ManaFF~ AStory of Love N Seperation #chapter 7updated Pg21 15/2/16

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey frnz !! Here I am with the plot of my new story. Hope u all lyk it...
So read it plz..

Plot :-
The story line is totally same till now.. As in how Manik met Nandini. .!! How he made her life hell ..!! How he fell for Nandini. .!! How Nandini fell for Manik. .!! How they confessed their love ..!!! Then.. Manan went to Mangalore n Aryaman's entry. ..

Then Aryaman's revelation to Nandini. .. N thn Nandini started hiding the reason why Aryaman came ..?? That is to take revenge from Manik! She didn't disclosed the truth in front of Fab5 or Navya.. she tried to handle this all alone.
Bt now..the things were out of control.

The story is abt Manik n Nandini in my p.o.v.

It's been one year since Aryaman's arrival n now Nandini is not here. She left Manik a year ago. Manik tok didn't stopped her from leaving. They had a verbal brawl in which they both were hurt by each other's words. Noone dared to interfere whether it was Fab5 or Chachi
N after that Nandini left Manik.
This actual pretext behind the brawl will b revealed as per the story line.
Now Manik n Fab5 hav cut an album after which tgey became popular not only amongst youth bt also amongst the elders.

Manik always have a austere look on his face.. n his voice us full of affliction , aggravation , exasperation. He never talks too much. He has left drinking. He started doing few new things to calm himself down which will b revealed soon. He talks to only Fab5 n Navya n Aryaman .
Yes he talks to Aryaman .

Alya n Dhruv are in a happy relationship. . Yes frnz the rifts between them has been sorted out.N now they are in a healthy n happy relationship. With more perception n mutual understanding. As it si rightly said distances help the relationship to grow stronger. N same happened wid Alya n Dhruv.

Navya has given her baby to sum rich parents n is now working as a folk singer. She is staying with Cabir.

Cabir is still single. He truly believes that Manik has done a great mistake by letting her go.

Mukti is too disappointed by Manik n Nandini's sudden break up .Their separation. N she no more believes in love. As Manik n Nandini who were so much in love with each other hav broken apart just because of a silly brawl. . !!!

Harshad he is still confused as in what happened that Manik n Nandini r now separated miles apart n on top of all this .. Wat happened to Aryaman ?? Y he n Manik moreover How he n Manik could be close friends ??? When they were such bitter enemies once !!!

So that's it Frnz..!!
Do share your views! !! Do u guys liked it or not. Should I continue? ?? I need a gud response to continue with my plot. So please do leave your lovely comments. N tell me shoul I continue or not ???

Love.
MYRA.



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horizontwilight thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's a new concept!!I loved it!! it's damn amazing!
but here I am making a request!! don't make manik and nandini far from each other for too long!!!
concept seems awesome and I am curious to know what will happen next!!
loved it!! continue soon!! waiting eagerly!!
thanks for the pm!! keep writing like this!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dr . M glad u liked it.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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okay..quite shocking it is..but yes I'll definitely be with you and see how you progress this story from here..!!

best of luck fairy!!..
Thanks for pm!!^-^
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Posted: 10 years ago
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shocking one...but its interesting...really waiting to know how u gonna progress from this plot...
so pls write it down...
thanks a lot for the pm...take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice interesting plot...
please continue..
will be waiting for your updates...
and please pm me ..
thanks...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg! Sweet heart what is this? Already planning to give me heart attacks? The plot is so damn interesting and u haven't yet started but my heart is in pain thinking of the chaos ... Aryaman close friend of manik aha! Mysteries nd should I tell you that I love mystery, u already no that right? So m just waiting for everything to unfold I know u have planned something awesome
And yeah very amazing and interesting concept just waiting

Continue soon
Take care
Bye
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting
please,post soon
and if you want please send me message when you will post
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cont soon will be waiting for the first part and plz make sure that it is long
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i just love it
plzzz upload soon
i like this concept

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