Manik & Nandini Stars & Fireflies part 85 page 143 thread 2

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rimsha01

@rimsha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Ur this update has compelled me to give a feedback. I dont comment much nd I am not good with words. But i want to tell you that after reading this i am just craving to read more nd more. But to my dismay u always give chotu sa post thanks to your famous brainfreeze!!

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ayush

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Hey shweta...
Nice update..
Actually not nice but cute n sweet update..
Ab to Manik n nandu ka patch up karwa do yaar..
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm..
Bye..
Take care..
Lots of love..
Puccha..

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

hehe manik the mind reader
loved it
totally awesome
please do continue
bye sumi

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jashanpreet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#614

I am obsessed with your stories...
Loving this vulnerable manik

I loved it

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divtan

@divtan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

hi I came accross ur story recently and fell in love with it !!
itz such a beautiful FF
wooowwiee :) :) :)
plz send me updates too
i read all chapters in a go !! 😃😃😃
i am already craving for more chapters !!
keep writing
its a good piece of work !!
👏👏👏

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

its always a pleasure to read ur story

the way you show the emotions masha allah

loved the way manik wishing her good evening

loved the way kabir n abhi admiring them

loved the inner fight of nandini s feelings

she loves him but she cant ...

manik with all his charm trying to win his love back slowly

he want to be her best frnd ...awww

thanq for such a nice update

its beautiful

thanqq

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ishu92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#617

Its simply amazing yar..

Nandu in dilemma state.. and poor manik.. Super combination.

I hope everything 'll be fine soon. U r expressing in a beautiful way yar.. I loved it.

Keep going

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juhidoshi

@juhidoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#618

😊It is really really good.. I just read the whole thing in a day and I'm mesmerized by the way you potray everything. Just loving the concept and everything..