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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 17 B

"Guys..! Isy chup karwaoa..! Manik hmy choray ga nahi agr us ny is kay swollen eyes daikh liye tou..! He will kill us..! You know na kitna possessive hai wo..!!"Mukti said worriedly and suddenly her phone started ringing. Seeing the caller ID was enough to pale Mukti's face. It was Manik..! All look at her and she showed them her cell. All gulped the lump in throat.


"Manvi..! Please baby stop crying..! See Anna was fine at the end..!!"Alya tried for the last time but in vain. Manik again called Mukti she had no other option but to pick up the call.


"Hello..!!"She said in a dead voice.


"Hy Mukti..! Just called to ask Meri beti theek hai na..!"Manik asked,voice full with concern.


"Haan haan..! Bilkul theek hai teri beti..!!"Mukti lied but suddenly Manvi started crying more loudly. Unfortunately Manik heard it.


"What the hell..! Why is she crying Mukti..! Jhoot q bool ri hai? Tum logon say aik bachi nahi sambhali jati..!!"Manik shouted on the phone and it was so loud that all heard it clearly.


"Kya hai..! Itna possesive q ho ra hai..! Hum chup kara lain gay..! Tu phone band kar..!"Mukti got annoyed and cut the call.

...

Here Manik told Nandini everything and he was about to go behind them when Nandini held his hand.


"Mani..! Relax..! Bachy ro party hain..! Aur tum preshan ni ho..! Tum wahan jaoa gay..! Un sab ko danto gay tou acha nahi lagy ga..! They will handle her for sure..! Everything needs time..!"Nandini explained softly and Manik nodded. Although he didn't went behind them but still he was too much restless.

...

Fab4 walked towards a public park and Manvi was cling to Cabir,resting her head on his shoulder. She was not talking to anyone and all were worried. Suddenly an idea hit Mukti's head. She came in front of Manvi and started whistling..! Manvi gave her a confusing look..!


Chanda Chamke Cham Cham Chikhen Chaukanna Chor
Chiti Chaate Chini Chatori Chinikhor

(Mukti sang dancing crazily and Manvi smiled..! Cabir made Manvi stand on her foot and all became happy seeing Manvi smiling..!)


Kitna Mushkil Yeh Gaana Zara Gaake Dikhana

(Mukti knelt in front of Manvi and poked her nose asked her to sing..! Manvi look at fab3 and they all encourage her to sing..!)


Chanda Chini Chamke Chaate Chaukanna Chikhe Chor

(Manvi sang happily unfortunately it was wrong..! She made a sad pout and Fab4 smiled)


Chanda Chamke Cham Cham Chikhen Chaukanna Chor
Chiti Chaate Chini Chatori Chinikhor

(Then Mukti and Alya sang twirling around Manvi and she gave them a wide smile..!)


Khadaksingh Ke Khadakne Se Khadakti Hain Khidkiyaan
Khidkiyon Ke Khadakne Se Khadakta Hain Khadaksingh

(Alya sang taking Manvi in her arms and Manvi slapped her forehead as she didn't get a single word of it..! Dhruv and Cabir noticed Manvi's confusion..!)


Khadaksingh Ke Khadakne Se Khadakti Hain Khidkiyaan
Khidkiyon Ke Khadakne Se Khadakta Hain Khadaksingh

(Dhruv and Cabir repeated the lines and Manvi clapped happily..! Alya kissed her chubby cheeks and she returned the kisses..!)


Kitna Mushkil Yeh Gaana Zara Gaake Dikhana

(Mukti again sang to provoke Manvi to sing with them..!)


Khadak Khadak Ke Khadake Khidki Khadaksingh Ka Khadke Zor
(Manvi sang trying her best to match the lyrics but she again failed making a cute face..! Fab4 were going all awe on her cuteness..!)


Chanda Chamke Cham Cham Chikhen Chaukanna Chor
Chiti Chaate Chini Chatori Chinikhor

(All sang together moving in round and round..!! Manvi was still in Alya's arms and was too much delighted..! Lot's of people recognized the fab4 and were cheering for them..!)


They ended the song and engulfed Manvi for a group hug.

"Wow..!! I am so happy..!!"Manvi shouted excitedly and then Dhruv made her sit on his shoulders. They ate lunch in Manvi's favorite Chinese restaurant then after buying ice cream they came out. This time Cabir's cell buzzed and again it was Manik who was becoming restless.


"Baby doll..! Ap kay Papa ka phone..!!"Cabir picked up the call and gave the cell phone to Manvi.


"Hello Papa..!!"Manvi exclaimed and Manik released a breath which he was holding unknowingly.


"Papa ka baby..! Ab kesa hai?"Manik asked lovingly.


"Fine Papa..! Ap ko pta hai Mukti Maushi,Cabeel Chacho,Dhluv Chacho and Alya Chachi they sang fol(for) me..!!"Manvi told Manik the highlight of today's events and Manik smiled.


"Tou mera beta enjoy kar raha hai na?"Manik asked with a concern.


"Yes Papa..! Enjoying alot..! Baki main na ap ko aa kal(kar) batati hoon..!!"Manvi said happily and after greeting her Manik cut the call.


"Chachi Mama Papa pass jana hai..!"She said to Alya as Alya was holding her in her arms.


"Ok..! Let's go..!!"Dhruv said and all drove back to hospital. Where Manik was anxiously waiting for Manvi.

...


"Mani..! Relax..! You can't live without her for few hours..! Jab wo phir say school jany lagy ge tou kya karo gay?"Nandini asked playfully,seeing him pacing here and there.Manik smiled.


"I am thinking kay main bhi us kay sth admission lay loon..!! At least kise ki himat tou ni ho ge na meri beti ko kuch kehny ki..!!"Manik said in a hell serious tone and Nandini laughed loudly. "What's so funny?"Manik asked making a bad face.


"No no..! Nothing is funny..! Mani..! Stop being over possessive..! Acha you know what..! Manvi ki teachers ko bus us say yai shikayat the k Manvi ko apny anger pay control nahi hai..! It's all because of you..! Ya genes tm say liye hain us ny..!!"Nandini said angrily and this time Manik laughed.


"Hahaha..! Aray jab wo gusa krti hai na tou bohat cute lagti hai..!"Manik said smilingly and zoom suddenly a pair of arms hugged his knees. It didn't took him a second to recognize that his doll was back. He immediately picked her up and meanwhile fab4 entered.


"You guys enjoyed the time?"Nandini asked to them.


"We enjoyed a lot..! You know Nandini..! I wish kay hmri bhi beti ho..! It feel so good to have a little one in your arms..!!"Alya said emotionally and Dhruv took her in a side hug.


"Haan aray tou shadi ka kya plan hai?"Nandini asked excitedly while Papa daughter were busy in their private talk.


"Soon..!"Dhruv said smilingly and Nandini nodded. She look at Manvi who was busy with Manik.


"Acha Mama ko ni btaoa ge kay kya kya kiya aj?"Nandini complained and Manvi showed her teeth. She sat in her lap and kissed her cheek.


"Mama aj hum nay flozen(frozen) daikhe..!! You know us main na two sistels(sisters) the..! Mama mjy bhi sistel(sister) chye..!!"Manvi said so innocently and Nandini's face flushed with blush. Manik was just smirking and fab4 giggling.


"Manvi..! Pehly ap thoray bary ho jaoa na..! Phr we will think about a sister..!!" Manik said in a serious tone and Manvi nodded her head happily.


"Guys..! We have to go and meet the sponsor owner..! Chalaiin..!"Suddenly Cabir remembered and all slapped their heads.


"God..! We forgot..!!" They shouted in unison and all run outside. Manik after giving quick pecks on his loves forehead too followed his friends. Now only Nandini and Manvi left.


"So..! My baby enjoyed her day?"Nandini asked adjusting Manvi's hair and she bobbed her head excitedly.


"Acha Mama..! Ap ko baat btani the..!"Manvi started hesitantly and Nandini nodded her head. "Wo jis din Papa ki palty(party) hai na..! Us din fathels(fathers) day bhi hai..! Mama main Papa kay liye kuch acha kaloon(karoon)?"Manvi explained and Nandini was overwhelmed by Manvi's words. As she didn't expected Manvi to be so sensitive.


"Ok no problem..! Ap ki Mama hai na..! I will help you..! Papa ko surprise daina hai?"Nandini asked smilingly.


"YEs..!"Manvi said excitedly.


"Ok..! Let's make this Fathers'day the best Father's Day for your Papa..!!" Nandini said determinedly.


"Wow..! Thank you Mama..! I love you..!!"Manvi said excitedly and Nandini embraced Manvi in her arms.


"Mama loves you to meri jaan..!!"Nandini said kissing her hair.

...

Phew..! I don't know where is all the inspiration has been lost..! Pta ni kya crap likha hai myny..! God..! Well..! Try to make next update special.. till then ise pay guzara karo..! Sorry for everything..! The song is from Fanna..! Jaisa bhi tha please btana..! Ok? Aj kuch nahi hai kehny ko..! Sorry again..! Keep smiling..! Keep shining for your love ones..! Remember me in your prayers..! Oh God guys abhi mery sth itna bura hus hai kay I can't even tell you..! I wrote this update and when I was copying it paste on Forum from my office word it got deleted..! I was literally crying but thank God..! Ctrl Z say recover ho gai..! Thank God..! Wrna aj tum log update kay begair he soty..! PMs TOMORROW Morning..!

Lots of love..

Mawara..

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yaay I'm the first oneee

Finally read...it was cute ...manvi sab ki Jaan hei...<3
HHaah she cried ..kahi yeh manan fans per to nhi chali gaiiui..!!??.xD
Aww restless manik is so cute
Father's day wow ..jaldee laooo
Edited by Fati.crisp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Your story is awesome loved the bonding between family... Reading your story feels like living in fantasy...
bond between Manik and Manvi is the best part for me...
Keep writing bcz you write lovely...
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWWW!!!!! HOW ADORABLE!!!!!! Loved the update!!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Superb update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sabse awesome is manvi ka part meri baat mano varna mere rone k baad mere papa se pitoo
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
jst loved the fab4 n manvi
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
loved the bond between fab 4 and manvi
waiting for manvis surprise for her papa
on father's day
eagerly waiting for the next update
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
really cute update
love the par when fab 4 got scared frm manik cz of manvi

continue soon
waiting
Edited by Alishakhna1998 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a cute update. Loved it
Waiting for next update
Lots of love n prayers 4 u
Keep smiling

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