Manan Forever SS : CH 2 - PG 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
hai isha...

wow u r back with ur 3rd story...
Nice prologue..
i have read both your earlier ff...
they were really beautiful...
waiting for this one..pls update asap
thanks a lot for the pm dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aavani

hai isha...

wow u r back with ur 3rd story...
Nice prologue..

i have read both your earlier ff...
they were really beautiful...
waiting for this one..pls update asap
thanks a lot for the pm dear


Hello. Means a lot, thankyou :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER1:
Kiara: So, Rahul, tell me about yourself!

Naman: I am Naman Malhotra, the son of beloved 'Manan' as everyone called maa and paa.

Kiara: Tell us how you used to begin your mornings when Manik was there.

***FLASHBACK***

"Manik agar ab tum nahi uthe na, toh mai aur Naman tumpe PaNi daal denge. "

She said in the cutest way possible.

Manik held her hand and pulled her inside the quilt.

He hugged her and didn't open his eyes.
"Manik, its 10am baby, uthoo!!"

"10 mins more please" he said still with his eyes closed.

How could I deny this greek god's wish. I also took him in my embrace and snuggled more in him.

Manik: Lets not wake up. Lets sleep here, like this, you in my arms all day long.

Nandini: You're forgetting Mr.Malhotra ajj tumhare naughty son ki ptm mein janna hai. Jaldi uthoo. Your 10 mins are over.

He finally opened his eyes and dropped a sweet peck on her foreheard.

"Hmm, good morning my sunshine. "

She ruffled his hair and said "Good Morning life!"

They both got up. Nandini started folding the quilts and arranging the bed.

"Manik, please apne ladle bete ko utha do tabtak!" Nandini said.

"Ohkayyy!" He winked and left.

When Manik was about to open naman's bedroom's door, he saw lights were already on.

He peeped in inside and saw Naman was already up, full dressed up, sitting on study table and doing his homework.

"Aree wah, ajj mera baccha itni jaldi uthh gaya. And aur toh aur, homework. Wow, I'm impressed han!" Manik said as he entered.

"Paa, good morning. Haan, vo ma'am says subeh subeh uthke kari hui padhai kabhi nahi bhulte, so that's why!" I responded.

"Han han ofcourse, ajj toh ma'am ki sarre baatien yaad ayegi hi apko sir" mum said as she entered.

Yes, she had caught me. Mum always knows what I'm up to.

"Ajj ptm jo hai!" She added.

"Noo..no no maa, mai toh sach mein khudse hi padh raha tha!" I tried convincing.

"Bas baby bas, mai janti hun han tumhe!" Mum said.

Dad came towards me and sat next to me.

"Kya nandu, vo sach mein padh raha hai. Padho beta padho tum" he told her.
"Papa ko patta hi liya haan tumne" mum said smilingly.

"Aur kyaa, paa is always on my side. Haina?"

Paa and me gave each other a high five.

"Thats cheating. You both always form a team leaving me alone" maa complained and faked an anger. She turned the other side and folded her hands.

Me and paa slowly went behind her and hugged her from behind.

"But jab tak tum team mein nahi ho, the team can never win!" Paa told her.

"Absolutely. You're our team ka captain maa!" I added.

She turned behind and completed the trio hug with her "Awww(s)"

****FLASHBACK OVER****


Kiara: thats actually so cute. how was that ptm of yours? (She asked laughingly. )

************

So, here's the first chapter.

How is it? Do drop in comments. :)
Buddy me for PMs.

Love,
Isha :*


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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Nice update...but try to give long update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
That indeed was cute...
Amazing start I must say...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
hey isha
am gland to read u r other ff
sorry nt giving early
i jst read u r ff
it was too different n intersting
i jst loved
the chpter was awesome
the way u pinned naman n manan convo simple super
continue soon
thnks for pm
take care
be blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
awesome start...chapter one was beautiful...so story started from naman...
u penned so beautifully...
loved manik,nandu and naman bonding...perfect family...
amazing work
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
aawww...sooo cuteee...😳
loved the way they called eachother sunshine & life.😊
and i knew naman is upto something...afterall he is manik malhotra's son😆
the whole update was sooo cutee...loved it yrr..
yhanx for pm.
update soon dear...will be waiting😊
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
A differnt concept must say... . And cute updatee...
Updatee sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
nice update
manan little romance & naman acting superb
but wat s that ptm i culdnt get it
tq
continue soon & plz clr my doubt yaar

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