MaNan FF: The Forbidden Fruit (Chapter 26 on Page 82) (25/05/16)

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aliyaangel

@aliyaangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

that ws nyc.. n ofcourse unexpected..
cabiraaa.. ye kya kar rha h
hmmm manik is acting weird...
wats up wid them.. eager to read futher.. n the story unfold.. update soon dear.. :)
-Aliya

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

wohoo amazing storyline n amazing update
loved it to the core
exactly matched wid the story title
cont soon
plz pm me if possible

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Witcher

@Witcher

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

I just found this story again, I like the way you write

So Cabir hates her, poor girl, but he is playing cupid between Manan, so I supporting him

I like how you didn't turn Nandini into a love sick fool, who can't talk, she is quite confident

Do pm if possible

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

great update

but i don't like the attitude wala cabir

i hope manan have a good married life

keep up the good work :)

Edited by sharon.babu - 10 years ago

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86MISHA

@86MISHA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Omg

What a update

Loved it

Keep writing

Waiting for next

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Shit!! It's going to get messy!

And mess is what we love ;)

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ecstasy.

@ecstasy.

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Thank you for the appreciation, everyone. Just a heads up that most of my PMs will probably be late as I am still a newbie and IF won't allow me to make too many posts. Also, in order to receive PMs please only like the last post on page 3.