MaNan SS: M INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [Chapter - 3pg-18] - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devanshigupta14

Nice update...every emotional...but if nandini dies manik will also die n that's truth...I know u won't let his nightmare come true...I know that u will not kill her...u can keep her in coma or make her memory lose or something else...but u will not kill her...waise its his birthday... Toh birthday gift toh banta h...at least get her out of coma...he have waited for very long...

Continue soon...


Thanks.
Yes manik ko uski birthday gift mil jaiga
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkypie

A...! nyc update👏


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sooorrry for super late.
I wrote this part on December but phir last 3-4 lines main likh nehi pa rahi thi aaj meri frnd stuti ne last 5lines add kardi and mujhe toh mujhe post karne ki maan huya.
Hope u all like it.
Sorry for all mistakes

#M_INCOMPLETE_WITHOUT_YOU

Dr- Sorry Manik but she not responding but we will try only 10 hrs if she response then we say something.

Cabir - if she not responding then
Dr. - Then we r sorry.
Manik - She will be come back mere liye usse tik hona hi hoga.
Nandini please come back surprise me aaj mera birthday hai na. he says himself.

Dr. - Mr. Malhotra please come my cabin something is very important.

Doctor Cabin

Dr-Mr. Malhotra is very few chance she is response . Dekho beta I am ur father's frnd so main agar 10 hrs baad nandini response na kare toh uski life support ko stop karna uske liye best hoga and if she response toh bhi nandini ki brain main kuch blood clots hai jo operate nehi ho sakti. iss blood clots ki effect kya hoga o toh hum uski hose main ane ke baad hi pata chale ga.
Manik- nandini ko wapas ana hi hoga and o puri tarah se tik ho ke aye gi I belive in her ayiappa...
Uncle jo karna hai ki jiye I know manan will be forever humesha...

Har lamha dekhne ko
Tujhe intezar karna
Tujhe yaad karke aksar
Raaton mein roz jagna
Badla hua hai kuch toh
Dil in dino yeh apna

1hr

Manik call his dad to arrange pvt flights for nandini's family. Amms, chacha, chachi ghar lock karke ussi halat pe airport k liye nikal jate hai...

2hr
Cabir- Manik abhi teri walk kar ne se kuch nehi hoga sit down.
Mukti - har 1 sec kitni lambi lag rahi hai.

But Manik ko doc ne kya bola.

Cabir- sab tik ho Jayga don't worry

Alya hold Dhruv hand and pray to god.

Kaash woh pal paida hi na ho
Jis pal mein nazar tu na aaye
Kaash woh pal paida hi na ho
Jis pal mein nazar tu na aaye

3hrs
Manik send Navya and Rishabh home.
Navya just praying her matarani for Nandini rishab also join her.

4hrs
India
Mr. Malhotra call all world best doctor's for Nandini.
Finally he fond world best neurosurgeon who in London for his family holiday he agree to check Nandini.

5hr
Manik wait for doctor he remembers each & evry moments which he spend with nandini..
Her smile her eyes all just flowing on his eyes. He close his eyes.
Manik he hear most melodious voice of his life...
Manik open his eyes he saw nandini beside him.
She wiping his tears.
Nandini - ro kyu rehe ho main tumhe chod ke kahi nehi jaungi I promise u na manan forever humesha.
Suddenly.
his trance broken with cabir voice.
Manik realise he saw another beautiful dream of his life...

Gar kahin aisa pal ho
Toh iss pal mein mar jaayen
Mar jaayen mar jaayen
Mar jaayen ho mar jaayen
Mar jaaye mar jaaye
Mar jaayen ho mar jaayen

6hrs
Doctor come to nursing home and goes to nandini's cabin

Doctor check Nandini
dr. - dr. kapoor this injection is last hope so I am just trying please u tell her family just pray to god.

Tujhse juda hone ka tasavur
Ek gunaah sa lagta hai
Jab aata hai bheed mein aksar
Mujhko tanha karta hai
Khwaab mein bhi jo dekhle yeh
Raat ki neendein udd jaayen

7hrs
Dr inject her Just then Nandini suffering from her breath taking.
Nurse - Dr. please check her.

Dr give her cardio-pulmonary resuscitation

Ma... Manik
after 2 long year Manik listen most melodious voice.
It's not a dream it's real
Manik rush to Her...

After shouting Nandini get unconscious.

Dr. - Congrats Mr. Malhotra thank to god now she is out of danger but u know I am already told u. Jab tak uski hosh nehi ata hum kuch nehi bol sakte nandini ke upar kya effect huya hai...

Mar jaayen mar jaayen
Mar jaayen ho mar jaayen
Mar jaayen mar jaayen
Mar jaayen ho mar jaayen

8hr

Manik Manik Manik
Nandini shouting...
Nurse Call dr. they check her but she not listening them she just shouting Manik name now Manik enters this room his eyes full of tears Nandini look him and try to get standing from bed.

Manik Run to Her she fall on her bed Manik hold Her she just look his eyes.
Manik also lost her eyes. he just wants stop this time forever.

Manik Manik

Nandini I am here with u don't worry I am not going anywhere. please dr tumhe check karne do.
Manik place her on bed check her but she hold Manik hand tightly.
manik:nandu m here baby dont cry m here only

Last 1 hr doctor check nandini manik just sit beside him...

mean while rishabh who got the news of her sister
came hospital asap

he entered her room
he came running
didi didi

nandini suddenly start panicking
manik manik
YH KAUN HAI
YH KAUN HAI

he feel like a bomb in both rishabh and manik's ears

rishabh came near to nandini
rishabh:di m tumhara rishu
see m ab bolne lga hoon

nandini:kon rishu manik hatao isse mere paas se

manik was broken seeing nandini like this
but he gestured rishabh to move out

manik:nandu m here baby dont cry m here only

manik wanted to go out but nandini not for once left his hand

outside when rishabh told evryone this
no one believed him

After 1hr

Nandini & Manik both in cabin both just hold each other n feel peace after long time.
Doctor not alow to enter any one to meat nandini so fab4 & navya wait out side.

Arms, chacha, chachi reach nursing home direct airport
Rishab tell them every thing...
chachi was admant to confront nandu
how nandu can forget her all time fvrt chirpy chachi

chachi entered nandini's room

chachi:nandu mera baccha kaisa hai ab tu

nandini:manik yeh kaun hai aur mera naam kse janti

manik:nandu shona tumhe chachi ni yaad
arre yhi toh tumhe bhindi pasta bna ke khilati hai

chachi move towards nandini and nandini snuggled more to manik
nandini:manik inse kaho mere paas na aaye inse kaho yeh jaye yaha se

chachi started crying and left from there while nandini dozzed off

manik slowly took off his hand from her hold

as soon as he came out

cabir:manik kaisi h ab woh aur woh chachi aur rishabh ko pehchani q ni

manik:mujhe aap sbse kuch khna hai
NANDINI AAP SBKO BHOOL CHUKI HAI
uske dimag se aap sbki memories nikal chuki hai
aap sbka saya bhi uske diag mein nahi hai
usse sirf m yaad hoon aur kuch nahi
family friends woh sb bhool chuki h

as soon as manik declared this evrybody collapsed on their places

screen freezes on their crying faces and nandini's sleeping face


Hope u all like it...
Thanks stuti for last part...
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
Lots of love
Purna
Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
yaaa its very nice part...bt hw nandu forgeted...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Thanks for continuing. I thought u just disappeared. .
Wow finally she recovered..
But except manik she forget everyone..
It's shocking
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
with whom she spent har childhood unhe bhulgayi.. :(
only remember manik he:)
True love

thank u
keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
with whom she spent har childhood unhe bhulgayi.. :(
only remember manik :)
True love

thank u
keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
seriously waited for this update for a long time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
finally we got the update...plz cont soon
waiting
hope everything will be f9
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally you are back.
Nice update. Continue soon.

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