MaNan SS: M INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [Chapter - 3pg-18]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue
Nandu get up naa jaan!!! Tmhe pta h naa jb tm mujhe MAANIK bulati ho how mch i love it... Say it naa once please I tld you naa earlier we have to set relationship goals agr uthogi ni toh kse chalega nandini who will fgt with me... who will remind me HOW HIGH IS A HIGH NOTE you are my shining star naa then get up who will protect me then please na baba get up now no more sleeping kitta so ge
dnt bhi kumbhkaran
nandu u knw rishabh ab bol skta h get up atleast for him!!!! (crying badly) Nandini if you will get up naa then...then m tmhari saari bt manunga haa saari aur...aur chachi ki saari dishes bhi khaunga. And I give u many blank promises.
Please bohot hua sleeping beauty game I am only ur princess who kiss u everyday but u don't feel it How Nandini? Nandini see na ur Fireflies r glowing for us.
His phone strts ringing
its cabir!!!!
Hello!! cabir u knw its 1yr 11months 17days 25 mins 10secs woh ab tk uthi!! Tu bol naa uth jae please (he was hiccuping) suddenly he breaks down on his knees n cries badly
scene shifts!!
mumbai
mukti: guys we have lost him agr nandini ni uthi toh he will be again in darkness aur iss baar forevr guys he was always their with us in our bad times hme bhi waha
uske sath hona chahiye
he need us guys cabir: u r rgt mukti i'll book d tkts of tomorrow for LONDON
flashback
After talent hunt,everything was sorted, fab 5 was back alya n dhruv were together n that manik and nandini became MANAN for them that was the best day for them
bt DESTINY has its own plans
while returing from malhotra mansion to nandini's house!!!!! Their car blasts
nandini got severe head injuries due to which she slipped into COMA manik got minor injuries bt aftr seeing nandini he was almost dead
Harshad and Nyonika were put behind the Bars
Mr.malhotra broke all his rltns with nyonika
no doctor in india was lft who didnt treat nandini bt nandini was nt responding to any of their treatments or medicines
At last manik decided to move London for her better treatment. so At first Amms not agree with it but Manik's unconditional love convince her
he with rishabh n nandini with the help of his father shifted to London
from then till now nandini not even for once blinkd her eyes
manik is now the CEO of UK branch of MALHOTRA HEIGHTS
DESTINY!!!!! The manik malhotra!!!! Who never prayed to god from last 1 and half years their was not even a single day he has not prayed to her ayiappa the day nandini slipped into coma manik lost everything bt not his hope their hope now he dsnt smile now he dsnt play guitar nor he sings because his shining star is not their to shine for him the manik malhotra who nvr cries is now crying for a gal his gal
but it seems Destiny is not in their favour so its the prolougue




MaNan OS :WE Will be together hamesha!!! no matter what!!!!


Special thanks to my friend Stuti Gupta for editing my poor writing
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shindesweety thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god its so painful;-(
to see them like ths
plZz continue n happy updates plzz:-D
tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god
How u always
Manage to
Write so
Beautifully😊😊😊
Ur words spell
Some magic
Baby
The way you
Described
I can also
Feel that pain😭😭😭
As the topic is
Am incomplete without u
So I just wanted to say
Make his hope win😛
I can't see them like this
Please do Continue soon
Am Eagerly waiting for Chapter
Love
Diya😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shit man!! How can you write such a good story? You made me cry but every tear was worth it. Harshad and Nyonika rot in hell. Start your ff soon. Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Make his hope win soon .. Awsum strt..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing... but emotional and painful one...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it s too painful n emotinal
looking forward
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was really interesting
Looking forward to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really liked the concept but wish nandini jaldi uthe cant see manik in this pain
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue dear
Very emotional and Painful
Pls wake Nandini up soon. Can't see Manik in such state

Cont soon

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