MaNan || Love-Sick Foes || Chapter 10 - Page 32 - 9th September. - Page 20

Hey..

Woow, I love your speed, thank you ❤️
Manik and Aliya have a very sweet bond
You wrote that really well 👏

The last line made me think, I think he did not fall again, in fact he never stopped

Love hurts but the pain is worth it

Really enjoyed reading Manik's POV

awsm ...loved it

Amazing update

Originally posted by: littlesnow

Waooow update...wo b itna jaldi...
It was nice...u penned manik's emotions very well...
He is too afraid to accept his feelings for nandini coz of his own past...
M just waiting to know his past...
Waiting for next update...

Originally posted by: drnidsur

firstly u r giving so freq updates that i m getting humiliated as a writer n thinking of writing mine sooon 😆😆

thats soo sweet of u ...srsly i knw how much time goes into writing n esp making sure u dont leave anything out 👏

the update was really good ..i m liking the way its going ...n its making me curious as well .😳

Originally posted by: bhaswatee1308

You are really a sweetheart... Thank you so very much for the back to back updates... Just loved them. I also love Manik's POV the most.

Please update the next chapter soon.

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

awww...that was sooo cutee..

i wanted aryaman and alya's matter to be solved soon...they are such sweethearts...😳😊

and now this manan...i wish someone could give some brains to this manik malhotra😆😉

i hope usko jldi akal aa jaaye..😆😃

both 8th & 9th chapter were awsomee.😊

thanx for the pm dear.😊

Originally posted by: chair1992

Woow, I love your speed, thank you ❤️
Manik and Aliya have a very sweet bond
You wrote that really well 👏

The last line made me think, I think he did not fall again, in fact he never stopped

Love hurts but the pain is worth it

Really enjoyed reading Manik's POV

Originally posted by: gauriangel

Hey..

read all chapters in go..

nice story..

many stories going on simultaneously. ..I like the characters in your story..mukti beera arya and specially aliya..she is such a sweet and loving frnd..

Wats up wid Manik..difficult to understand him.. initial chapters he seemed good..introvert like aliya described him..But then he is a flirt and had numerous gfs. .is something u told later on..

Good that u are giving his pov .. .it helps to understand him better..And who are the other 3 whom manik loved and now he hates them so much ...

Did aliya and Manik had any past..It gAve me that vibe...I may be wrong though..