ManaFF~ AStory of Love N Seperation #chapter 7updated Pg21 15/2/16 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
awesome update...
loved it so much...
can't wait for manan to meet again...
want thwm to listen to each other...hope they sort out their differences...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
hope you feel better now...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Beautifully written!I am loving this a lot!I hope Manik meets her soon!heart-touching update!continue soon!will be waiting!Update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Get well soon awesome update n waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Nyc
Nandu's emotions were very well written
I hope they meet soon...
Bt what happ between them?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
CHAPTER -4
New day, New Beginning.

It's 6.30 am . Nandini got up early as per her routine ,n went for jogging, all the while putting her earphones on n listening to all the hits of Fab5.

She returned home by 7.15am. N straight away went to washroom n jad a hot shower, as it could only relieve her tiered muscles.

After taking shower ,she changed in a denim shorts and a crop top . She sat in the balcony, on a bean bag, with her lappy ...

It's strange! ! Life changes. . N we adapt all these changes, n start living with them. Though u can never forget that time of ur life. No.. I can't forget that phase of my life. It was the most beautiful phase of my whole life. I'll live with those memories. . as reminiscing thise days.. are the onky escape 5thus darkness of my life. It's like a ray of light, illuminating my present. Yes.. my past only illuminates my present. He "Manik" ,his mere thought can only bring happiness deep inside .. Y is it ?? I want to Hate him.. but can't! !*helpless* she heaved a sigh n continued. ..

He was wrong. . That night, its the worst nightmare. The night I lost everything. I lost him.. she picked her phone n started gazing at his pic lovingly.


He was the best thing ever happened to me. That night, I decided to leave everything, as I can take everything but his anger.. he was so disappointed, those eyes.. they reflected all kind of pain.. hurt..dejected. They still haunt me coz somewhere I know I was the reason, yes I was at fault. . But not completely. So I decided to leave Mumbai, n I shifted here.

I had no one here, was all alone

The same night I bumped into a guy.. my eyes were bloodshot red n swelled coz of constant tears , which weren't ready to stop , but flow.

Hey!! Umm Sorryyy! He said gleefully as we bumped.
Only then he saw me.. ! N then my eyes. . My face has gone pale ... "Helplessness" the only thing my face reflected.

What the .. hell??? These were the only words escaped from his mouth. .. n within a jiffy, he took me in a bone crashing hug .

N I cried my heart out . I was never So vulnerable. I was always positive, but the day I realised I've lost him .. n that too forever, my heart ached.. the pain was so unbearable, that I couldn't even breathe. I hugged him back n cried as much as I can. He didn't stopped me. After crying for God knows how long ?

Bass.. Nandini. . Bass.. he rubbed my back. . Bass.. ! Stop crying baby. What happened? ?? he queried, worried about me. After almost an hr
Ab..bh...bhii... Ma...Ma..Manik.. !! Was all I could say in between my sobs .

Shhh..calm down..He said hugging me even more tighter, n constantly rubbing my back to pacify me.

He than brought me home , I didn't had energy to talk . N I constantly kept gazing at stars in the sky.. while Abhi drove me home.

Her vision got blurred ,coz her eyes were moist by now. Remembering the worst moments of her life.

I have always loved him . N now I can't even turn back . I've changed myself. M no more Nandini Murthy. She died that night. N now the only thing I know is "Niti Thakkar".

I've started working in a music library. N I'm doing course in Fashion designing. Oops , she bit her lower lip . Sorryyy I forgot to tell na..

Abhimanyu Thakkar- he's the same guy, who fell in love with Mukti. Yeah, I know he died. But that night we met at station. N since then m with him.

He owns a Fashion house here. Yeah he's a cancer patient, but now he has almost recovered. Soon he'll be fine. He gave me a new name , a new personality.

He loves me alot. N I love him too.
Oh God!! Abhi se yaad aaya .. Abhi..

I need to wake him up. Else he'll be damm late.


She closed the lappy n rushed to Abhi's room.

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At Manik's place-

It's 8am. Manik got up n found himself in the balcony with his guitar. He got up.. n coz of such posture while sleeping, he had a back ache. He got up reluctantly n went to have shower.

It's gonna be a tiring week ahead. In Delhi, He cried n started packing his bags . He was done by 10am.

Breakfast! He wasn't concerned about that. He again took out his phone n called Nandini.

Again switched off! ! He sighed helplessly.

Soon his phone started ringing.

Hello, he yelled.

Wooahh! ! Shaant Manik Shant.. Itni subah subah. .itna gussa kyu h bhai ?? Cabir queried sheepishly.

Cabirrraa.. urghh Manik said .

Achcha broo ,cool down. Chill! Aaj we've to go at Alya's place for breakfast , Cabir informed.

Hmm.. okay! I'll be there. Manik replied n Achcha chal bas thodi si packing bachi h .I'll see u guys in 10 . Bye.

Haan ! Bye ! Cabir replied gleefully.
Ye aaj kuch ajeeb behave myu kara tha ??Pata nai abhi iske dimaag m kya chal raha h?? Cabir said to himself.

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Abhiii !!! Nandini exclaimed

Haan baba !! M coming ! Just 2 mins ! Abhi replied whilst taking shower.

Offo !! U'r saying this since last 1 hr.. ! Come fast ,else no breakfast ! Nandini announced scrunching her nose.

Abhi came out. Give me 2 mins more Baby doll ,plz He pleaded.

Ok baba! Come fast , Nandini replied n smiled at him.

He rushed to his room n changed in a black jeans , white tee n a black blazer, to give an office look.

They sat for breakfast.

Achcha Nan.. Oops.. he stopped n corrected himself Achcha baby doll ! Listen U going to library tomorrow? Right?

Yups , it'll be a hectic day .. today. First workshop under your suggested Designer, till I suppose 4.30pm . N then I've to go library. I'll be late tonight. Nandini added.

What ?? Why late ?? Abhi asked.

Arre tonight there's some concert, So ,I've to be there for arrangements n all Nandini replied munching sandwich.

Ohh ! Ok ! So I'll come to pick u ..Abhi declared being protective.

Nah . I'm fine . I'll come by myself ,Nandini said calmly with a smile.

Okay, thn see you tonight. Abhi said picking up his briefcase.

Oks !! Byee ! Nandini bid bye to Abhi n rushed to gt ready for workshop as it was going to be a hectic day .

She wore a high waist floral print pink Skirt with a white crop top . She picked up her files ,locked the door n rushed out.

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At Mumbai.

Manik reached Alya's place . Everyone was already sitting around the dining table. . Waiting for him.

Hey Guys ! Manik said as he entered tge dining hall.

Hii !! All replied jn unison. Manik moved to tge table n sat beside Cabir.

Hey Navya ! U r also joining us ? Manik asked.

Haan , hum bhi chalenge. Is baar to.. sab 1week k liue ja rahe ho na . So m joining u guys Navya gave him peice of information.

Ohh ! But 1 week ?? Guys hum to bas 1 concert k liye ja rahe the na ?? Do Wat's up with one week ?? Manik queried.

Oh ! Actually kal Dhruv n Alya k relationship ki anniversary h ! Mukti said.

So we've decided k .. we all will be enjoying for 1 week. N u r also Joining us ! Cabir informed rather ordered him to ckme along.

But being Manik how could he give in so easily.

No Guys ! M not coming. I'll do the concert n come back . U guys enjoy. Manik said faking a smile.

No one has the guts to request him fir one more time.

But the Great Cabir said mischievously. . C'mon Manik! Don't be a spoilt sport.

Guys! I'll see if I can join u all. Manik said n started having pasta.
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Hey Frns.
I finally updated this chapter. Guys m dam busy . On top of all this M having hard time coz of studies . Mom scolding . N even blackmailing me if I don't study she'll snatch my phone away😭😭😭

Avoid all the grammatical mistakes plz. I wrote in a hurry. N please guys do leave your lovely comments. It really boosts my morale. 😊

Love
Myra


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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
You know what!! You are a damn lovely of a writer!! I am just so impressed by your writing! Truly saying, I don't even know why your story gets so less of a response! Because you deserve much more! I think like that! It's completely my point of view!! You are truly amazing and I am fond of all of your works!!
I am glad Abhi was there to help Nandini! Abhi just perfectly fits in the role!! Amazingly and perfectly! His character is penned awesomely by you! Abhi gave her a job, helped her to move one! It's just so sweet of him!
Manik and his bad habits! Anniversary of DhruLya! Amazing!!
Cabir dare to call Manik "a spoilt sport" HA ha😆!
He's one himself!!!
Loved the update so much!
It was beautiful!
One request- Make this concert come sooner! 😛
I am excited, very much!!
Continue soon!
Will be waiting!!!
Keep writing and smiling too!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: horizontwilight

You know what!! You are a damn lovely of a writer!! I am just so impressed by your writing! Truly saying, I don't even know why your story gets so less of a response! Because you deserve much more! I think like that! It's completely my point of view!! You are truly amazing and I am fond of all of your works!!

I am glad Abhi was there to help Nandini! Abhi just perfectly fits in the role!! Amazingly and perfectly! His character is penned awesomely by you! Abhi gave her a job, helped her to move one! It's just so sweet of him!
Manik and his bad habits! Anniversary of DhruLya! Amazing!!
Cabir dare to call Manik "a spoilt sport" HA ha😆!
He's one himself!!!
Loved the update so much!
It was beautiful!
One request- Make this concert come sooner! 😛
I am excited, very much!!
Continue soon!
Will be waiting!!!
Keep writing and smiling too!!


Thank you soo much dr .
It really means alot to me.
M glad that u r liking my works. Your made me smile widest 😊😛
Love u loads.
Thanks once again
Love
Myra
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Fairy_Manan


Thank you soo much dr .
It really means alot to me.
M glad that u r liking my works. Your made me smile widest 😊😛
Love u loads.
Thanks once again
Love
Myra

Mention not dear!!!
You deserve a lot more than this!!!
Do your studies well!!!
Love you too dear!!!
All the best!
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Superb
Oh Abhi brought nandu home
Abhi n Nandu's bond is cute
Nandu is organising concert of fab 5
Eager to read ahead
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: horizontwilight

Mention not dear!!!
You deserve a lot more than this!!!
Do your studies well!!!
Love you too dear!!!
All the best!
😊


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