Manik & Nandini Stars & Fireflies part 85 page 143 thread 2

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Apurva

@apps33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#701

Awesome update meri jaan...

Loved it.. Finally our manan are back...

Atleast somewhere we will get to see them alive...

And im loving it...

Poor manik always has to fall of the bed... I wonder in what condition his back side might be...

Hahaha...

And that cabirs dialogue

"waah tu toh TLC mein noble prize lekar jayega mere romeo.."

It was the cherry on the top... Im sure he might have had a hard time controlling his blush

Superb update...

And thank you so much fr continuing

Will be eagerly waiting fr the nxt part..

Amd another thng...

Congrats fr completing 100 pages... Of your second thread... You rock girl...

Cont soon

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#702

today i m in the seventh cloud feeling so happy nd pleased.. 😃
finally the day came when manan united...that too in so beautiful manner... 😳
all the confusion r wiped off..nd manik shared all his pain...
coming to the funny parts..once again nandu tried unique way of waking manik up..hehe by kicking him on the floor. 🤣
waiting fr the nxt update..update soon

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Afiiiieee

@Afiiiieee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#703

Wow dr awesome update...👏

Waiting more of manan nokjok and romance...😳😳😆

Eagerly waiting for the next update long one...😉

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#704

Super emotional
Amazing update...
I never expected manik to tell her everything regarding his family... His grandfather... His dad ... That was so emotional...
Manik breaking down was superbly written...
Yehh.. So happy that MaNan cme close...
Manik had food in a jiffy... Aww..
The most hilarious line was by cabir..." Manik ko TLC mei noble prize" hehehhe
DJ's announcement... Yayay... Manik is the oliver...
Loved the last line..."manik was gonna write his own fairytale that will glow in stars..."
Awesome...
Thnkz 4 the pm

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HTA111

@HTA111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#705

Superb fantastic loved it

Now Nandu will know why manik was like that why he hurted her and hated everything and why he wants to be close to her and love her very much and can't live without her

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#706

really cute and awesome update

manik innocence is too cute when he woke up

continue soon

if possible PM me the next part

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#707

That was indeed beautiful and one of the best update..
Finally sab bahar aa gya..
Now they can finally start a new start..
Awesome update dea..
Loved it.
Cont soon.
Love..mini

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pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#708

u describe manik pain beautifully ...broken soul n orphan nandu with sweet memories ...

both will fill each other weekness ...manik u r a gem True love is selfless. It is prepared to sacrifice...hope her love will fill all emptiness in his life till now ...thanx for pm