manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 18

Originally posted by: aavani

so touching...
felt so sad for the kids...
nandini's burst out and manik 's emotions ...u penned so perfectly
pls continue asap
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

superb ,fantastic ,mindbloeing update but its emoyional too...i fell bad for kids...the way u pendown soo beautifully...day by day ur story becomng more more intrsting...nandu orphan bacho se itna pyar kyoon karti hai? uski past mai aisa kya hua tha? mumbai sai nafrat kyoon karti hai...n that slap he deserve that slap...m really excited for next part...pprecap is awsm..cant wait for next part...plsss update soon
desperatel waiting...keep writing..TC
LOTS OF LOVE

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Sooo much of mystery..awesome update..

Originally posted by: manan_0711

Ty for d pm...

god it was so emotional...I was in tears...

plz reveal d mystery u nandu is lyk dat can't see her in so much pain...

plz continue soon...

can't wait for manan face off...

'll b waiting for d update...

Originally posted by: 51083alishashah

Thanks for pm i did not know about yr ff now i have read n i must say its awesome...u have maintained suspence in yr story...now i m eager to know about nandu's secret...loving yr ff

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Wow superb update waiting for manan's romance

Read all the parts in one go..

Originally posted by: sunset17

Read all the parts in one go..

It's damn awesome... Loved it...

Continue soon

its amazing yaar... i am so loving your story..plaese so PM me when u update...

Originally posted by: Mananforever96

its amazing yaar... i am so loving your story..plaese so PM me when u update...