hi nhi paya
Aur yeh sirf iss hospital ke karna hua hai

Manik again go nandini n hold her n say nandini humne ek dusre se vdha kiya tha ki hum ek dushre ka sth kabhi nhi chodhenge fir kyo tum mujhe chodh kr ja..rhi.. ho..
Get up nandini n plz say something n Crys n say plz say something plz

Cabir hold him n say manik plz tujhe MNA hoga nandini ab kabhi vapis nhi aegi voh hum sb ko codh kr chli gye hai

Manik : nhi
Dekho nandini SB kya bol rhai
Tum mujhe chodh kr khi nhi gye na
Get up n tll them that tum kuch nhi hua hai
Bola na nandini (holding nandini n he is crying )

After doing nandini Funeral manik reaches home n see nandini blood strain on floor n he bend down n touch that

BG song lyrics

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein Kyun rooh meri ye sahe
Main adhoora jee raha hoon Hardum ye keh raha hoon

Than he shouts nandini...
Plz vapis ajao plz
Plz. N Cry's

BG song lyrics

(Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai...)

N than nandini phn rings n he pick up the phn it's doc. Sharma family doc.

Manik : hello

Doc. : hello manik
Where is nandini

Manik says controlling her emotion : she is no more

Doc. : oh sorry lekin yeh kaise hua aaj toh meri subha ushai meri bt hue thi
nandini ne tumhai btaya nhi that she was pregnant


Manik get shocked to hear this n phn fallen down from his hand n start imaging that all happen to nandini


BG song lyrics

( Jaane kaise,Toote rishton se bikhre hain ye pal
Maano jaise,Gham ki pal
kon se chalke hain ye pal
Kyun adhoori yeh kahaani
Kyun adhoora yeh fasaana Kyun laqeeron mein iske "Alvida")

Manik imagine that karan hit nandini with rod n nandini fall on dinning table
While seeing dinning table

BG song lyrics

( Umr bhar ka saath de jo, Kyun wohi pyaar ho!Kyun na mit ke jo fanaa ho, Woh bhi pyaar ho!Naa adhoori yeh kahaaniNaa adhoora yeh fasaanaMar ke bhi naa hum kahenge, Alvida!)

N manik touches the the dinning table n crys n her voice echoes in his ear

(Bairiya mere Rabba
Kyun hua mere Rabba
Yun naa dhaavi
Yun naa dhaavi
Do dilaan di yeh kahaani)

N manik go back of sofa n imagine that nandini hidden there n covering her mouth n karan came there n she trys to move but karan put her leg on hand n she scream

( Mit bhi jaaun, na mite ye kaisi pyaas hai
Dooriyon mein bhi kho ke tu, mere paas hai
Kyun ki tu meri kahaani
Kyun ki tu mera fasaana
Ab kabhi phir na hai kehna.. Alvida!)

N manik go upstair n imagine that nandini comes from upstair n go down stair in his front of eyes n hide behind the sofa

BG song lyrics

( Teri yaadon ko sehlata hoon (naa kehna..)
Pal mein bann ke bikharta hoon
Jis jahaan mein kho gayi ho tum (alvida..)
Kya nahi hai wahaanTooti tanhaiyon ka gham)

He reaches to that nandini decorated n he saw it was all mess n start imaging that karan push her on the floor n throw cradle on her but she side away n than karan make her get up by holding her hair n throws her on bed n nandini throws vase on karan n ran outside

BG song lyrics

(Bairiya mere Rabba
Kyun hua mere Rabba
Yun naa dhaavi
Yun naa dhaavi
Do dilaan di yeh kahaani)

Manik hold the piece of broken cradle bend down n crys n screams nandini...
Nandini...
Plz come back plz...
BG songs lyrics

(Jaane kaise,Toote rishton se bikhre hai ye pal
(naa kehna..)
Maano jaise,Gham ki palkon se chalke hai ye pal (alvida..)Kyun adhoori yeh kahaani
Hu...ooo... Alvida!)

Guyz I know u will be upset with me from this part but plz guyz have some patience n there is suspense in this nandini is alive so guyz chill i m also a manan fan n i also don't want manan will separated so guyz enjoy this part n again i m telling nandini is not dead there is a supense n it will be revealed afterward...n next update will be going to be.. interesting... so guyz.. be.. relax.. twist toh abhi.. shuru. Abhi start hue.. hai there is many more...
Keep thinking where is nandu.. wht happen to her.. n guyz..don't worry.. it will revealed after 2 3 updates
Love Mehak

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
M sure this bloody karan kidnapped her
Feel like killing him!
Hope baby is fine too!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was damn emotional. . Is karan ko to Mar do ... I knew it .. Nandini is alive. .she can't die ... I hope manik use dhundh le .. I want manan back soon ..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago



Thanks for pm.

It was very very emotional update.

Nandni was pregnant. ..she was happy and sad.

But that karan is like hell...

Nandni is dead in maniks eyes. ..because he seen her dead body.

The song was very emotional. .

And your details make us cry..😭😭.

You penned it very beautifully. ..all the emotions was amazing.

Thank for sharing this amazing update.


Stay blessed dear.




Love. .
Jyoti.






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Posted: 10 years ago
Pls. Yr jo b pehle manan ko saath lao n I m damn sure as karan said ki wo dono ko suffer krvana chahta h toh might b karan ne sirf aisa bulvaya ho Dr. Se...
Ya fir nandu hi manik se dur gayi ho qki wo iss bacche ko laana chahti thi manik k liye bt manik k liye laana chahti thi toh manik se dur q gayi pls. Manan reunion chahiye muje mtlb chahiye pls. Pls. Pls.
See I understand u can't the script bt yr u also understand atleast saare parts ek saath upload kr lo jb tk manan saath nai hota pls. Pls. Pls.
Update soonest...
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Posted: 10 years ago
so emotional update... plz nandu ko wapis le aao... or iss krn ka kuch kro
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Posted: 10 years ago
very emotional update...
dara hi diya ta yar tmne toh...
bt tnk god ki nandini is alive...
update d nxt part soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh god!!
Such an emotinal update!
Really brought tears!
Beautifully written..
Waiting for the suspense to unreveal😃
Continue soon..
Take care..
Thanks for the pm dear😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww awesome update Dr...
It such an emotional update yaar..
I was literally crying while reading...
So sad of manan...
Reveal the mystery soon dr...
It was an big twist...
Waiting for the next update eagerly dr...
Always stay blessed nd happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
like the update...thanks fr the pm

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