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PART 37 :

Nandini slowly tries to stand straight and manik also without saying anything makes her stand straight. She simply goes and sits in a corner. Manik too goes and sits beside her. He looks her and asks again. Nandini remains silent and

MANIK : nandini please agar tum mujhe bathaogi nahi tho mujhe patha kaise chelega haa so please bolo na kya hua.

NANDINI : wo actually wo main isliye rori thi ki matlab mujhe woo.

MANIK : nandini tumhe khud patha bi hain ya nahi ki tum kyu rori thi

Nandini slowly nods as a no.

MANIK : what arrey main tho aise hi bolra tha matlab tumhe sach main nahi patha ki tum kyu rori thi haan?

NANDINI : hm haan wo mujhe bas rona aara tha aur bahuth gussa bi

MANIK : maine already dekha ki tum gusse main thi aur ro bi rahi thi tho wo chodo aur ye batao ki tum gusse main the kyu matlab hua kya

NANDINI : bola na patha nahi tho aur kitni baar puchoge and turns her face.

MANIK : like seriously matlab bina kuch jaane hi tumne gussa main aakar mujhe ulta seeda sunakar class se bahar jaane ko bola???

NANDINI : haan haan aur haan ab tum mera dimag aur math kao

MANIK : do you even know how dumb you are sounding haan.

NANDINI : you know what bahuth hogaya main iske baare main aur zyada bath nahi karna chahthi.

MANIK : acha listen chelo ek kaam karthe hain you tell me everything and I'll help you out to know ki tum asal main gussa kyu the teek hain

NANDINI : nooo kyu ki iski zarurath hi nahi hain hogaya na tho bas ab

MANIK : haan hogaya lekin tum vahi baar baar repeat nahi kar sakthi I mean at least tumhe tho patha hona chahiye na ki tum kya karri ho kyu karri ho so now just think & start talking about morning.

Nandini slowly closes her eyes and

NANDINI : patha hain jab main suba gar se nikli tho tum par bahut gussa ara tha lekin jab school akar tumhe dekha tho thodi der ke liye main sab bulgayi aur jis tharah se tumne mujhe sorry bola na tho tho main tum par gussa kar hi nahi payi.

Manik sees her and listens to her smiling.

NANDINI : main class main kabir aur dhruv ko sab bathana chahthi thi sab share karna chahthi ki aaj thak mujhe kisine tumhare tharah sorry nahi bola aur bathana chahthi thi ki main bahuth kush thi par you you idiot ruined everything by not sitting with me in the class.

MANIK : ek second tho kya hua agar main aage bait gaya tho tum tho bait sakthi thi na kabir aur dhruv ke saath tho tum mujhe kyu blame karri ho haan

NANDINI : kyu ki jo kuch hua wo hamare dono ke beech hua aur main wo sari bathe tumhare sath baitkar unhe bathana chahthi thi par tum tum tho mujhe dekha thak nahi class main aur jake alia ke saath bait gaye.

MANIK (in mind) : acha tho madam ko bura laga ki main ne usse class main dekha bi nahi aur alia & mukti ke saath baitgaya woww matlab main uska help karna chahra tha par unjane main wo khud meri madad karri hain and smiles and then says haan continue continue.

NANDINI : nahi mujhe kuch nahi bolna hain

MANIK : hoo haan tum thak gayi hogi na itna sab kuch bolkar tho for now you take a break and I will continue.

NANDINI : very funny jo karna hai karlo.

MANIK : actually jab main class ke bahar se mukthi aur alia ko dekha tho thab hi samaj gaya tha ki wo mujhpe bahuth gussa the aur isiliye unhe manane ke liye main unke saath bait gaya vaise agar patha hotha ki tum mere saath baitna cha

NANDINI : hoo please mujhe tumhare sath baitkar sirf kabir aur dhruv se bathe share karni thi aur uske baad main khud tumhe bej dethi kayi aur baitne ke liye.

MANIK : achaa shayad and smiles

Nandini was saying all this closing her eyes.

MANIK : vaise patha hai generally alia aur mukthi jab bi mujhse naraz hothe hai na tho main unhe kuch hi der main mana letha hu lekin aaj mujhe sach main bahuth mehnath karni padi unhe manane ke liye.

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : mujhe patha tha ki mera gana sunkar wo jaroor khush ho jayenge aur isliye main ne gana gaya aur haan tum ne bathaya nahi tumhe kaise laga mera gana.

NANDINI : gane ki tharah

MANIK : hoo wow really haan...idiot!!!!!

NANDINI : smiles and jiske liye gaya wo tho kush huye na tho bas

MANIK : haan wo tho hain sab ache se hogaya aur sir bi correct time pe agaye mera gana katham hone ke baad varna sara plan flop ho jatha. (In mind) "ye class main shayad kuch aur hi sochri thi jo iske muh se hi bulvana hoga" & then continues vaise ek bath batao sir ne aaj jo class mai bathaya na wo sab tumhe samaj mai aaya kya.

NANDINI : class main haaa nahi wo matlab main unka class nahi suni

MANIK POV : deka patha tha mujhe and says kyaa nahi par tum tho class main hi thi naa tho phir

NANDINI : haan tho kya hua agar class main thi tho maine nahi suna bas aur is main konsi badi bath hain tum ne suna kya class nahi na tum bi tho busy the na alia ke saath tho phir.

MANIK POV: kya abi abi main ne wohi suna matlab she actually said that I was busy with alia. He recollects everything how alia was holding him and all that and then Goddd ab samja main yaa actually ye ye is liye gussa thi mannn she cried like crazy because I was sitting with alia and she was leaning on my shoulder.

NANDINI : dekha tum kuch bol bi nahi pare ho kyuki tumhe khud nahi patha ki class main sir kya explain karre the aur vaise mujhe ye sab nahi kehna chahiye par agar tum dono chaho tho bahar time spend kar sakthe ho na class main kyuu and then stops suddenly.she just recollects all the things she said before few minutes. she suddenly opens her eyes and (In mind) ek minute main iss liye rori thi kyuki I couldn't see him with her like seriously nahi nandini thu pagal hai kya aise kaise kar sakthi hain thu itni idiot nahi hain.wo uske best friend ke sath baitra tha aur thu thu patha nahi kya kya sochri hain.ye sahi boltha hain thu idiot hai sabse badi idiot. Thu bekar main usse gussa thi ayyooo and says loudly "ayyappaa ye maine kya kardiya".

Manik was smiling all along and slowly says "nandini"

Nandini looks him and says to herself ayyappaa ye ye ladka bahuth katharnak hai isne vahi kiya jo isne kaha mujhe tho sab patha chel gaya lekin kya isse patha chela hoga nahi ayyapa nahi kyuki agar aisa hua na tho main usse kya jawab dungi aur upar se mere baare main kya sochega mujhe tho sochkar hi dar lagra hai tho phirrr

Manik holds her hand and calls her again "nandini" she comes out of her thoughts and looks him.

MANIK : nandini ye FAB 5 jo hain na wo mere liye bahuth mayine rakhta hain aur un sab main har ek chahe wo kabir ho ya dhruv ya mukthi ya phir alia ye sab mere liye meri jaan se bi badkar hain aur un main se koyi bi mere liye personally zyada kareeb nahi hai i mean ki you know kabir ho ya mukthi ho ya phir alia sabi mere liye equal hain aur kareeb bi lekin specifically koyi ek insaan mere zyada kareeb nahi hain alia bi nahi hum sab ek saath hi apne secrets share karthe hai aur har ek ko equally importance dethe hain aur main sirf itna batha saktha hu ki hum sab dosth se badkar hain in fact you know hum sab ek family hain. Alia meri best friend hain and frankly speaking mujhe nahi patha ki wo mere bare kya sochthi hain lekin jaha thak main jantha hoon wo bi mujhe acha dosth hi manthi hain lekin haan I know ki wo mere bare main kuch zyadi hi sochthi hain aur pareshan bi hothi hain jiske liye main kuch nahi kar saktha.

Nandini was listening him and didn't even realised that tears were rolling from her eyes.

Manik slowly wipes her tears and cups her face.

He continues mujhe nahi patha tha ki wo nandini moorthy jo koyi bi situation main manik malhotra ko chup kara sakthi hain khud itni delicate hogi.

AM SORRY AM REALLY SORRY

Aaj mujhe patha chela ki ye Jo tumhara dil hain na wo glass se bi zyada delicate hain tho from now i'll make sure ki main aisi galthiyan na karo jiski vajah se tumhe aanson ki barsath karna pade.

NANDINI POV: ayyappaa ye ladka jo iss vakth mere hath pakad kar mujhse mafi mangra hain aur wo bi us galthi ke liye jo usne kiya hi na ho main main kya bolu uske bare main haan sirf do din aur un main se bas bara gante hum saath the lekin phir bi isse mere baare main itna sab kuch patha hain muje nahi patha ki ye jo bi hora hai mere sath wo kya hain aur sahi bi hai ya nahi par haan main sirf itna batha sakthi hoon ki mujhe ye sab acha lagtha hain. Jab bi ye mere sath hotha hain tho mujhe kushi hothi hain and comes out of her thoughts when manik calls her & again says

Manik tumhe patha bi nahi hai ki ye Jo tumne sab kaha hain use sunkar mai kaise feel karri hoon aur tumhe sorry bolne ki zarurath bilkul nahi hain aur aur she was again having tears & manik interrupts her saying

Bas bas tum kuch na hi bolo tho hi acha hoga varna firse tumhare iss aansuyon ke barish main mujhe beegna padegi aur haan ek bath aur tum zara strong bano na matlab agar tum aise hi rahogi tho koyi bi aake tumhe rula ke aram se chela jayega

NANDINI : tum ho na tho mujhe sambal lena.

Manik was speechless and his eyes became moist. Nandini couldn't see him like that and changed topic.

NANDINI : patha hain manik sab hasre honge hame dekh kar matlab sach main sirf do din hue hain hame milkar aur hamare beech itna sab kuch hogaya hain

MANIK : haan sahi hain lekin ek bath batao tum ye itna kuch kyu hone deri ho hamare beech hmm

NANDINI POV : kyun ki jab ek ladki kisi ladke pe vishwas karthi hain na tho uske liye aur uske saath kuch bi kar sakthi hain.

MANIK : hello main tumse kuch puchra hoon.

NANDINI : tum aur tumhare thede sawal phir se shuru hogaye haan.

MANIK : acha suno zara ek baar socho na matlab hum dono yaha iss kamre main akele hai aur agar main chahu tho kuch bi saktha hoon you know matlab kuch bi &

NANDINI : manik I trust you and i know ki tum aisa kuch nahi karoge

Manik smiling slowly says and I promise ki main tumhara ye trust kabi nahi thodunga.

NANDINI : kuch kaha kya

MANIK : wo actually haan matlab thab se hum ne kaafi kuch suna aur kaha tho ab kuch aur kare and winks.
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PART 38 :

Manik leans towards her and haan tho main ye kehra tha ki you know

NANDINI : chuhe manik chuhe

MANIK : what??? kya chuhe!!!

NANDINI : kya matlab chuhe manik rats wo mere pet main ek dusre ke saath "pakdo pakdo" game kelre hain

Manik starts laughing and moves back saying "acha tho chuhe ke pet main chuhe dodre hain haan"

NANDINI : manikkk and pouts

Manik take out chocolate from his pocket smiling

MANIK : hmmm ye lo

NANDINI : wow chocolate wo bi dairy milk and takes it and opens it fastly. she was about to eat but manik holds her hands and

MANIK : aaa tum koyi bi kaam teek se nahi kar sakthi kya and leans towards her

NANDINI : manik please and stops him

Manik smiles & drags the chocolate

MANIK : what main tho bas ye chocolate lera tha and eats it. He looks her and then continues ek second tumhe kya laga nahi matlab main tumheee haa like seriously and smirks

NANDINI : wo wo kuch nahi par tum ye chocolate kyu kaare ho tumne tho mujhe di thi na phir

MANIK : haan diya tho tha par tume na manners bilkul bi nahi hain you know jab koyi insaan kuch detha hain tho use thank you bolthe hai par lagtha hai tumhe ye kisine nahi sikaya isiliye mai tumse puchra tha ki tum kyu koyi bi kaam teek se nahi karthi par tum tho kuch aur hi and again starts eating

NANDINI : achaaa tho tumhe thnx chahiye na tho teek hai and starts hitting him hardly and then ye lo lo na lo aur bolu thnx I don't mind haa and continuously hits him

MANIK : arrreyy nandini listen nandini nandiniii

finally he holds her waist with his right hand and pulls her closer.They both could feel their hot and warm breaths. He comes closer to her and rubs her nose with his. He gets lost in her eyes and slowly tries to kiss her. She looks into his eyes and slowly drags chocolate from him and pushes him away giving a smirk. She sits and starts eating it like a cute baby. He stares at her and smiles looking her cuteness. She looks him and tries to break the chocolate to give him. He holds her hand and takes it. He bits it looking at her. She smiles and starts blushing. He again gives it to her and they both soon finish eating.

MANIK : hmm tho chuhe baag gaye

NANDINI : makes sad face and nahi

MANIK : kyaa tumne itni badi Chocolate kayi lekin phir bi nahi

NANDINI : oo hello aade se zyada tumne kaya hai tho tum aisa bilkul nahi bol sakthe

MANIK : what like seriously haan

Nandini pouts and turns her head

MANIK : acha suno tum ye dikne main itni choti ho na phir tumhare pet main itna kuch Kane ke liye jagah kaha se atha hain????

NANDINI : you giraffe itna kuch matlab kya haan main ne sirf aada chocolate kaya hain aur tumhe kisne kaha ki chote log kam kathe hain haan tum na tum apna dimag zyada math chelao

MANIK : aur tum apna zuban zyada math chelao

NANDINI : how dare you aa tum tum

MANIK : mujhe tumhe chup karane main zyada der nahi lagegi aur tum bi ache se janthi ho ki main uske liye kya karunga hain na

Nandini remembers their kiss and starts blushing

Manik sees her blushing and smiles

MANIK : achaa tho nandini moorthy ko chup karane ka sirf ek hi tarika hain hmmm

NANDINI POV : ayyappa main iss ladke ka kya karu ab agar kuch bolungi tho wo sach main mujhe phirse kii nahi baba nahi lekin agar kuch nahi bolungi tho mujhe aur pareshan karega offoo ayyappaa ye kaha fasa diya mujhe

MANIK : tum apne ayyappa se baad main bath karlena aur philal ye lo and gives her another big chocolate

Nandini gives a huge smile and says awww ek aur chocolate and takes it and starts eating not letting manik to reach her hands.

MANIK : listen nandini doon na

NANDINI : manik agar kana hi tha tho mujhe kyu diya hmm ab dediya na tho chodo aur mujhe kane do yu bar bar disturb math karo

MANIK : ye acha hai haan mera chocolate leke mujhe hi kane nahi deri ho

Nandini was busy in licking her fingers and then says hmm

MANIK : tumhare chekkar main maine bi subase kuch nahi kaya and stops for sometime and then again says chodo yar main ye sab tumhe batha bi kyu raha hu tumhe disturb kara hu na fine mai kuch nahi bolunga and turns his face

Nandini looks him and offers to take it

MANIK : nahi chahiye khud kalo

Nandini moves a little bit closer and asks him again to have it. He jerks her hand and looks away.

Nandini says "tum na" and makes him eat chocolate forcefully. He looks her seriously and she smiles.

NANDINI : ooo tho giraffe gusse main bi bahuth cute lagtha hai and pulls his cheeks

Manik smiles and "acha cute haa"

NANDINI : tum kare ho ya main kao

Manik says fine and starts eating.

NANDINI : vaise tum roj apne pocket main chocolates leke gumte ho kya

MANIK : pagal samja hain kya mujhe of course not aaj tho bas wo and stops suddenly

NANDINI : kyaa mujhe kuch sunayi nahi diya

MANIK : haan tho maine kab kuch kaha and sees her questioning eyes and then hmm wo ye chocolates tumhare liye laya tha par de nahi paaya

Nandini smiles and they both soon finish eating.

Nandini shows her hand to manik and says hmm doo

MANIK : what????

NANDINI : arrey mujhe patha hai tho stop acting and give me another one chelo fast doon na

MANIK : listen idiot main tumhare liye chocolates ki dukaan nahi laya mere paas sirf do hi the jo hum already ka chuke hai tho now don't ask me any more chocolates

NANDINI : arrey I know ki you are lying tho bolo kaha hai tumhare pocket main hmm & leans forward to put her hands in his pocket

MANIK : listen main kehra hoon na sach main nahi hain

Manik doesn't allow her to put her hands inside the pocket so she places her hand outside his pocket & sees whether they were present inside or not. He tried to hold her hand but she doesn't allow him to hold & finally he holds her tightly and pulls her closer.
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Ab bas... Itne cute moments ke Baad they should not fight
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PART 39 :

FAB 4 :

Alia was sitting on the ground and crying badly. Mukthi also had teary eyes and was sitting beside alia holding her tightly.

ALIA : kaha ho tum manik kaise ho pura school dund liya tumhe lekin tum kahi par bi nahi ho

KABIR : alia please control yourself manik jaha bi hoga wo teek hoga aur trust me jaldi sab kuch teek ho jayega

MUKTHI : hum thab se use pagalon ki tharah dundre hain lekin phir bi wo nahi mila aur tum kehre ho ki sab teek hoga kaise kabir kaise

DHRUV : girls please tum logo ke rone se bi wo nahi milega hame bas thoda sa wait karna hoga aur

ALIA : wait!! seriously dhruv ek baar time deklo we have almost finished our school timings aur tum bolre ho ki hame aur wait karna chahiye tho teek hai ye bi batha dona ki hame aur kitna der wait karna chahiye hmm ek ganta ya doo gante ya phir rath thak nahi bolo na ek kaam karthe hai hum abi gar jathe hai aur kal school vapas aneke baad uske bare main sochthe hain teek hain

Dhruv goes and holds her.

DHRUV : alia am sorry mera matlab wo nahi tha main ache se jantha hu ki tum bahuth pareshan ho lekin jaise tumne kaha ki thodi der main hamara school time katham ho jayega tho uske baad sir khud usse room se bahar nikalenge aur hame bas thab thak wait karna hoga

Alia and mukthi say in unison sachi

Kabir goes and holds mukthi

KABIR : haan sachi aur manik khud hamare paas chelthe hue ayega aur please thab thak ke liye khud par control rakiye aur haan ek bath aur please I beg you don't cry kyuki agar aap log issi tharah thodi der aur royenge na tho apna chehra bigad loge jisse dekthe hi manik ko patha chel jayega ki hum ne matlab dhruv aur main ne tum logo ka kayal bi nahi raka aur uski vajah se hamari shekele bi bigaad dega and at the end hamari charo ki shekle dekhne ke layak nahi honge.

Alia and mukthi smile listening this. They both say sorry at the same time and smile looking each other.

Dhruv and kabir smile and even they say sorry at the same time and again smile looking each other.

ALIA : tum log kyu sorry bolre ho

KABIR : wooo bas aise hi tum log ne kaha na tho hamne bi bas yuhi keh diya

MUKTHI : tum log pagal hoo

DHRUV : hmmm acha tum log zara fresh hoke aana thab thak hum yahi par wait karthe hain

ALIA : kyu kya hua mujhe kayi nahi jana hai par mukthi tu chahthi hai

MUKTHI : nahi mujhe bi kayi nahi jana hain main yahi par teek hoon

DHRUV : teek hain as you wish

KABIR : arrey dhruv thu bi na kya sochra hain dekh ye dono kuch nahi samjenge tho thu sab sach sach bolde common

DHRUV : kabir kya kya sach bolu

KABIR : chod yar tujhse nahi hoga woo girls actually baath ye hain ki you know since you were crying for so long tum dono ki shekle na bahuth darawni si hogaye hai jo tum log ofcourse nahi dekh pare honge tho dhruv bas ye kehna chara hai ki agar tum log zara apne is pyare mukh ko apne mulayam hathon se done ki kasht karenge tho acha hoga hamare liye hain na dhruv and they both start smiling.

ALIA : kabirrr acha fine chel mukthi we will go and fresh up varna ye hame aise hi sunathe rahenge and they both leave.

DHRUV : ufff thank god they are fine now varna main tho bahuth dar gaya tha

KABIR : hmmm main bi kuch der ke liye dar gaya tha par its ok yar hum ne sambal liya na tho ab uske bare main zyada sochenge nahi

DHRUV : hum nahi kabir thu ne akele hi sab sambal liya agar thu nahi hasatha na tho wo log abi thak rothe hi bait the shayad

KABIR : maine sirf hasaya tha dhruv lekin thune unhe ache se samjaya tha jo unhe hasane se bi zyada zaruri tha aur isliye hum dono ko ada ada credit jatha sab teek Karne main samjaaa????

DHRUV : hmmm samaj gaya vaise ab thak un dono ke beech sab kuch teek hua hoga na

KABIR : haan un dono ke beech sab kuch teek ho jane ke saath aur kaafi kuch bi hua hoga

DHRUV : kabirrr

KABIR : acha vaise ye batha tu ne socha kya ki wo log ab kar kya rahe honge hmmm and winks.

MANAN :

Manik gazed at her while Nandini lowered her face looking down trying hard not to blush. He pulled her more closer and her hair were falling on his face. He inhaled her beautiful jasmine scent and was totally lost in her. Nandini slowly lifted her head and her eyes got locked on to his eyes. Her left hand was placed on his chest while right hand was still on outside his pocket his hold on her waist became tight. Their faces were barely inches apart. Both can feel their breaths embracing each other.

FAB 4 :

DHRUV : kabir wo actually hum alia aur mukthi ko iss tarah nahi rula sakthe

KABIR : haan dhruv thu sahi bolra hai lekin ye bath bi sach hain ki hum Jo bi karre hai na wo manik ki khushi ke liye hain. main main kya bolu thu jantha hai na use itne saalo se wo bas muskurane ki natak karra tha lekin in do dino main Jo khushi main ne uske chehre par dekhi hain wo wo asli hain aur main sach main chahtha hoon ki wo hamesha hemesha aise hi kush rahe aur agar uski kushi ki vajah nandu hain tho

DHRUV : hum usse buddy ke life se door nahi jaane denge

KABIR : haan aur i know ki iske chekkar main hum alia aur mukthi ko na chahthe hue bi hurt karre hain lekin hum aur kar bi kya sakthe hai par I am sure jab hum unhe sab samjayenge tho wo sab ache se samaj jayenge

MUKTHI : kon kya ache se samaj jayenge guys????

Kabir and dhruv turn around and see alia and mukthi behind them

kABIR : wo main ye bolra tha ki wo mukthi asal main matlab ye ki wo

DHRUV : wo mukthi wo sir haan kabir bolra tha ki you know ab agar hum sab jake sir se ache se bath karke samjayenge tho shayad wo sab kuch ache se samaj jayenge

KABIR : haan haan yahi yahi kehra tha main and slowly says to dhruv thank you thu ne phirse bacha liya

ALIA : no way guys I am gonna kick him for sure this time

MUKTHI : ok ok guys ek kaam karthe hai kabir aur dhruv you both go and talk to that idiot thab thak main aur alia bahar wait karthe hai kyuki am sure u both can handle him easily without creating much trouble

ALIA : hmmm teek hain par agar phir be nahi mana tho aaj use ham se koyi bi nahi bacha payega

KABIR : fine alia and thnx mukthi sach main tum ne hamare liye bahuth easy kar diya varna and looks dhruv and then mera matlab hum yehi sochre the ki tumhe kaise samjaye and all that

ALIA : hmmm guys ab chelo we can't waste our time here mujhe jalse jal manik ke paas jana hain aur usse milna hain

They all first go to the sir and kabir and dhruv both try hard to convince him and finally after a long time convince him & come out of room.

ALIA : kya hua kya kaha usne wo manik ko room se nikalra na kyaaa

DHRUV : alia relax usne hamari baath manli and he might be coming out anytime and take us to manik.

Alia jumps and hugs him. Kabir and mukthi also join them and have a group hug.

SIR : ye kya hora yaha par tum log hamesha kyu bhool jathe ho ki ye school hain hmmm

They break the hug and stay silently

DHRUV : sorry sir wo bas aise hi hum hum chelte hain na sir manik ke paas

ALIA : wo actually aap batha sakthe hain ki manik ko apne lock kaha kiya hain

SIR : you don't ask me any questions aur you both girls yahi par raho we three will go and bring manik and nandini here

MUKTHI : arrey nahi hum bi ayenge sir please please please

KABIR : mukthi sir kehre hain na hum theen layenge na usse tho

ALIA : nahi hum bi sath chelre bas

SIR : tum logo se bath karna bi bekar hain chelo and they all leave

MANAN :

Her heart began to race like never before and she could hear his heart racing too since she was very close to him. Manik could feel her bosom attached to his chest. He felt electricity going through his whole body. Never in his life he had felt this weak and enjoyed the feeling of it.

Manik's brain died at this moment and his heart took control. He slowly lifted his face while pressing on her waist to get her closer to him. Nandini closed her eyes. She just loved whatever she was feeling now and wasn't ready on giving it up. She could feel the heat of his breath hitting her lips. A shiver wet up her spine. He slowly placed his for head on hers and closed his eyes. She was surprised but then felt happy and smiled. She smirked and again started keeping her hand inside his pocket. He opens his eyes and tries to stop her again.

MANIK : tum nahi manogi na fine and starts tickling her.

She starts laughing like hell and asks him to stop it.

MANIK : kyu jab main kehra tha tho tumne meri baath kaha suni hmm tho lo ab main bi tumhari ek nahi sununga and continuous tickling making her fall on ground and laugh like a little baby.

NANDINI : manik please acha am sorry age se aisa kabi nahi karungi pakka please manik please

He stops tickling and hmmm ab samaj main aya that no one can win over manik malhotra haaa

NANDINI : acha no one haa and she starts tickling him.

Manik looks her and then I don't feel ticklish ha ha ha.

NANDINI : acha ithu sa bi nahi hmm and continuous tickling.

MANIK : nandini nandini stop it nandiniii!!!!

(Nandini's description)

I was tickling him continuously and his laughter forced me to continue it for a longer period. Soon we both landed on ground lying on each other. We both became mad tickling each other and laughing like hell. We were so close to each other but still neither he stopped tickling nor me. while in the process of tickling each other I suddenly went very close to him and due to his sudden move at the same time our lips met each other once again. I cursed my fate for this and wanted to get up immediately but how could I how could I forget that I was lying on top of a man who would surely not let me go that easily. Yes as soon as our lips touched the naughty mode of manik was turned to on button & he held my waist tightly pushing me into him. I could feel his smile and Instead of pushing him away, my hands ended up behind his neck pushing him deeper into the kiss. He raised his hand up to my hair and tangled his fingers in it. We continued to kiss passionately as if our life was depending on that kiss, completely forgetting ourselves and our surroundings.

Slowly we broke out of the kiss both breathing heavily and gasping for air. My cheeks were turning crimson red and i lowered my eyes shyly. A smirk decorated his face as he saw my condition. He slowly tilted his face towards me causing me to close my eyes. "Your cheeks are red." His husky voice whispered into my ear causing a chill to go up her spine.

Suddenly a sound on the door interrupted us. We got up immediately and before could see or say anything FAB 4 & sir entered the room.Alia came running towards manik and hugged him. He hugged her back while his eyes were still stuck on him. He soon broke the hug & assured everyone that he was fine.

(End of nandini's description)

SIR : Tho Mr Manik Malhotra kaisa raha apka experience hmmm

Manik looked nandu & remembered their cute and sweet moments and unknown smile krept on his face.

SIR : guys as you both understood now clearly that I can give any kind of punishment to you i expect that atleast from now you both would not miss any classes hmmm

Manik and nandini were silent thinking that they would love to miss classes every day if they were going to get such kind of punishments where they both could get quality time to spend with each other.

KABIR : Haan ye bath ache se samaj lena aur ye bilkul math sochna ki agli baar bi tum dono ko isi tharah room main lock kiya jayega

DHRUV : Sir yaha se chelthe hain na
And they all go out of the room. Sir leaves from there while FAB 5 and nandini were still standing.

ALIA : manik tum teek ho na patha hain hum bahuth dar gaye the aur

MANIK : alia relax main teek hoon mujhe kuch nahi hua

MUKTHI : haan vaise dekhe patha chelra hain lekin manik mujhe tho laga ki darwaza kolthe hi thu sir ko bahuth peetega par thu thu tho kuch bola bi nahi hmmm

MANIK : haan wo mukthi actuallyyy

DHRUV : guys wo bahuth thak gaya hoga so ye sawal jawab hum baad main karenge

KABIR : haan haan bahuth thak gaya hoga beechare ko patha nahi kya kya karna pada hoga andar and looks at nandini who was busy in her own world thinking about manik and then says hain na nandini.

NANDINI : haan kya sorry maine suna nahi

KABIR : arrey nahi nahi teek hain na ab tumhe hum kaha sunayi aur dikhayi denge tho its ok we can understand and looks at her and then continues arrey mera Matlab hain ki tum thak gayi hogi na itna kuch jo hua tumhare saath andar

Nandini once again turns into red and tries to hide her face.

ALIA : kabir tum log tho kehre the ki manik ko uss idiot ne terrace ke side lekar gaya tho phir wo ye

DHRUV : alia ab wo sab sochke kya faida finally hum sab sath hain na tho hame celebrate karna chahiye

ALIA : yaa guys kyu na aaj rath party kare and looking nandu we only FAB 5

MANIK : guys am sorry par main bahuth tired hoon thoo

KABIR : hmmm right lekin ek hug tho kar saktha hain na hmm

Manik smiles and FAB 5 shares a group hug.

Manik and nandini were having glances at each other and then

KABIR : manik ye yaha par kya hai and tries to come forward pointing his lips.

Nandini widens her eyes and manik soon realises what it was looking at her expression. Before kabir could reach near him he rubs it and then

MANIK : Yarr kachre ke room main tha tho kachra hi hoga na and look nandini.

Nandini looks him and immediately turns her face.

KABIR : achaa par mujhe lagaa

MANIK : aaa vahi par rukja tujhe na aaj kal bahuth kuch lagra hain Jo asal main aisa bilkul nahi hain

MUKTHI : guys mujhe tho bahuth zor se bhuk lagri tum log chelre ho ya nahi

DHRUV : of course chelenge suba se kisine kuch nahi kaya hain thoo sabko bukh lagri hogi.

Manik and nandini look each other and smile.

KABIR : manikkk chele

MANIK : haan haan chelo.
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PART 40 :
FAB 5 and nandini reach canteen. Manik sits between kabir and alia where as nandini sits between dhruv and kabir and Mukthi was sitting between dhruv and alia.

Everyone orders sandwiches, burgers,pizzas and orange juice. Nandini and manik doesn't order anything and were still busy thinking about their moments. All were busy eating while Kabir was watching manan and smiling.

KABIR : wooo starts singing looking at nandu "wohh lamhe wohh baathein koyi na jane" nandu smiles and looks down.he turns to manik & "ye kaisi raa" and stops seeing manik with his eyebrows raised and then "ye kaisi yaadein woh barsathe woh beegi beegi baatein woh beegi baatein".manik too smiles and then Kabir point towards himself & "na main jaanu" and then pointing to everyone except manan "naa thu Jane" and then looking manik "kaisa hain ye mausam koyi na jaane" and before he could continue manik keeps a sandwich in his mouth. He take out the sandwich and starts laughing. Since dhruv too knows everything even he starts laughing. Nandini was trying hard to control herself but fails in it so makes an excuse and run out. Manik notice her face and he too turns red smiling.

MUKTHI : ho kya raha yaha par tum log aise kyu hasre ho hmm????

KABIR : hasi aari hai tho bas hasre

ALIA : what do mean by that kuch reason tho hoga na

KABIR : haan reason hain na alia aur uss reason ka naam hain manik and again bursts out laughing.

MUKTHI : kyaa manik reason hain kabir saaf saaf bolo na

KABIR : arreyyy tum log bi na manik suba se nahi tha na hamare paas lekin ab wo hamare sath hi hai tho bas is liye khushi hori hain

ALIA : you guys are really mad

MANIK : haan aur mujhe jaldi in dono ka ilaj bi karana hoga

Nandini comes and simply says that she have to leave because it was getting late and without even waiting for their reply she leaves.

Manik slowly spills orange juice on himself & acts as if it was accidentall.

MANIK : aaa guys I will just wash it and come back with in 5

DHRUV : nahi buddy thu aram se aa koyi jaldi nahi hain hum log wait karenge hmmm

KABIR : haan haan bilkul ache se bye bolke ana arrey mera matlab hain ki juice u know juice ko ache se dokar usse bye bolke aana hmmm

Manik gives an angry look and leave.

Nandini was going down and talking to herself. "Ayyappaa ye kabir na bilkul pagal hain usse tho patha bi nahi hain ki kab kaha kya bolna chahiye"

Manik holds her from back and pulls towards a corner.

NANDINI : manik chodo manikkk

He turns her face & pins to the wall

MANIK : not bad bina dekhe hi mujhe pehchan liya hmmm

NANDINI : manik kya hain tum yaha par kyu aye vaha sab baite hue hai na tho phir

MANIK : haan tho tum vaha se aise baag ke kyu agayi wo bi bina bye ke bole hi hmmm

KABIR : haan nandini bichara kitna pareshan hora tha

Manik and nandini turn and see kabir & dhruv standing behind them

DHRUV : sorry buddy hum bi nandini ko bye bolne hi aaye hain.

KABIR : haan par wo vala bye nahi jo thu usse kehna chahtha hain hamara bye tho bahuth simple hain

Manik goes and holds their neck tightly with his both the hands. "Sry kuch sunayi nahi diya ab bolo na bolo bolo"

KABIR : saale zinda mardega kya choddd choddd

DHRUV : buddy thu mere sath tere dhruv ke sath aisa karra hain hmm

MANIK : haan main tere sath ye sab karra hoon bola tha maine iss kamine ke sath zyada math reh bolke par nahi dono ko bahuth masthi sujri thi na tho lo ab karo aur masthi hmm karo naa

NANDINI : manik chodo unhe chodo

Manik leaves them & leans to wall

Nandini smiles looking three of them & then says "pagal". All of them start laughing. Manik was laughing like hell and kabir and dhruv feel very happy seeing him laugh that loud.

Kabir goes and hugs nandini and slowly whispers "thank you thank you so much". Nandini smiles and hugs him back. They both break the hug and dhruv too comes and side hug nandini.

MANIK : main yahi par hoon

KABIR : thu jaa baad main aur nandini tum batao room main kya kya hua matlab kuch tho hua hoga zaroor lekin wo kya hain wo tumhee

Nandini hits him & moves a little far

NANDINI : kabirrr tum apna muh band rako aur philal mujhe der hori hain tho main jaa rahi hoon aur haan ab koyi kuch nahi bolega tho byeee

Kabir and dhruv say bye while manik was pleading her to wait through his eyes. She slowly said sorry and once again said bye looking manik. He turned his face but she didn't stop. He looked at stairs thinking that she might have left but she slowly cames out of wall and give a flying kiss to him. He smiles and seeing him smile she walked away happily.

KABIR : haan agar ho gaya tho bol

MANIK : kyaaa????

KABIR : arrey yar sab teek hogaya na matlab usne thuje sab bathaya?

MANIK : haan wo sab teek ho gaya

DHRUV : acha tho nandini ne sab kuch bathake sorry bi kehdi

MANIK : usne sorry kaha bola ulta mujhe hi sab kuchhh and stops

KABIR : dhruv thuje sunayi dera na

MANIK : guys bas haan uski galthi nahi thi wo khud nahi janthi thi ki wo akir gusse main kyu thi tho use sorry bolne ki zarurath hi nahi thi

DHRUV : acha par wo gusse main kyu thi???

MANIK : wo woo tum log ye sab mujhse kyu puchre ho usise puchlena kal

ALIA : guys hum log thab se vaha par wait karre hain aur tum log yaha par aram se bathe karre hoo

KABIR : oops sry acha vaise hum bi chele its getting late

MUKTHI : haan par manik thu ye juice wash kyu nahi kiya ab thak

DHRUV : wo mukthi buddy busy tha isliye hum log chelthe hain wo wash karke ajayega

ALIA : manik please jaldi ajana

KABIR : haan haan phikar not ab jaldi hi ayega kyuki jis vajah se bahar aya tha wo tho ab vaise bi nahi hai mera matlab hai ki juice almost sukh gaya tho uspe pani dalkar jaldi vapas ayega hain na.

"Yaa whatever" saying this manik leaves. Everyone go out and as soon manik returns everyone start to their house.

7 PM :
( nandini's house )

Nandu was lying on her bed and thinking about all the moments she spent with manik. She was blushing and smiling hugging her pillow.

(Manik's house)

He was sitting in his balcony holding his guitar & smiling thinking about nandini. He suddenly hears some strange voices and rushes down to see what it was. He sees his dad breaking alcohol bottles.

MANIK : dad dad stop it kya hua daddd!!!

MANIK'S DAD : manik manik main bahuth bura hoon na isliye koyi bi mujhse pyaar nahi kartha hain na

MANIK : dad aisa kuch nahi hain aap aap cheliye yaha se hum apke room main chelthe hain and he takes him to his room.

Manik's dad fall on ground and makes manik to sit behind him.

MANIK : dad utiye cheliye aap bed par sojayiye hum kal bath karenge

MANIK'S DAD : nooo nooo nahi mujhe abi isi vakth bath karni hain

MANIK : dad aap hosh main nahi hain isliye hum kal bath karenge

MANIK'S DAD : laughs and hosh main nahi hu isliye tho thujse bath karra hoon varna teri aankhon main dekh bi nahi saktha tha main. Manik was about to say something but he stops him & then continues sach sach batha agar main nashe main nahi hotha tho kya thu mujhse baath kartha hmmm????

Manik remains silent & looks down

MANIK'S DAD : hahaaa dekha main jantha tha thu mera shakal dekhna bi pasandh nahi kartha hain aur sahi bi hain kyuki main ne kabhi aisa kaam hi nahi kiya hai jisse thu mujhse pyar kar sake hain na

Manik was listening each and every word of his father silently.

MANIK'S DAD : patha hain teri mom ki aur meri love marriage huyi thi. ek baar sirf ek baar mile the coffee shop main, wo waha kisi kaam se ayi thi aur main apne friend ka wait karra tha. wo mere samne vali table par baiti thi aur baar baar meri tharaf dekh kar sharmari thi. Main seeda uske paas jakar use I love u kaha aur wo badle me muskurayi. Humne ek hi hafthe main shadi karli aur dono kush bi bahuth the and stopped suddenly.

MANIK : phir kya hua????

MANIK : kuch din ke liye hum khush the phir thu aya hamari zindagi main aur hamari kushiyan aur badi. Ek saal ek saal ka tha thu jab hamara company loss main chela gaya kuch nahi bacha mere paas sivayi tum dono ke aur thab mujhe patha chela ki teri mom sirf paiso main interest rakhthi thi mujhpe nahi haan usne mujhse shadi bi sirf is vajah se ki kyu ki main bahuth amir tha. main tut gaya aur pyar se mera vishwas utgaya. Maine bagna shuru kiya teri maa se aur thuj se bi Wo bi dere dere kaam karna shuru kardi aur hum dono apne kaamo main lag gaye thab se ab thak.

Manik had tears and couldn't believe his ears.

MANIK'S DAD : am sorry manik am sorry hum dono thuje janam tho de paye par pyar nahi de sake. He holds his hands and continues lekin thuje na ek bath bathao thu na kabi kisise pyar math karna kyuki har ek ladki na sirf apna faida dekthi hain aur ham jaise amir ladkon ko phasana chahthi hain haan thu agar kisise pyar hi nahi karega na tho thuje koyi dard bi nahi de saktha and saying this falls asleep in maniks lap.

Manik makes him sleep on his bed and leaves to his room.

Manik says to himself dad ki koyi galthi nahi thi aur main main unhe hi goddd kyu kyu kyu apne mom ko dad ke zindagi main beja hi kyu, agar wo dad se pyar nahi karthi thi tho unse shaadi kyu ki & closes his eyes. He sees nandini's face and then opens his eyes. Nahi nahi main ye apne sath nahi hone dunga.mujhe use door rehna hoga.

(Nandini's house)

Manik kal se hamari nayi shuruwath hogi jaha hum dono sath main honge sirf main aur tum aur hamari khushiyan and closes her eyes smiling.

(Manik's house)

Miss nandini moorthy I won't let you spoil my life. yesss kal se main bi rahunga aur tum bi par hum sath main bilkul nahi honge.
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awsum..
ye manik ko kya hua ab ek right track pr aata h to dusra wrong pe chala jata h seriously offf...
hope manik ko nandini pr jldi trust aaye...
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#88
Ausom update
I must say
Ur writing skills
Ate brilliant😊😊😊
The way you
Described them
It's commendable👏👏👏
I read your story
Just now
And I can't stop myself
For commenting
Please make them together
Don't separate them
I want manik to be jealous
Maybe that makes him
Realize that he loves her
And she is not that kind of girl
Please next part asap
Eagerly waiting for it
Love
Diya😊😊😊
And one more thing Please pm me😛😛😛
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PART 41 :

SCHOOL AT 9 AM :

Nandini was sitting in the class room looking outside waiting eagerly for manik. Her eyes were stuck at the door and finally after few minutes FAB 4 entered. Her eyes wanted a glance of him and she could find everyone except him. Kabir comes and sit beside her while she was busy in searching for manik looking at the door.

Kabir starts singing "inteha hogayi intezar ki".He leans towards nandu and "ayi na kuch kabar mere yar ki". He holds her shoulder & "Ye hame hain yakin bewafa wo nahi" & when she looks him seriously turns his head & continuous "Phir vaja kya hui intezar ki". Nandu hits him and says "chup ek dam chup". Kabir keeps his finger on his lips and nods yes. Nandu smiles & he too smiles looking her. He hugs her and both were busy smiling while at the same time manik enter class room nandini gives a huge smile & waves hi to him. Manik simply turns his face & starts walking towards them.

Nandu becomes sad but still smiles at him while he was coming near them. Kabir moves a little bit and was about to say something but

MANIK : buddy thu zara kabir ke sath baitega mujhe aaj mere dono sweet hearts ke sath baitna hain

Nandini gets shocked and looks at kabir. Even kabir gets shocked and

KABIR : arrey manik thu yaha baitna already wo vaha bait gaya na tho thu baad mai baitja un dono ke sath

Manik doesn't even look at him and simply replies nahi kabir aaj mujhe yahi par baitna hain.

Nandini becomes sad and lowers her face. Dhruv comes and sit beside nandini while manik sits with alia and mukthi.

KABIR : nandini dont worry iske dimag main phir se koyi keeda gus gaya hoga wo thodi der main normal hojayega hmmm.

DHRUV : nandini am sorry main jantha hoon ki tumhe buddy ke sath baitna tha par main aur kya kartha

NANDINI : dhruv its ok aur vaise bi tum dono bi mere besties ho na so I don't have any problem hmmm

ALIA : manik thank you thank you thank you so muchhh.

MANIK : kyaa ye thank you kab se agaya hamare beech hmmm

MUKTHI : manik main thank u nahi bolungi par haan acha laga ye sunke ki tujhe aaj hamare sath baitna hain.

MANIK : offooo bas yar kya senti dialogues mare ho hmmm

Mukthi and alia say "haan haan" in unison.

Mathematics class starts.

Nandini was continuously looking manik expecting him to turn back and smile at her at least for once. He didn't looked back not even once and even if kabir and dhruv asked him something he replied them without turning his face.

Class went on for 2 hours and they finally got a break.

KABIR : manik bahar chel na kuch kaam hain.

MANIK : yahi par bolna bahar jane ki kya zarurath hain hmmm

KABIR : manik apna jawab peche palat kar mujhe dekhthe hue de

MANIK : arreyyy yar thuje jawab hi tho chahiye na tho main peche palatke doon ya nahi kya farak padtha hain

DHRUV : buddy hume aise lagra hai jaise hum koyi machine se bath karre ho please peche palat kar jawab dena

KABIR : sawal jawab baad main get up first common and makes manik get up

ALIA : yar kabir manik kehra hai na

KABIR : wo bahuth kuch kehtha hai iska Matlab ye nahi hain ki hum uska har bath mane and drags him out making a signal to nandu to come out after some time. Dhruv too goes behind them. They all go to teracce.

KABIR : kyaa problem hain teri???

MANIK : kya kya hua tu ye kya bolra

DHRUV : buddy thu nandini ko ignore kyu karra

MANIK : buddy please not about that dumbo yar please

KABIR : what kya bola tu ne dumbo

MANIK : offooo why are u people behaving like this ho kya gaya ha

KABIR : thuje kya hogaya haan wo nandini hain nandini wohi nandini jiske liye thu ne harshad ko mara wohi nandini jo nahi dikhne par teri saase ruk gayi thi wohi nandini jiske sath thu ne kal apna sara din bithaya aur thu aaj achanak usse ignore kara hain aur hamare puchne par thu use dumbo bolra hai haan

MANIK : goddd I can't believe this like seriously haan main thoda time pass kya karra tha uske sath tum log tho bahuth seriously le liye use

NANDINI : time pass!!!!!!

All three turned and looked nandini manik turned his face immediately after seeing her. She slowly walked towards him and

NANDINI : manik tum mazak karre ho na dekho please ye kabir na already suba se mujhe bahuth pareshan kara hain tho ab tum math shuru ho Jana hmmm

MANIK : buddy say her to leave from here right now

Nandini goes near & cups his face. Manik kya hua tum kisi bath se pareshan ho kya dekho i promise main kuch nahi bolungi hmm kya hua sab teek hain na tum ek baar bolke tho dekho and while she was continuing manik jerks her hands and pushes her away.

MANIK : what the bloody hell haan do char bathe kya karli tumse tum tho mere sur par baitkar nachne lagi haan.

DHRUV : buddy thu ye kya bolra hai

MANIK : listen am saying you for one last time stay away from me & never ever try again to come close to me.

Nandini slowly walks towards him and looks into his eyes.

NANDINI : your hiding yes your hiding something Kya hua tum kya chupare ho

Manik tries to leave but nandini holds her and continuous manik mujhe sach sunna hain.

Manik pulls her closer and holds her tightly

MANIK : sach sunna hain na fine now listen I am not interested in u aur main ek pal ke liye bi tumhara chehra nahi dekhna chahtha hence u stay away from me.

NANDINI : manik par kal kal hamane Jo bathe ki thi ek dusre ke sath wo wo sab

MANIK : kal mere paas tumhare chehre ko dekhne ke alawa dusra option nahi tha isliye not to get bored I talked you par mujhe nahi patha tha ki tum sirf meri bathe sunkar hi aise pagal ki tharah behave karogi

KABIR : manik stop it kya karra

NANDINI : manik wo sab wo sab sweet moments jo hamne sath main bithaye uska

MANIK : goddd!!! Why can't u get a simple thing that I am THE MANIK MALHOTRA jis par sari ladkiyan marthi hain aur agar tumhari jagah koyi aur bi ladki hothi na tho hamare beech wohi same sweet moments hothe the aur agar sari ladkiyon main se tum lucky nikli tho usme meri kya galthi

Alia and mukthi also reach terrace.

NANDINI : manik lekin hamare beech jo hua jo hum ne ek dusre ke liye feel kiye us us moment ke vakth

MANIK : ohhh man like seriously you mean after that that kkkii okk listen miss nandini moorthy I was having fun and trust me mere paas uske alawa aur ek bi reason nahi hain wo sab karne ki and let me remind u jo kuch hua na usme mere akele ka hath nahi tha and if you recollect all the things you were

KABIR : manik you are crossing your limits just stop it

MANIK : haan tho were was I yes so u were not forced for anything aur Jo kuch hamare beech hua us main hamara dono ka hath hain.

Nandini got shattered she couldn't believe her ears and didn't even wanted to believe. Her eyes became red & tears were flowing from her eyes like a river.

MANIK : yaar ab ye ansu acha fine agar tum chahthi ho ki hamare beech wo sab ho tho teek hain I won't stop you whenever u want it na u can come to me and ask for it and I promise I will never say no haan sach main any time any where u can ask for it aur agar tum ab iss vakth bi chahthi ho naaa and he gets a very tight slap from nandini moorthy. He holds his cheek and looks her.

NANDINI : This the only thing you deserve MR MANIK MALHOTRA.

Alia and mukthi got angry and tried to beat nandini but kabir and dhruv held them.

Nandini couldn't speak a word more and left from there running. kabir and dhruv followed her but couldn't find her as she ran very quickly and hided herself in the room which she named as manan room since they shared most of their moments in the same room.

Nandini sits in a corner and says to herself "ayyappaa how is it possible how could it all be fake. The love, the care and the warmth I felt in his touch couldn't be fake hain na ayyappa please ek baar ek baar boldo na ki ye sab jhut hain jo kuch bi hua hain wo sirf ek mazak hain please ayyappa please" she cries loudly hiding her face behind her hands and then says main pagal hoon na ayyappa doo din main sirf doo din main sab decide karke bina soche samje uske saath itna vakth gusar liya tho galthi tho meri hi hain na haan right sab meri galthi hain main hi sabse badi fool hoon & cries more loudly. After some time she controls herself and wipes her tears and then continues nahi nandini nahi tho kya hua agar thuj se galthi ho gayi tho haa sabse galthiya hothi hai aur isliye thuje rone ki zarurath nahi hain haan thu nahi royegi uss jaise cheap insan ke liye tho bilkul bi nahi. Usse jo karna tha wo karliya par ab main usse apne life main interfere nahi hone dungi aur ab wo ek nayi nandini moorthy ko dekhega jo pehle se bahuth strong hain. She leaves from the room and goes to their floor. Kabir sees her and comes and hugs her.

KABIR : kaha cheli gayi thi thu patha hai main aur dhruv kitna dargaye te

NANDINI : shhh kabirrr main teek hoon and controls her tears.

DHRUV : nandini tumhe jhut bolne ki bilkul zarurath nahi hain.

MANIK : time up guys

KABIR : thuje kya chahiye jitna karna tha wo karliya na phir kyu

MANIK : kabir calm down yar dekh main bas itna bathane aya ki tum log is dumbo ke sath bath nahi kar sakthe hain.

DHRUV : what do you mean

ALIA : its very simple dhruv tum dono ko is cheapo se dur rehna hain tum log usse bath nahi kar sakthe ho aur uske sath class main bait bi nahi sakthe hoo.

KABIR : what nonsense

MUKTHI : guys we are sorry par you have to choose between us

MANIK : so its FAB 5 or this dumbo

KABIR (shouts) : what the hell do you think of yourself haan kya kya

Nandini holds him and slowly says kabir calm down you don't have to choose between me and FAB 5. Main khud tum logon se bath na karu tho koyi problem hi nahi hogi

DHRUV : nandini aisa kuch nahi hoga tum please aise math kaho aur buddy ye sab kya hain tum log kyu aisa karre hoo

MANIK : buddy hum kuch nahi karre hain we FAB 5 are not together even though we are together thu samajra hain na iss dumbo ne sab bigad diya hai tho we are just making it normal again.

KABIR : open your bloddy eyes damn it ye kya karre ho

Nandini holds kabir & dhruv hands guys hum bath kare yaa na kare hum sath rahe ya na rahe hamari dosthi kayi nahi jayegi aur sabko hamari dosthi dikhane ke liye hume sath rehne ki zarurath nahi hain

KABIR : sabke liye nahi nandini hamare liye zaruri hain tum tum samaj nahi rahi ho hum hum & he have tears.

Nandini wipes his tears and shhh kya kabir ladkiyon ki tharah hmmm

ALIA : just cut this drama yar

NANDINI : I don't want to ruin FAB 5 and I hope that you will understand me. Thanks a lot for everything I had most beautiful moments of my life because of you both and with you both. I am extremely sorry if I have hurted you & trust me you are one of the best thing ever happened to me and hugs them both.

I LOVE YOU and I AM SORRY

She turns her head facing her back to them. She was about to leave but kabir holds her and "mujhe rone se mana karke khud kyu rori hoo". He turns her to his side and wipes her tears.

NANDINI : please mere liye aur mushkil math karna.

Kabir and dhruv turn their faces hiding their tears.

She slowly starts walking away backwards seeing them with teary eyes.

Jaan!!!!!

Nandini turns and looks back and with out wasting a second goes running towards him and hugs him he lifts her and makes a round.

FAB 5 gets shocked to see this.

(Here comes the new entry who is none other than "abhi". Here abhi is not nandini's consin)

Abhi : jaan kya hua thu teek hain na

MANIK POV: who the hell is he aur ye nandu ko jaan kyu bolra hain aur ye ye usse aise kyu hug karri.

NANDINI : haan teek hoon and was still crying.

ABHI : jaan please stop crying and wipes her tears. Vaise agar patha hotha ki tu mujhe itna miss karegi tho pehle hi atha hmmm

MANIK POV: miss my foot usne tere bare main bola bi nahi it means ki tu uske life main importance raktha hi nahi.

NANDINI : hmmm

ABHI : jaan kya hua thu itna pareshan kyu hain sab teek hain na

MANIK POV : jaan jaan jaan ohhh goddd!!! What bullshit is this.

NANDINI : nahi honey am ok relax

MANIK POV : what the f**k!!!!! Honey!!! Matlab seriously mujhe tho giraffe bulari thi lekin isse isse tho honeyyy yakkk mannn

ABHI : jaan ab yahi kade rahenge ya mujhe andar class main bi leke jayegi hmmm

MANIK POV : hoo tho ye kamina hamara hi class ka hain achaa

NANDINI : haan chelo

MANIK POV : haan haan chelo even I don't want to waste any time aur ab iss kamine ko patha chelega ki nandini ek minute what am I saying from that time goddd ye main kya karra hoon kyu itna affected hora hoon iss sab se

Nandini looks at FAB 5 and simply takes abhi inside class room. Even FAB 5 goes behind them and enter the class room
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Nandini and abhi enter class room. All girls forget themselves seeing such an handsome guy in front of them. All the girls eyes get stuck on abhi and start feeling jealous of nandini. Abhi simply smiles looking everyone and go and sit along with nandu in the last bench.FAB 5 enter and notice all girls staring at abhi. Manik gets hell angry while FAB 4 smile looking girls expression.They start walking to their bench while kabir & dhruv stand before nandu's bench & smile looking her.

MANIK : guysss tum dono

KABIR : dhruv kya kisine hame muskurane se bi mana kiya hain

DHRUV : patha nahi kabir mujhe aisa kuch sunayi tho nahi diya

MANIK : goddd!!! main tum logo ko baitne ke liye bolra tha

Kabir and dhruv sit on bench at both corners. They were sitting in front of nandu's bench while alia and mukthi sat in front of kabir & dhruv.

MANIK : listen agar tum log aise corners par baitenge tho main kaha baitunga.

KABIR : dhruv ab konsa class hone wala hain

DHRUV : patha nahi yar suna tha ki physics ka hoga but am not sure

MUKTHI : guys manik kuch puchra hain why are u not answering

KABIR : dhruv mujhe laga log apne sweet hearts ke sath baitna pasandh karenge tho phir ab

MANIK : guys what shit is this haaa why can't u talk to me directly look at me damn it

KABIR : bath karne ke liye chehra

DHRUV : dekhne ki kya zarurath hai

Manik realises that it were his words and understands that they were very angry on him.

ALIA : guys enough is enough tum log aisa nahi kar sakthe u know what manik u just come over here and sit with us hum inse baad main bath karenge

MANIK POV : yarrr nahi age baitunga tho inki conversation sunayi nahi degi and I can't let that happen.

MANIk : aaa nahi alia baitunga tho main yahi par chahe inhe acha lage ya nahi and pushes kabir forcefully that he falls on dhruv & he happily settles himself beside kabir.

Abhi was watching all this while nandu was busy staring outside thinking about manik.

ABHI : ise kya hogaya jaan jaan!!!!

MANIK POV : not again man dil tho karra hain ki abi isi vakth iska "jaan" lelu

NANDINI : hmmm bolo

Abhi holds her and sings "tera dhyan kidar hain ye tera hero idhar hain"

MANIK POV : goddd kamse ke kam usse aina karidne ke paise tho dedethe na wo apna shakal tho dekh letha aine main ab dekho bichara khud ko hero samajra hain

NANDINI : haan haan mere hero mera dyan tum par hi hain & smile

MANIK POV : looo ab ye ladki andhi bi ho gayi sach main mujhe apne ankhon ke samne rakhke isse hero bolri hain aur vaise bi jis ladki ka koyi dimag hi na ho uska dhyan kya ho saktha kisi cheez par

ABHI : jaan vaise tumhare sath sath yaha sari ladkiyon ka dhyan bi mujhpar hi hain shayad hmmm

MANIK POV : mujhe isse ayna tho dilana hai hi lekin uske sath sath aankhon ka bi test karvana hoga

NANDINI : hmm jab itna handsome ladka ankhon ke samne ho tho koyi kya kar saktha hain

MANIK POV : ufff lagtha hain iss ladki ke ilaj ke liye mujhe jyada paise karch honge isse pehle ye puri tharah pagal ho jaye mujhe jaldi iske bare main sochna hoga

ABHI : thnx for the compliment jaan vaise ek baath batha tere koyi naye friends nahi bane kya yaha par

Nandini becomes sad and removes his hands from his shoulder. She doesn't say anything and have teary eyes.

Manik slowly turns his head and look nandu.

ABHI : okkk vaise acha hi hain you know agar tujhe zyada friends nahi honge yaha tho thu apna Sara time mujhe de sakthi hain jo of course hum dono hi chahthe hain hai na

MANIK POV : iski tho main

NANDINI : mera tho patha nahi par am sure tum tho mera sath bilkul nahi chahthe ho kyuki agar sach main tum mujhe chahthe na tho yaha ane main itna vakth nahi lagathe

MANIK POV : hoo tho ye madam bi uska sath chahthi hain woww do pagal ek sath ek jagah isse aur kya achi bath ho sakthi hain

Kabir and dhruv were also listening their conversation.

KABIR : thuje kya lagtha hain matlab kon hoga ye

DHRUV : bahuth close lagthe hain shayad nandini ka best friend hoga

KABIR : hmmm vaise chelo acha hi hain use kisi ki sath tho milgayi na

DHRUV : haan yar sahi bolra thu

ABHI : jaan aisa kyu bolri ho main ne bahuth try kiya tha jaldi ane ki par kuch formalities ki vajah se der hogayi varna kabi aisa ho saktha hain ki honey khud apne jaan ko milne main deri kare hmmm

MANIK POV : kya bekar dialogues mara hain sach main patha nahi kisne likhe di hogi isse ye sab faltu ke dialogues

NANDINI : chodo ab mujhe nahi bath karni thuj se

MANIK POV : shukar hain kam se kam itne der ke baad hi sahi kuch tho acha nikla muh se

ABHI : kyu koyi naya boyfriend milgaya kya jo mujhse bath nahi karegi hmmm

Nandu couldn't stop herself from thinking about manik listening to the word boyfriend.soon her eyes get filled with water and she turns her face hiding her tears.Manik looks nandu and sees tears in her eyes. He feels sad and looks down back. Kabir and dhruv also see nandini and finally decide to talk to her & they were about to get up but

ABHI : jaan kya hua am so sorry main ne phirse galthi kardi na please am sorry thu dekh na idhar jaan please ek bar muskurade.

Nandu doesn't say anything and look out.

Meanwhile a teacher comes and informs that they have no class for one hour. All become happy and get busy in their own works.

Abhi goes out & comes with a guitar. Along with FAB 5 All look him surprised while nandu was busy staring out.

Abhi comes near nandu and starts
Singing...

Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu

He leans towards her and then
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi

He holds her shoulder and
Gham Baat Le Tu Apne
Humse Tu Le Hasee

He side hugs her and then
Ho Gaye Hum Abh Tere
Tu Ho Gayee Apni

Nandu gets up and walks towards door but abhi stops her and
Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu Malai lai

He places his fingers on his lips and makes a smile expression.
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi

She starts walking again but abhi pulls her and
Jawan Dil Ki Rahon Mein
Jaise Khilti Hai Kali

He makes a smile expression on her face holding her lips
Tere Hoton Pe Basee
Aisi Halki Si Hasee

Girls join abhi & sing along with him
Jawan Dil Ki Rahon Mein
Jaise Khilti Hai Kali

He turns around nandu and
Tere Hoton Pe Basee
Aisi Halki Si Hasee

He Makes her turn around and
Phir Kyoon Chupp Rahi Ho
Dil Ki Baatein To Bataoo

While turning round she sees manik & becomes sad & then abhi sings
Goom Soom Se Na Raho Tum
Abh Jaana Muskuraoo

He claps his hands & turns around her continuing
Haan Haan, Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu

All start clapping and sing together
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi...
Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu Malai Lai

while nandu looks Kabir and dhruv they too sing asking her to smile
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi

Abhi turns her face towards him &
Maana Humse Ho Gayee
Ek Choti Si Khataa

He says please with his eyes and
Hans Do Na Tum Zaraa

He holds his ears & noding his head
Do Na Humko Tum Sazaa

She tries to leave but abhi sits on his knees and
Maana Humse Ho Gayee
Ek Choti Si Khataa

He holds her hands and then
Has Do Na Tum Zaraa
Do Na Humko Tum Sazaa

Due to someone's push he looses his grip and falls down on ground & seeing this nandu starts laughing loud. He sees her smile & continues
Tum Jo Has Pade To

He rubs his hair with his hands and continues smiling
Abh Hum Bhi Muskurayein

He gets up and goes near her and
Aao Mil Ke Saath Gaayein
Dil Se Dil Bhi Milayein

They both sing together
Hey Hey, Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu malai lai

They both make a round holding each other & clapping & continue
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi
Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu

Whole class sing together except alia,mukthi and manik
Hey Hey, Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu...

nandu hugs abhi and everyone claps loudly.

NANDINI : thank you

ABHI : any time jaan

MANIK POV : what the crap ye samaj tha kya hain apne aapko aur ye ye madam ko dekho ek gana kya galiya uske liya aise muskurari hai jaise sari duniya uski kadmo main agayi ho like seriously sach main kya din agaye hain puri ki puri pagalon ki bharath gaana gake nachre hain class main!!!!

KABIR : dekha dhruv Jo log smile deserve karthe hain na unhe kitna bi rula lo end of the day kisi na kisi vajah se smile karthe hain

DHRUV : haan kabir hum sath nahi hain na tho god ne abhi ko bejh diya nandini ke liye

KABIR : hmmm ab hame uski fikar karne ki zaroorath nahi hain

MANIK POV : yarrr isse better tho ye hi hotha ki main kabir aur dhruv ko nandini se bath karne ke liye mana hi nahi kartha ufff mujhe usse bath karni hogi haan aur vo bi bahuth jaldi

Nandini and abhi come and sit.

Mukthi and alia turn back and

MUKTHI : guys issne kya masth gaya na matlab I know nandini ke liye gara tha but it was so sweet na

MANIK : kyaa sweet, haa mukthi mujhe tho vomiting ari hain sach main koyi aisa gatha kya nahi matlab I would have been more happy agar main baira hotha at least uska gatiya gana nahi sunna padtha.

KABIR (slowly) : thu ne suna

DHRUV : haan matlab

KABIR : matlab he is jealous

DHRUV : aur agar ye hi sach hain na tho wo zarur kuch chupara hain

KABIR : haan aur usne Jo kuch bi kaha wo sab wo sab jhut bi ho saktha hain

NANDINI : honey sach main you are so sweet and thank you and hugs him.

Manik shirt gets stucked in the bench and taking this as an excuse turns back to see nandini.

Kabir and dhruv also turn back smiling knowing why his friend was looking back.

Abhi hugs nandini and "please mere liye age se kabi bi ek pal ke liye bi aansu math bahana hmmm"

Nandini replies haan

Abhi holds her hands and dekh I know ki thu mujhse kuch chupari hain par main kuch nahi puchunga jab thu bathana chahthi hai na thab hi bathana aur main thab thak wait karunga.

Manik was acting to free himself but was looking nandu and abhi. Nandini didn't noticed that he was looking them.

Abhi cups nandu's face & "I always want my jaan to smile hmm" and kisses her forhead

KABIR : agar hum sahi hain tho ma and stops

Manik gives a tight slap to abhi

Kabir continuous tho manik keench ke ek chanta iske gaal par dega and
Then he and dhruv start smiling

Nandini gets shocked and looks manik seriously while abhi was holding his cheek & looking manik

MANIK : hooo yes yes u deserve it
kabse dekhra hoon tumhe aur kuch nahi bolra hoon tho iska Matlab ye nahi hain ki tum jo man main aye wo karro

ABHI : listen Maine kya kiya

MANIK : yar main tumse bath nahi kara hoon

Kabir and dhruv were controlling their laugh while nandu and abhi didn't understood anything

ABHI : arrey agar mujhse nahi tho kise bath karre ho aur aisa kya hua

MANIK : tumhe ek baar boletho samaj main nahi atha na yaa right
And slaps abhi one more time and this time even more harder

Kabir and dhruv hide their faces and laugh like hell

ABHI : listen enough is enough

MANIK : exactly main bi wohi kehra hoon door raho isse varna tumhe aur kya kya jelna hoga tum soch bi nahi sakthe

Abhi gets angry and shouts tum and manik interrupts gaya gaya gaya yeaa chela gaya

ABHI : what?????

MANIK : hoo am so sorry actually main tumse bath nahi karra tha wo aaj kal na yaha hamare class main ek mosquito gumra hain jiski vajah se hamare class ke bahuth log bimar pad gaye aur wohi mosquito tumhare gaal par thi maine usse dekha tho gussa main agaya aur use bagane ke liye tum par hath utadi

ABHI : haan tho muh se bi bol sakthe the na

MANIK : haan par tumhe dekh kar mera hath automatically ut gaya I mean ki usse usse main ne kaha na mujhe us par bahuth gussa hain ki usne mere sare friends ko bahuth trouble kiya tho

ABHI : ek minute tumhe kaise patha ki wo wahi vali mosquito hain jisne tumhare friends ko hurt kiya hain kyuki bahuth sare hothe ne tho

MANIK : usse main ache tharah se jantha hoon aur

ABHI : what ever just leave it ouchh

NANDINI : kyaa hua dard hora hain and rubs his cheek

Manik holds nandini's hands and arrey nandini ye bichara tho naya hain na tho kuch nahi jantha shayad par tum tum tho mere bare main sab ache se janthi ho na hmm isliye aage se dhyan rakhna thaki mujhe aise kaam baar baar na karna pade ummm.she gives an angry look and then manik continues arrey mera matlab hain ki you know agar tum dono busy nahi hothe tho mujhe intervene karna hi nahi padtha aur abhi ko mere hath maar bi nahi kana padtha. She jerks his hand and before could say anything he rubs abhi's cheek and ache se dhyan rakhna kyuki agli baar mujhe bi nahi patha ki main gusse main tumhare sath kya karunga arrey mera matlab hai stay concentrated thaki dirty mosquitos cannot harm u hmmm and gives a naughty smile to nandu and turns back smiling

ABHI POV : ye kya tha mathlab mujhe aisa kyu lagra ki wo apni bath indirectly kehra hain

NANDINI POV : isne jaan buchke mara abhi ko par kyu iski problem kya hain jis tharah se usnemuhse bath ki wo tho offooo ayyappa what is he up to aur uske gande dimag main chel kya raha hain

KABIR (slowly) : itna tho clear hain ki ye kamina nandu ko kisi aur ke sath nahi dekh saktha hain

DHRUV : haan par agar wo use chahtha hain tho phir aaj subha usne wo sab kyu bola

KABIR : wahi hame patha karna hain

Dhruv and kabir say in unison mission manan starts again & smile seeing each other.

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