manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 19

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Part 7

Throught the journey back to Mumbai..manik didn't spok a work...he was still thinking about nandini...how will she handle the situation or mess that he has created and walked away leaving her in that situation...looking outside...fab 4 was worried for him manic was never soo silent ...he always talk to them what is disturbing them...they all are thinking he is upset...coz nandini slapped him...cabir and everyone try to divert his mind...

c-ahm ...manik

comeout of his trance...-haa

c-vo...mi...(not finding words what to ask)...nyonika...

m(confused(-what nyonika

mu-iska mtlb hai..nyonika ko pta lagega ki hme waha se bhej dia..to

m-dont worry guyz mein use smbhal lunnga...u guyzz chill

d-buddy...or classical music ka kya krenge..jo hmne seekha hi nahi...

m-chill dhruvmein uski bat bhi nyonika se kr lunga...

aftr few hours dey reach Mumbai...as nyonika was not at home... manic adviced his frnds..to stau with him...coz its late...all are tired...dey agreed may be manic need them...they all sat pool side and chilling..manik and cabir went to have a dip in pool...

Manglore

Nandini was in her orphanage as she took permission from ams that she will stay with her frnd but she want to stay with kids...

All the kids were sleeping...nandini to lay on a empty bed was thnking about about her stay...how can someone think of buying a child...in terms of money...she close her eyes..when voice started enchosing her ears

Male voice-meri beti aj kya khaegi...

Small baby girl-appa...mujhe nhi khana mujhe paisum khana hai...

Female voice-roj roj paisam koi khata hai kya pehle doodh p...

Baby girl-no...mi nhi its very yukky amma...

Girl started running...here n there..followed by the male and female figure...

Girl was laughing-pakdo mujhe...pakad dikhaoo...

Femal-pakad lia na..to chodungi nahi...

When male figure catch the baby girl couple feed her milk...and started tickling her...having good family time...

When nandini realise a hand on her head...she open her eyes...tears started flowing from her eyes...she saw jeeny rupping her hair smoothly...nandu lie on her lap...n slept aftr sometime...

One month later

Mumbai:

Fab 5 was jamming..evrything is changed in one month...manikwas not at all manik...he try to pretend in front of everyone ..that he is fine...but somewhere inside...he is alone..even with fab 4...but he forgot they are his frnds..his family...dey can understand him bettr than anyone else even his mother...he pretends to be happy...but dey know something has changed in manic but what they don't no...is he still distrb from the slap..or something else is going on...

Manic went to the washroom when fab 4 was alone in jamming room...

c-yr 1 mahina ho gaya hme manglore se ae hue..but manic...kya ho gya yr use...mumbai se kitna fun loving manic leke ae the ...ab pta nhi kya chl rha h uske andr...vo kuch share b to nhi kr ra...ek slap se...

mu-ek nhi 2 slap...

a-or vo harsh words...

d-i hope ki buddy...jaldi normal ho jae...

mu-I think hme aise hi wapas nahi ana chaiy...hme apna revenge leke ana chaiy tha...

a-u ryt mukti...magr us din manic ne b to kuch nahi kaha...hm sab bhi shoked the..sad the ...bht kuch chl rha tha...mgr ab hme revenge lena pdega

c-par kaise voto manglore mein hai...

d-guyzz...hmesha revenge...hme manic ko thk krna h..

mu-or vo jabhi thk hoga

manic was listening everything standing...on door...he know they all can go to any extend if anyone...harm anyone from fab 5...but he cant afford nandini to get hurt...co of him again...so he has to...be normal...nforget abt her...

m-hey guyzzz...whats cooking...

fab 4 look at him...he was smiling all jolly nature of him is back...leaving everyone confuse

m-kya hua aise kya dekh rhe hoo...bhoot dekh lia kya

c-manik tu thk h na(checking his forhead)..fever to nahih ...

d-dr. Ko bulau...

mu-nhi kisi tantrik ko bulate hai lagta hai isme bhoot agya...

a (shouted)-bhooott...she run n hug dhruv ...plsss koi kuch kro...

m-guyzz.come on..m perfectlyfine...chilll...n now manic is laughing...evryone reliefed and laugh with him

mu-guyzz bhttime ho gya..hmne von hi kia..what we r good at...

all of them look each other with a smerk...n had a group hug...

c-so guyzz lets do it...

m-tum log shuru kro..dhruv to mere sath chl..liberary se guitar strings lane hai..mein nylon strings use krke dekhna chahta hu...

mu-okk cool..us lake seedha ground floor p ajaio...

m-ok...

mu, c, a when to execute their plan...dhruv and manic went to liberary...

fab 3(mu, c , a) spread some..slippery gel on floor...so that if anyone come there...they slip ..dhadammm...and cabir put the camera on one side...n waiting for their bakra to come...some students who r inside the collage saw fab 3 ...they found something is fishy..so they stop their way..when a girl came inside the collage coming towards the slippry thing...they cant see her face..she was busy with a pen and a paper...her hairs was blocking her face fab 3 cant see her face..but have broad smile on her deir face..coz the bakra is here...

mu-guyzz our bakra...

c-nhi bakri...

three of them laugh...n saw other side manic was coming...

a-shit manic...kahi manic na gir jae...

they started signalling...him..widout making noise...but manic was busy on his fon...looking msgs..dey saw girl coming towards gel and then dey saw manic coming towards..gel..before they could doo something...manik and girl- aaa both got slipped...dhaadaammm...the girl fll on top on manic...

fab 3 and dhruv also arrived at the same time-shit...dey run towards them...

manic and that girl both deir eyes was closed..manik opn his eyes...and saw the girl...shitt...is he dreaming or what...or she is really here..in clg..on the top of them...lying above him...manik ket the hairs behind her ears..was so much lost that giggling of others..fab 4 shouting for him..not listening to him..he can only seeher face...girl open her eyes...dey both look at each other...yess IT's NANDINI.ahhaha:P

nandini shoked beyong seen him...-tum...tum yaha kya kr rhe hooo..

manic come out of his trance...-jo tum kr ri ho...leta hu...tumhare niche...

n-what..he look where is she...fab 4come there shoked to see nadini-ye kya kr ri h ...

she was about to get up...when slipped again on manic...her lips landed on manik's cheeks...both of their eyes was open with shoked...manik touch his cheek and lost in her eyes...nandini look here n there..didnt try again...coz if she tried she will again fall on him..coz of his slippry thing...ab koi kuch nhi kr rat ha..jo kr rha tha..vo slippry thing kr rat ha...ahhahahaha..

c-manik...tu thk h ..

manic come out of trance saw fab 4got this was their trick but he stuck in this...but fasa bhi to kya fasa..he blush a little-ha...ab uthe kaise

manan was still lying ..nandini was on top of him...

mu-hm age ae to hm b gir jaenge...

fab 4 laugh..nandini was hell nagry now...

n-yahi lete rahna h kya...uthna nhi h (To manic)..

m -haa..ek mint...

manic got idea..he roll on floor...nandini was shoked -what the hell are u doing..

aftr taking 4 rolls...he stop..now he was on top of nandini...was soo lost...

n-ab uthne ka kash kroge..he come out of his trance...and forward his hand to help her in gettingup...

n-no thnx..she was litrally shouting on him...tumhebs mujhe pareshan krna hota h ..tum or kuch nhi h kya.velle ho kya zindagi mein...

but our manic was again lost...ahhaha..kya kre...pyar mein insaan...gonga...behra...anda...or pagl b ho jata hai..as manic was smiling at her...

n-oo god..ab has rha h..tumhe to mi chhodungi nhi..she tap her top on his feet..-ahhh(manic shouted) and nandini went from there..manik saw her going again smile appear on his face-mein chahta hi nhi tum mujhe chhodo...n bit his lower lip...turn to other side..saw fab 4 standing folding there hand on their chest..manik stop smiling rub his back hair...n look here n there...

c-ab smjhe...

mu-tu ek mahine se tujhe hua kyat ha...

a-nandini fever ...ryt...

m-kya..n...n..nhi guyzz..aisa..kuch ...

d-bussy bs...sab dekh lia...jaise tu use dkeh rha tha..vo tjhe chillae jari ti..but

c-but tri batti si band nhi hori ti...

they all laugh manic but his lower lip...with slight smile look here n there...

fab4-awww...manik is in love...

they all hug him ...aftr breaking their group hug

m-guzz its not love..ye bs...

c-achha to kya h ...

m-vo...voo(he don't have words)

mu-beta tri wicket down ho gayi hai...so bold ho gya tu...

they all laugh n went to jamming room while manic was cleaning his denim...his blaser he took it off...

m-but nandini yaha kr kya kr ri h ...

d-shayad admiiisssiionnn(stretching words to tease manic)

m-but Mumbai to use psnd nhi ..

fab 4-what how do u know...

c-mumbai...u no..sabke sapna ka sheha rhai hai yr

m-pt nh yr...mujhe aisa laga...

mu-manik tu yaha kr kya kr ra..use dhndta q nhi..isi clg mi h yr vo...

they all started their seach operation for nandini

on the other hand...

nandini was cleaning her dress...in washroom coz all the slippry thing was on her dress..when a girl in salwar suit come in washroom...

girl-hii..

n-hi..(cleaning her dress)

g-hm navya hai..navya naveli...

n-nandini...nandini murthy...

na-ye tumhare kapdo ko kya ho gaya...

before nadini could saw..

na-ye sab fab 5 ne kia h na...vo log b na...

n(confuse)-fab 5...??..vo kaun h

na-are..cabir, mukti, aliya dhurv or manic...ye sab na aise hi prank krte hai..sabko tang krte hai..ya bolu..insaan k sehre mein..rakshas h rakshas...dey always..mtlb..always bully people...ptan hi milta hai...

n-nhi unhone nhi kia..

na-to kaise hua..

n-mein gir gayi ti...

na-un logo ne hi giraya hoga..vo log the as pas...

when nandini thought how she fall manic on top of him...their kiss...what kisss???..she kissed him...

na-bolo...

she comeout from thoughts...-haa..

na-vo aise hi h ..unhone pta h mujhe ek chhuhe k sath dustbin mi dal dia tha..hm rote rahi..but unhe masti se fursat kaha..ye sab unke liy game hai..kisi ki feelings ki koi kadar nahi...

when nandini think about how he treated the children inmanglor...-sahi kah ri h ...suna tha Mumbai walo k pas dilnhi h ..aj firse dekh lia...

na-haa..in logo k pas nhi h ..waise frnd(extended her hand)

n-frnd(shake their hand)..aftr cleaning nandini's dress..dey move out of the washroom...

fab 5 saw them-vo rahi nadini...

c-mgr ye madhubala k kya kr ri h ...

mu-kahi isne bta to nhi dia..hmne iske sath kya kia...

a-manik..tumhara impression to pehle hi bekar tha ab to or gyaa..mitti mi mill gai tumhari izzat/...

m-shut up guyzz...ho skta h usne kuch na btaya ho...chlo

dey all went to navni...blok their way

m-hi...

nandini was shoked a angry

m-kya yr..mjhe dekhte hi gusse mein ajati ho...aisakya kr dia maine...

n-manik..leav my way...i don't wanna ur face...

m-to q ai ho yaha...

n-tumse mtlb...mein tumhe explan krna jaruri nhi smjhti...smjhe

fab 4 and navya was looking at them-

fab 4-bechara manic

navya-bechari nandini

m-mgr nandini..ek br..

n-q bully kroge..jaise sbko krte hoo..jaise..sabki feeling k sath khelte hoo...bolo...

manic look at navya(thinks)-lagta h isne sab bta dia..

n-hato..she push him..hold navya's hand n move from there..

fab 5 was sitting in jaaming room holding their hand was on their forhead

c-yr manic-tri love story mein...itni problem q h ...kya kha k paida hua tha...

m-i hope mujhe pta hota...ki kya kha k paida kia tha nyonika ne mujhe...

d-ab kya krenge...nadini ko iski shakal b nhi dekhna chahti...

when dey heard lots of sound fromoutside

voice1-are vo kood jaega...

voice2-vo suicide kr rha h ...

v3-aisa kya huaa

there was lots of hustle bustle outside..

m-ye kya ho rha h ..dey come out of clg...saw a boy on clg terrace about to suicice...ye to

mu-shahid h ...jiski hmne video bnai ti...

m-ohh(relaxed)

everyone was watching him suiciding and all look at each other-shittt...hme use rokna hoga..nandini ne dekh lia to...bhagooo...

all of them run towards terrace...they reach when saw navni was saved him

n-tum pgl ho gyae ho kya...aise koi suicide krta hai...

c(slowly to manik)-manik...tu to gya isne ek br hmara naam lia or tri love story ka the end..yahi se faik dei tjhe neeche...

mu(slowly)-ab to tu sch mein nyonika ne poch le kya khaya tha usne jot u nikla...

dhrulya hold his sholder...manik gulp

na-volo kuch..

s-meri video leak kr di...meri life kr dia..un logo...

n-ki logo ne...

s-fab 5...

nandini was shoked beyong limits...now...how can dey instigate someone to suicide...fab 5 was shoked ..ab manic ka kya hoga...shahid and navni turn to leav when they saw fab 5 standing their n gulping their throat...as if they has seen Dracula...hahahaha

end of part 7

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CROCKOMICHI thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahahha that was so funny but yr plz make nandini fell for manik i really want some romantic manan scenes plz preaty plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was funny + cute episode
But nandu is missing mom dad :(
Best was they fell on each other..hahahaha
Manik ko ek machine se nandini fever hua hai :D
I loved the update
Plz plz update next part oso soon !
This is an interesting story !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
And fun lies in last parts where fab 5 came to knw abt Manik's feeling
It was fun their dialogues 😆
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Nw wat is nxt in maniks love story
Fab5 conversation was gud liked it
Watng to know nandus reaction by seeng the there
Continue soonn
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic...
Amazing...
KYA KHAKE PAIDA KIYA HE TUJHA- KAASH MUJHA PATA HOTA.. 😆 😆 my fav part...
Loved it.
Cont soon.
Love..mini
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dear
waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome yaar
loved it a lot...manan scenes ..awww...manik again lost...ha ha ha
fab4 was so funny...
and fab5 impression infront of nandini...😆😆😆😆😆😆

eagerly waiting to read more...
u penned so beautifully yaar...especially dialogues...good work dear
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care
stay blessed..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update..
Thanks for the pm..
Keep writing..
Stay blessed..
Take care..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
rofl

so funny

kya khaake paida kiya tha tujhe ??



everything went wrong for manik

navya then shahid

pehle sehi image ithni kharaab hai ab tho kuch bacha hi nahi
manik ab kyaa karegaa???????????/

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