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Zoyik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#831

I love your stories alot mawra :-)

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Ashmita18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#832

Just read the last two updates... they were FLAWLESS... the way uh depicted the pain was just commendable... every part was just remarkable... both the situations were sooo horrifying and painful for manik... not able to find manvi mafe him sooo restless and seeing her unconscious he just couldn't breathe... and then seeing nandini fall from the stairs... he just felt as if he lost his life... and those 12 hours were worse than he for manik... he died every single moment... he was losing everything... his life, his soul, his heartbeats, his breathe, his happiness, his everything, his nandini... he was numb... what else could he do... seeing his love dying is next to impossible... wonderful updates... HATS OFF... they were just commendable...

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anum_6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#833

Awww this so cute n emotional
Update was awesome
Everything is really amazing
Loved it .
Update soon

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kaavyanjali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#834

Emotional update ... but it was awsm...

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Naj91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#835

Mawara please thoda rehem kardo. Itni sari negativity and confusion...can't take it anymore.please update kardo..please please please

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kirankusum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#836

It was superb. ...
Thanx for yhr pm..

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samyukta poudel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#837

Awsm...bohot emotional tha...mai to dargai ki kahi kuch ho na jaiya but now its fine ...update soon

Love

Samyukta

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#838

amazing update n the heaven part was really creative u expressed every emotion very nicely n yeah a bit emotional update too loved it continue soon love anaita

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#839

"Papa..! Mama theek ho jayen ge na?"Manvi asked Manik and he just nodded,then Manvi again rested her head back on his chest. They both were sitting in front of ICU on a bench. Fab4,Mr&Mrs Malhotra,Chacha,Chachi and Rishab all were roaming here and there. While Papa daughter were continuously crying. Manik was feeling himself dead..!! He wanted to scream..!! As loud as he could..!! But for Manvi he controlled himself..!!

"Nandini..!! Please..!! Come to me..!! Come for US..!! Main aur Manvi nahi reh skty tmhry begair..!!"Manik thought painfully.

"Mama..!! Mama..!!"Manvi murmured in her sleep and Manik became worried. Suddenly murmurs turned into screams.

"Manvi..!! Baby get up..!!"Manik said worriedly and all rushed towards them. Manvi opened her eyes she had tears in them.

"Papa..!! Mama..!! Thoon(khoon)...!! Mama..!! Mama gil(gir) gai..!!"Manvi shouted and Manik hugged her tightly.

"Bus baby...!! Mama theek ho jayen ge..!! Papa hain na ap kay pass..!! Bus..!! Shh..! Papa ki jaan..!! Papa ka brave baby..!!"Manik consoled the little one but he himself was crying. Alya came forward and touched Manvi's shoulder.

"Dad..!! Meri strength is wakt ICU main zindagi aur moat ki kasmakash main hai..!! Ap nay suna ni doctor nay kya kaha hai? She got a head injury..!! Agr usy agly 12 hours main hosh na aya tou wo us kay liye kuch nahi kar payen gay..!!"Manik said painfully,his heart was bleeding..!! Mr.Malhotra was asking him to get strong..!! How could someone be so strong..!! Seeing your love..!! Your lifeline on an ICU bed was not easy..!! Mr.Malhotra hugged him. Manik cried like a two year old kid hiding his face in Mr.Malhotra's arms.

Sitting outside in ICU and wait is the Tough time in anyone's life

"Manik..!!"She shouted and the DREAM broke..!! She came back to reality..!! Where was she? Then she felt a female figure bending over her. What was she doing? Everything was so blurry for Nandini..!!

"Patient ko hosh aa gya..!!

update was full of emotions i cant express in words so this is for you

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badkulanamika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#840

awesome blossom
so emotional dear
fairy tale imagination amazing
n injection vala scene to awesome
Finally nandini theek ho gayi...
u r amazing writer dear, u always make me cry by ur emotional update
god bless u

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