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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelsparkling1

Nice
ufff so much suspense
Reveal it soon
Updt asap


thnxxx
revealation to be done slowly...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mare tarap sa Manik ke face pa ek slappe please...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sakkhorsaha

Mare tarap sa Manik ke face pa ek slappe please...


okay...ur wish is granted...thuuuddd...a slap to manik...😉😉😉😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

*U r mine,only mine*

chapter 2a

Manik's p.o.v

That was not the thing I wanted to do!!!i again felt more guilt inside me for hurting her...why am I like this...why cant I control my anger??why cant I be normal??

I(stammering said):nandini..i didn't mean to...I m so..sorr...soorrry!!

I looked at her eyes which were blood shot red due to crying!!her lips were swollen!!and she looking devastated...I feel like killing myself for giving her pain...

I came towards her...

Manik:I am sorry...

I started to carress...her cheeks...with my thumb..and she jerked my hand away!!!

Nandini:don't even dare to touch me manik...

Anger boiled inside me once again!!i was controlling myself from hitting her...I pushed her on the floor,locked the door from outside and walked away from there..to the kitchen..

I threw all the food which I had prepared for her...

I have kidnapped her and kidnapper doesn't gave any special treatment...

I settled on the sofa...tired and frustrated...did I really don't deserve a second chance...was it all my fault??many questions aroused on my mind...and I travelled back to the old days...

Flashback

Manik's p.o.v

Morning,

I was peacefully slleping on my bed,with a random girl...actually I don't know her name..and I don't want to..she was clinging on to me very much..which I really didn't like..when I don't have mood...she started ruffling my hairs...as if I m her bf..and she is my girlfriend...urghhh...this girlsss...I just hate them...

Manik:stop ruffling my hair...naila!!

Girl:hey,I am not naila...

Manik:oh,maybe..u r jasmine!!

Girl:no..i am not..

Manik:I don't care whoever u are...okay!!1

Girl:alya..i m alya..ur bed partner...

Manik:oh really??now,get off my bed...and just leave..ur job is done..get lost now!!

Alya:its upto me whether I leave or not??i love u manik.why don't u get that...

Manik:that was really a good joke...indeed...

Alya:manik..seriouslly..i really...

My alarmed rang...with...

"manik...get up...u have to propose nandini today"

I smiled broadly listening to this...and I blushed...

But then I looked at alya s face once again...and my mood became spoiled...

Alya:what did u saw in nandini??manik...she is not preetier than me..ofcoarse...

Manik:stop ur bullshit...alya...and just leave...(I said sternly)

Alya: what if I open about our little secret to nandini...what say??

Manik:then it would...be more better...if I tell ur beloved husband aryaman,that u had sleep many a times with me...do u want that??

Alya:u bloody asshole...u wont tell him anything..do u get that..u wont...

Manik:okay..as u wish...my mouth is zipped up...but don't forget..if u tell nandini..then ofcoarse I'll finish u...u'll be finished totally...!!(I evilly smirked)

Alya:now..give me nmy money!!

Manik:take these blank cheque...and take how much money u want..

She stomped her feet on the floor...and walked out of the room...leaving me relieved...

Manik(thought):oh...god...this...girls...what do they think of themselves...but nandini...is not like them...

A broad smile appeared on my face...

Just when my best friend appeared before me with a bang...

Cabir:I think someone looks quite relief!!

Manik:actually,I am...these girls...are so much a headache!!!

Cabir(serious tone):then why don't u leave them??when u urself tell that u love nadini truly!!

Manik:no..man...they are my habit...i am addicted towards them...

Cabir:what if nandini comes to know??will she accept u like this??

Manik:what do u mean by that??who ll tell her,u??(I said sternly)

Cabir:manik,I didn't mean that...don't take it seriously...I just want to say that no girl likes to date a boy who sleeps with random girls...

Manik:so u mean nandini..wont accept me??

All of a sudden I grabbed him by his neck...and pinned him hard to the wall forcefully!!

Cabir:manik:I'll die...let go off me(he was gasping for me)

I realized what I was doing..and left him...

Cabir breathe heavily...

Cabir:manik..r u mad??i would have died...

Manik:sorry,I don't know what had happened to me!!

Cabir:just keep ur sorry with u..its ur last chance..otherwise I'll tell nandini that u r mentally unstable when u r angry...and she ll not accept u then...

Anger boiled inside...I held my head low...so that he cant see my eyes whicjh were full of anger...but no..this is not the right thing at this time...today ll be going to be a memorable day...

Manik:cabir..i'll control my anger...and I would change for her...

Cabir..:better u be!!(he said sternly)

Manik:by the way,u know na today I'll propose her..

Cabir:ofcoarse..yarr...all the best!!

Manikthnxx..bro!!!

Cabir:but remember...1 thing if her answer is no..then don't force her...just accept it...dont do something stupid...

Manik:okay...

Manik(thought):sry,cabir...but I'll do anything to get her...is she says no to me!!i love her..she must love me like I do...I cant let her go...she is mine...

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I have updated very fast for all of u my readers,specially iqra286,tishyy,sakhorsaha and subbatanisha...!!So done with chapter 2a...and keep liking and loving my story...thank u guys...and ofcorse don't foget to hit the like buttons...and silent readers pls...like it...atleast...it motivates me llot...and ofcoarse comment lamba wala karna to get a lamba wala update nxt time!!!chota doge to chota hi milega...and mujhe 80+ likes chahiye...tabhi mei nxt chapter dungi...samje..so silent readers jago...

pls agar comment karte ho..to like bhi kardena na..aur agar like karte ho..toh comment bhi kardena!!!

Now,#ok thanks bye!!

Love,

rituparna😛😛😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice yaar
Manik is
Aggressive
I think he is
Mentally unstable
Poor nandu
Have to face so
Much
And obviously
U write it
so
beautifully
Amazingly
I really don't have words
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Love
Diya😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVYA64

nice update

loved it
cont soon


thanxxx...
i'll
update
not
so soon!
!😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Nice yaar

Manik is
Aggressive
I think he is
Mentally unstable
Poor nandu
Have to face so
Much
And obviously
U write it
so
beautifully
Amazingly
I really don't have words
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Love
Diya😛😛😛


thnxxx
yaar...
for complimenting!!
i'll
cont
soon...
love,
rituparna
Tongue😛😛
anum_6 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Manik is alright Na u he behaving like that
Update soon
Thanx for PM
mananpanirocks thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha_25

nice update.
Continue soon...


thnxxx..
i'll
cont
soon!!😛😛

mananpanirocks thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anum_6

Amazing update
Manik is alright Na u he behaving like that
Update soon
Thanx for PM


thanksss...
manik is
alrite
or
not???
woh to
tumhe
baad
mein pata
chalega...
till thenn...
waittt...
...😆😆😆😆

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