MaNan || Love-Sick Foes || Chapter 10 - Page 32 - 9th September.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: __Aarti__
Too good dear...u write so beautifully :)
love ur story a lot .

Thanx😆

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Micky

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: HTA111
Wow outstanding superb fabulous update

Loved manik pov as it gives more perspective to the story and get to know his feelings towards Nandu too as he changed himself for her and craving for her to see her to talk to her

Manik hate 3 people whom he is talking about and he again fell in love with Nandu

Continue soon and thanks for pm

He is very confusing, isn't he?

Wait for the next update.

Thankyou😳

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drnidsur

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: shavashava

Hehe😳 You updated today, didn't you? 😆
And your story is definitely too much better than mine.😳 So why worry
Thankyou and welcome 😃😛
The next chapter is on its way. I am trying to make it a little longer. Thinking of adding Manik's pov in the same chapter instead of a different one.🥱 What's say? 😕😕

hahah...ur writing is anyday better than mine 😆

well..thats a good idea , cause writing the same scene from 2 povs will confuse many also i guess n it'll make it drag imo ...otherwise its up to u 😳

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Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Beautiful work .. Lovin' it .. update soon

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Absa hasna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

wow...what an amazing story...
i jus loved each and every part..
jus now i read all part in 1 go...
u penned it so well dea...n thanks for the lovely n wonderful story..
the way u write is jus outstanding...must say u blessed with writing skill...keep it up...
its jus wow story..hats off to2 u ...u knw wot u rocked it...plsss update soon ..cant wait so long..plsss try to update regularly...desperately waiting for ur update

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Micky

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1
wow...what an amazing story...
i jus loved each and every part..
jus now i read all part in 1 go...
u penned it so well dea...n thanks for the lovely n wonderful story..
the way u write is jus outstanding...must say u blessed with writing skill...keep it up...
its jus wow story..hats off to2 u ...u knw wot u rocked it...plsss update soon ..cant wait so long..plsss try to update regularly...desperately waiting for ur update

Thank you.

Would update soon.

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Micky

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: piyasmanan
gayab...where r u...update soon.

Give me 2 days, will you?

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Micky

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: SrishtiThakur
PLS UPDATE NA..WAITING SO LONG

Mind waiting for a couple of days hmm?

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Micky

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: drnidsur

hahah...ur writing is anyday better than mine 😆
well..thats a good idea , cause writing the same scene from 2 povs will confuse many also i guess n it'll make it drag imo ...otherwise its up to u 😳

Adding their povs in the same chapter. But totally different situations. 😉
The readers are loving Manik's pov more, that's why 🥱

Stop joking woman, you are clearly better than me 😳

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