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Posted: 10 years ago
Woowowww deaarr ur story is reallyy amazinggg👏
I read it in one go...its beautiful😳😳
Last part was good but den d karan part...so bad...why dere's problem wid good people only...
But it was written nicely...😉
Will wait when they will b together again😊
Always keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocolava14

Woowowww deaarr ur story is reallyy amazinggg👏

I read it in one go...its beautiful😳😳
Last part was good but den d karan part...so bad...why dere's problem wid good people only...
But it was written nicely...😉
Will wait when they will b together again😊
Always keep writing


Thanx... dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy
Thnk u for the pm
I just read all the chapters...
The story is amazing
I lyk how manik n nandini are there for one another at all times...
Very well written
And the last update was so emotional...
Manik n jail n Nandu trying to stay in those jail like conditions...
Loved it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hieee... Thanks for the Pm... emotional update. ohh I hate this karan.Aisha is so bad, being a girl she did that...Can't see Manan like that. hope everything will be fine soon. update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb Update Dear😊
Your new twist in manan life...
Last two part is emotional 😭😭
I hope things will be fine
And Karan And aisha😡 They Are so bed
Jldi se truth bahar Aa jaye
And ye dono jail me ho😡
Next part update soon
Thnaks for the PM
Take care dear😊
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Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

superb Update Dear😊
Your new twist in manan life...
Last two part is emotional 😭😭
I hope things will be fine
And Karan And aisha😡 They Are so bed
Jldi se truth bahar Aa jaye
And ye dono jail me ho😡
Next part update soon
Thnaks for the PM
Take care dear😊


thanx.. dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Continue soon... 😊
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Originally posted by: firefly09angel

Nice update...
Continue soon... 😊


Thamx... dear...
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Tum Hi Ho

Part : 56

Next mrng fab 5 n navya reaches goa n enter to nandini's room

Navya : fan bhi band hai aur nandini kha hai

Mukti see nandini on floor n shouts

Mukti : nandini...

Fab5 come there

Nandini got awake

Navya makes nandini stand up

Mukti : nandini tum niche kyo so rhi thi

Nandini : voh manik bhi toh niche so rha hai na

Alai : nandini...

Mukti (holding her hand)': nandini dekho voh uski majbori hai

Nandini : agr manik yeh sb suffer kr rhai so i also suffer all this meri. majbori.. hai

Navya : leave na mukti nandini yhi chti hai toh thik hai na

Everybody hug her

Cabir : nandini...
Main manik ko bail dilwane ja rha hn

Nandini : i also want to go with u

Mukti : nandini tum yhi ruko tum abhi abhi uthi ho be fresh aur tumhne kuch khaya bhi toh nhi hai

Nandini : nhi mujhe manik ke pass jana hai aur vaise bhi mujhe bhuk nhi hai
Bs i wanted to meet manik

Cabir : okay..

After sometime they all reaches to police station with lawyer

Lawyer give file to P.I.

P.I. : aaj sunday hai
Manik ko bail nhi mil skti

Nandini : but apne bola tha ki kl nhi mil skti

P.I. : haan toh rt ho chuki thi aur sunday ko toh vaise bhi nhi milti ab kl sudha court milte hai

Nandini fold her hand in front of police n say "plz manik ko bhr nikal do ushne kuch nhi kiya" (start crying )n she bend down
Navya mukti n alai also bend down n hold nandini

Navya : nandini manik bhr nikl jaega..

Mukti (removing her tear ): jb manik ne kuch kiya hi nhi toh ushai koe kuch nhi kr skta
Don't worry sb thik ho jaega

Cabir : sir manik ne kuch kiya hi nhi toh aap ushai jail main nhi rkh

P.I. : dikhye hum kya kr skte aur kya nhi yeh aap ko smjane ki jarurt nhi hai
Kl court main sabit krna

Nandini get up n say" kya main manik se mil skti hn "

P.I. : nhi sunday no meeting allowed

Nandini : plz i want to meet manik
Main bs ushai dur se dekhungi bs

P.I. : okay for 5 min.

Nandini goes n stands at corner of wall n see manik sleeping on floor n changing his position n nandini start crying n wants to touch but she can't

Bg song lyrics
( Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri)

nandini thinks manik agr mere hath main hota hai toh main tumhai ek din bhi yha nhi rhaine deti
Manik i can't see u like this
N than manik gets up n see that side where nandini is standing but nandini hide herself n thinks manik if u will see me toh tumhai pta chl jata ki i m crying than u will become more sad aur main tumhai aur preshan nhi krna chti

Nandini came out from the police station

Mukti : manik thik toh hai na

Nandini nods

Cabir hug nandini n say nandini manik kl ajaega na so don't worry

They reaches the hotel

Nandini enter in room n stand at door

Nandini : sorry guyz i want to spend time alone

Cabir : it's okay nandini
We understand

Nandini close the door n bend down with support of door n again start crying n start remembering about manik condition in jail

Bg song lyrics

( Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri
Jaan meri.. jaan meri.. jaan meri...)

Scene change

Manik thinking nandini aaj ae kyo nhi
Voh thik toh hai na n than he see hawaldar is standing on door

Manik : suno kl jo ladhki mujhse milne ae thi voh aaj ae thi kya

Hawaldar : haan bechari bhut ro rhi thi
Bol rhi ushai tumshe milna hai aur fir voh tumhai dur se dekh kr chli gye
Aaj sunday hai na toh bail nhi hoti toh bol rhi thi ki tumhai yha se bhr nikl de ushne toh hath bhi jodhe thai insepector ke samne

Manik listening this tear start coming out from manik eyes
Manik thinks nandini... i m wid u why r taking so much of tension

On the hand nandini sitting on couch lost in thoughts mukti knocks the door having lunch for nandini in her hand

Nandini open the door n come inside n again sit on couch n mukti also sit on couch n put the plate on table

Mukti : nandini chlo tumne subha se kuch nhi khaya
kuch kha lo

Nandini didn't respond than mukti push her hand n say
Nandini... khana

Nandini : mujhe bhuk nhi hai

Mukti : nandini plz todha sa khalo uske bd medicine bhi leni hai

Nandini : plz mukti bilkul mn nhi hai

Mukti : nandini tum bhut weak ho gye ho
Agr khana nhi khaugi u will become unconscious fir manik preshn hoga tum yhi chti ho

Mukti give one spoon of vegetable but nandini throw it

Nandini : maine kha na mujhe bhuk nhi hai

Mukti : nandini...
Calm down

Nandini : i m sorry mukti

Nandini start crying n than mukti hug her

Mukti : nandini..
Manik kl ghr aajaega humare pass proof bhi hai
Toh tum itni tension kyo le rhi ho (while hugging her)

Nandini not stopping crying mukti break the hug n remove her tear

Mukti : acha tumhne kuch nhi khana abhi okay thodhi dr bd kha lena
Chlo ao late jao

Nandini ly on bed n mukti cover her with blanket

N mukti came out from room n goes to her room

Navya : khana khaya nandini

Mukti : nhi bhut preshn hai
Aur tune voh footage smbhal kr rkh di na cabir

Cabir : haan voh nandini ke pass hai
Kl ush karan aur uski patni ke sara pln samne aajaega

Mukti : hmmm...
Ushai tb smj main aega ushne kise panga liya hai

Night time

Nandini sitting at window n seeing manik photo in phn n remembering their rain romance on the other hand manik remembering nandini
Nandini thinks yeh rt kb khtm hogi aur main tumhse milungi
N manik thinks nandini ek rt fir hum dono sth main honge
N nandini sleep on floor n manik also sleep .

Next mrng

Nandini get up n she become so weak becoz didn't eat anything from 1 day but she is happy from inside to meet manik

Cabir : plz nandini kuch khalo

Nandini : nhi main khana manik se milne ke bd hi khaungi

Suddenly nandini ran in the washroom n do vomiting n than come out from the room

Mukti : r u okay

Nandini nods

Nandini : chle

They reaches at court

Media standing outside the court n come toward nandini but cabir side them n nandini come inside n than manik also came n both give little bit smile to each other n than judge ask for the evidennces n manik is looking at karan angerly Cabir give the footage to judge

Cabir : iss vedio main saf saf pta chl hai ki iss aisha ne manik ko fasaya hai

Manik give smile to karan n karan n aisha become tense

Vedio started n everybody see that sound come help help n than manik go inside the room than in 1 min. Karan came with people

Judge : so karan aur aisha aap kuch kena chaihnge

Karan n aisha having no word to speak

Manik : yeah kya bolenge bechare fasane kisko chle aur ushi main khud fash gye

Judge : so iss evidence ko dekh kr manik ko riha kiya jata hai aur karan aisha ko 6 mahino ki saja sohnae jati hai

Manik come towards karan

Manik : dekha manik mahlotra se panga lene ka nateeza

Karan thinks in his mind main bhut jld apni sari insult ka badhla lunga fir dekhte hai karan se panga lene ka natiza
Police go with arresting aisha n karan

Everbody hug manik n than manik go toward nandini n hug her n nandini also hold but she is so weak can't able to speak any thing

Manik break the hug n smiles n than nandini also give back smile n he holding her hand come outside n media standing covering karan n aisha than come towards manik n nandini n start asking questions than nandini fall in manik arm

Manik : nandini..
(HOLDING HER FACE )

Manik hold nandini n cabir side the media n than manik put nandini in car n also sit with her n put her head on her lap holding her face say that open yr eyes ab toh main tumhare samne hn
he is looking very disturbed ...



Part : 57

Manik n fab 5 n navya waiting outside the ward

Mukti : nandini ne kl se kuch nhi khaya voh bhut preshn thi tumhai le kr

Manik : wht ??
yr tum sb ko ushai jabrjasti khi la dena chie tha na tum sb jante toh ho voh phle hi bhut weak hai

Doc. Come outside

Manik : nandini kaisi hai ab

Doc. : she is very weak lgta hai unhne khi dino se kuch khaya nhi hai
Humhne unhai glocouse de diya she will be f9
Don't worry

Manik : kya main ushai mil skta hn

Doc. : yeah sure

Manik come inside

Nandini sees manik n smiles
N manik go toward her n sit beside her

Manik : nandini i m upset with u becoz tum apna bilkul khyl nhi rhkti

Nandini holding her hand : i m sorry manik..
I can't able to leave without even for a sec. Only

Manik : pr nandini plz take yr food on time
Promise me u will always take care of yr health 1st

Nandini : k baba promise

Nandini get up n hug manik

Nandini : manik plz mujhe kabhi chodh kr mt jana

Manik : never

Fab 5 came inside n cabir say chalo dono ka romance ho gya toh hum adhr aa skte

Manik break the hug n say

Manik : tu already adr aa chuka hai cabir

Navya : tumhai pta manik jb tum nhi thai na toh nandini

Nandini :plz navya don't tll na

Manik : toh nandini kya ?

Navya : nandini bina fan ke aur jameen pr soe thi becoz tum vha jameen pr so rhai thai na
Manik nandini tumse bhut pyaar krti hai

Nandini : navya sirf main hi nhi i know manik bhi mujhse bhut pyaar krta hai

Manik : pyaar toh tumhai main krta hn but tum nandini apne sth aisa kaise kr skti ho

Nandini : manik...
Main tumhai suffer krta hua nhi dekh pa rhi thi

Manik : u want that ki main tumhai suffer krta hua dekhu
Nandini u hurt me

Nandini : i m sorry manik i will never do this again

Manik hold her face : main tumse naraj nhi hun bs main tumhai kush dekhna chta hn

Manik kiss on nandini forehead n nandini hold manik hand

Manik : ab u do some rest aaj shym ki ticket hai mumbai ki
I have to go for pakaging

Nandini : main bhi chlti hn na pakaging ke liye

Mukti : oh madam hum pakaging ke liye
So don't worry

Nandini : okay
Okay...

Manik kiss on nandini hand n say bye n nandini kiss on manik chick n say bye to him

At nite they reaches home

Manik goes in washroom n nandini sitting on bed n remebering that happen in goa
Having tear in her eyes n than manik came out n see her that she is looking very sad n manik come n sit with her

Manik (holding her hand) : nandini ...
Kya hua

Nandini : manik... jbse humri shaddhi hoe hai tabse kuch na kuch glt ho rha hai

Manik : bhut kuch acha bhi toh hua hai na
Voh socho na

Nandini put her head on his shoulder

Nandini : manik main yeh trip kabhi nhi bhul paungi becoz u suffered

Manik holding her face : main bhi yeh trip kabhi nhi bhul paunga kyo iss trip se humhri bhut achi memories bhi judhi hai

Nandini start remembering their romance n masti n all

Nandini : hmm... manik tum shi bol rhai ho

Manik hug nandini n they sleep
Next mrng

Nandini get up n go to wash room n do vomiting n than she come out

Manik also get up

Manik : nandini wht happen

Nandini : nthng
(Manik sorry maine tumhai kuch nhi btaya fir tum preshn ho jate )

Manik : chlo nandini khi bhr chlte

Nandini : u go na manik mera mn nhi hai bilkul bhi

Manik : chlo na

Manik phn rang

Manik : hello

Secretary : sir aaj apki bhut imp. Meeting with music director

Manik : nhi aaj ki sari meeting cancel krdo

Nandin : manik go na

Secretary : sir voh aaj meeting krne ko bol rhai hai

Manik : ok i m coming

Manik : nandini i m sorry i wanted to go with u but yeh meeting

Nandini : it's ok manik
Work is more imp.

Manik : chlo fir main chlta hn

Manik give side hug to nandini n kiss on her forehead

Manik : bye

Nandini : bye n smiles



Manik goes n than nandini also get ready reaches to their family doc.

Nandini sits in cabin n doc. Comes

Nandini : doc. Pta nhi do din se bhut ajeeb se feel ho rha hai
Aur vomiting ho rhi hai

Doc. : vaise toh yeh weakness ki vjaha se hota but humke apke kuch test krne hoge

Nandini : okay

Nandini go with the doc. N do her test

Doc. : u wait in my cabin report thodhi dr main aajaengi

Nandini : okay ..

Nandini goes in cabin n waiting for report
Nandini phn rang

Manik : hello

Nandini : manik ..

Manik :nandini kya kr rhi hn

Nandini : i m resting on bed as u ordered me

Manik : good
Main aaj thodha late ho jaunga ghr ane main so don't worry n khana time se kha lena okay
Aur mujhe miss krna mt bolna

Nandini : voh toh main krti hi hn hr ek sec.
Plz manik jldi ana
(Nandini get emotional )

Manik : nandini...
Main rt tk aajunga so just chill
Manik : chlo bye i have to go
Bye n do kiss umhaaa

Nandini : i love u umhaaa

Manik : i love u too..

Nandini : bye...

N than nandini cuts the phn
Doc. Come with the report

Nandini : report thik toh hai na
Doc. : there is good n also a bad news

Nandini get tense : wht ?

So here is next part guyz.. i m so sorry to say this story will remain like this only.. emotinal because i have written it many parts in adv. Now.. i can't change them...hope u guyz.. understand... n don't forgot to do comments...
Keep smiling
LOVE MEHAK



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Edited by Mehaklovely - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
finally manik is out of jail
again what happened to nandu
pls post next part soon

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