MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE INDEX ON PG 1 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
awesome updates
waiting for jealous manik
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
u write awsome...
i jst love ur story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
plzzz dear manik ko maaf mt krna how can he behave lyk this with nandu...how selfish is this...he doesn't deserve her apology soon n make nandu strong...wo mara aur wo kuch nhi boli ...glt huhh
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Thank you
SooO much😊😊😊
for this
Jealously track
Enjoy it
A lot
And the way you
represent it
It's amazing👏👏👏
Poor abhi
Mosquito like
Scriously
Two hard slaps
feel bad for him 😭
God it's so
Funny😛😛😛
Just continue this track
plzzz and
manik ko bhi pata
chalna chahiye
How it feels
I mean how can he
said so harsh
words to her
plzzz continue this
jealously track
Continue soon
Am Eagerly waiting for next part
Love
Diya😛😛😛

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I read the last 4 parts together and I loved it all...
except, Manik's slap to Abhi
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Wow awesome update...
Jealous Manik...
It was so funny
Enjoyed lot ]
Update soon
Edited by shruti_gupta - 10 years ago
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PART 43 :

ABHI : jaan wo actually main

NANDINI : kya hua bol na

ABHI : aaa wo mujhe kuch kaam hai tho mujhe bahar Jana hoga par thu

NANDINI : haan tho jana its ok

ABHI : are u sure ya main

NANDINI : nahi baba thu ja main sach main teek hoon hmmm

Abhi leaves

ALIA :guys patha nahi ye class kab shuru hogi chelo na bahar chelthe hain thoda break bi miljayega hmm

MANIK : yaa not a bad idea

KABIR : dhruv wo aaj mom kehri thi ki wo aur aunty kayi bahar jare hai tho hum ek kaam karthe hain na school ke baad thu mere gar aaja aur jab mom log vapas ajayenge tho aunty ke sath gar chele janaa

DHRUV : yaa kabir its a great idea vaise bi bahuth din hogaye hain tere sath vedio game khelke tho aaj pura masthi karenge hmm

MUKTHI : guys you can't ignore us like this

ALIA : haan aur tum log aisa kyu behave karre ho just because wo cheapo

Kabir gets up angrily and leans towards alia and then Nandini!!!! Suna tumne Nandini!!! Nandini naam hai uska

All were hell shocked to see this because kabir never talked to anyone in such an angry tone.

Nandini though couldn't hear clearly what alia said but by listening kabir's words that louder understood that alia might have said something wrong about her.

DHRUV : kabirrr

Kabir jumps from the bench and goes out while dhruv too runs behind him.

MUKTHI : what was that

ALIA : haan I never saw him like this before and all thnx to bloody

MANIK : stop it girls hame un dono se bath karni hogi abi isi vakth and they all leave.

Kabir and dhruv reach FAB 5 spot.

Kabir closes his eyes and was banging his head to wall.

DHRUV : thu pagal ho gaya kya ye ye kya karra

KABIR : why why why do they hate her so much

Dhruv turns kabir's face & hugs him

DHRUV : sab teek ho jayega

KABIR : I can't listen anything against her yar wo wo

DHRUV : shhh calm down

ALIA : I can't believe this seriously main ne kaha tha main ne kaha tha ki wo ladki bahuth dangerous hain no one listened me right dekho ab sirf do din main she manipulated these two against us

Kabir and dhruv break the hug and

DHRUV : alia please stop this all

ALIA : kyuu dhruv main galath kya bolri hoon we FAB 5 jo badi si badi problem main bi ek dusre ka sath nahi chodthe hain aaj aaj nandini naam ki problem

KABIR : am saying you one last time alia stop saying all this against nandu or else and was about to continue but a boy comes and gives him a letter.

He opens the letter and

Close your eyes

KABIR POV : what the hell

What the hell bol diya tho now just close your eyes and take a long breath chelo chelo fast.

Kabir closes his eyes & takes a long breath. Dhruv smiles seeing him while FAB 3 looks him surprised.

Hmmm that's like a good boy
And now call dhruv.

Kabir calls dhruv and they both start reading together.

Now both of you lift your head and say sorry to those three standing before you.

KABIR POV : no way

Kabir no way tho bilkul math kehna

KABIR POV : hamne konsi galti ki hain

Kabir maine kab kaha ki tum logon ne galthi ki hain dekho main janthi hoon tum dono unse naraz ho par ek baar bas ek baar socho hum ek dusre se bath kyu nahi karre FAB 5 ke liye right aur agar tum dono aise un logo se bath nahi karoge tho tum sab sath main FAB 5 kaise hua aur agar fab 5 hi nahi hoga tho hamare na bath karne ka phaida hi kya hua please isliye unse bath karo at least mere liye aur iski surawath tum dono ko abi isi vakth sorry se karni hogi

Kabir & dhruv luk each other & then

Arrey ek dusre ka muh kya dekhre ho chelo sorry bolo say sorry

Kabir and dhruv see FAB 3 standing confused and then taking a long breath say sorry in unison.
FAB 3 look each other while kabir & dhruv again get busy in reading letter.

Hmmm chelo kabir ab tum akele alia ko sorry bolo

KABIR : what non sense

Ooo hello nonsense vonsence kuch nahi hain patha bi hai mai kitna dar gayi thi tumhara awaz sunke aur tumne tho wo sab alia se kaha hai tho just imagine bechari ka kya halath huya hoga

KABIR : bechari aur wo bi alia

Main yaha seriously bath karri hoon aur isliye tum bi thodi der serious bano. kabir please tum aise kisise bi bath nahi karsakthe aur alia se tho bilkul bi nahi vaise ye bas akri baar hain main tumhe fir se sorry bolne ko nahi kahungi

KABIR : hmmm lagtha hain sach main bahuth zyada gussa kardi

He looks at alia & say sorry & again

Chelo mera kaam tho hogaya ek baath aur main tum logo se bath nahi karri hoon tho iska faida utakar tum log apni marzi ke kuch nahi kar sakthe hain aur kabir tum apne gusse par control rakhna kyuki tumhare joker jaise face pe gussa bilkul acha nahi lagtha hain aur in fact hame aur hasne par majhbur kar detha hain

Dhruv starts laughing and kabir gives him a serious look and then

Hasi par control rakho dhruv varna ye tumhe maar dega aur tum bi isi tharah cool aur calm zone main hi rehna samje

DHRUV : yes mam

Haan haan janthi hoon class leri hoon na teek hain chelo you both go and talk and make clear everything between FAB 5

Kabir and dhruv say teek hain

One last thing thum logo ne dekha na ki main muskurari hoon tho tum dono ko bi vahi karna hoga ab main zyada kuch nahi kehne vali

LOVE YOU and KEEP SMILING

Main kaun hu ye tum dono hi ache se janthe ho isliye mujhe mera naam bathaneki zarurath nahi hain
(Smiley).

Kabir and dhruv have a huge smile on their faces.

Nandini was watching all this by hiding behind a door and smiled seeing their besties smile.

Kabir and dhruv say hum galath karre aur hum ye nahi hone de sakthe in unison and then

DHRUV : guys lets just forget everything and talk for a while

MUKTHI : thank god finallyyy

ALIA : yes we need to talk

MANIK : kiska letter hain

DHRUV : buddy main hamare bare main bath karna chahtha hoon

MANIK POV : am sure ye uska hi letter hoga

MANIK : haan haan karthe hai na

DHRUV : guys jo hua wo hua ab uske bare main sochkar koyi faida nahi hain

MUKTHI : exactly dhruv hum ek baath ko stretch karthe hue roj roj ladyi nahi kar sakthe hain

KABIR : guys lets just start freshly

ALIA : yaa and thank god finally tum log samaj gaye ki nan

KABIR : alia one second let me make it clear to all ki nandu mere liye bahuth important hain she is my best friend and which she will always be aur main uske bare main kuch galath nahi sun saktha

DHRUV : yaa right nandini mere liye bi personally close hain aur shayad hamesha hi rahegi

KABIR : lekin lekin wo hamare liye alag bath hain kyuki nandini alag hain aur FAB 5 alag hain par jaise ki tum sab ne dekha wo tumhari vajah se hum se bath na karne ki decision le chuki hain

MANIK : hum logo ki vajah se matlab we didn't

KABIR : meri bath khatam nahi huyi

DHRUV : buddy please ek bar isse pura bolne de uske baad no one will interrupt u guys

MANIK : hmmm

KABIR : aur aur hame ab lagtha hain ki hamse bahuth badi galthi ho gayi hain,galthi chup chup uski bath mankar usse jane dene ki

MUKTHI : that means you are choosing her on FAB 5

NANDINI POV : ayyappaa ye kar kya rahe hain maine tho inse sab solve karne ko bola hain par par

DHRUV : kabir ne aisa nahi kaha

ALIA : par uska matlab vohi hain

Kabir and dhruv walk closer and hold mukthi and alia's hands

KABIR : FAB 5 is not a thing which we could choose on anything, FAB 5 is our life and we surely don't want to end our life's,that is us the FAB 5

DHRUV : ye bath jitni sach hain utni hi sach ek aur bath hain aur wo ye hai ki nandini ke bina bi hamari life incomplete hain aur hum usse hamari life se aise hi jane nahi de sakthe hain

KABIR : ye jo nandini hain hum use FAB 5 ka hissa bananke ki koshish nahi karre hain aur am sure wo khud FAB 5 ka hissa nahi bana chahri hogi

DHRUV : hum bas itna kehna chahthe hain ki nandini ki vajah se kabi bi kabi bi hamare beech koyi bi problem nahi ho sakthi hain

KABIR : acha chelo you guys now tell me ki tum log kyu chahthe ho ki hum nandini se door rahe

Manik doesn't say anything.

MUKTHI : guys main ne pehle bi kaha mujhe nandini se koyi bi personal problem nahi hain bas bath itni si hain ki uske chakkar main hum ek sath nahi rehpare hain aur ab ab tho lagtha hain ki sath hokar bi hum sath nahi hain aur shayad isse better tho pehle tha jab thodi der ke liye hi sahi hum khusi se bath tho karthe the

KABIR : thnx mukthi bina samjaye hi tumne bahuth kuch samaj liya.

Mukthi looks him confused & then

KABIR : hum yahi samjana chahtha hai ki hamare beech Jo kuch bi hora hai usse nandini ka koyi Lena dena nahi hain haan hum sab sath hoke bi sath nahi hain par tum logo ne ek baar bi socha ki hum thumse bath kyu nahi karre hain

ALIA : kyuki hum ne tumse usse bath karne ko mana kiya

DHRUV : nahi alia

KABIR : hum tumse is liye bath nahi karre hain kyuki tum log apni possessiveness ki vajah se sahi aur galath ke beech farak nahi kar pare hain

MUKTHI : possessiveness????

DHRUV : tum log nahi chahthe ki hum kisi aur ke sath time spend kare aur hum na hi kisi aur ke sath dosthi kare tho iska kya Matlab hua

ALIA : dhruv hum ne aisa kab kaha

KABIR : tho phir hamari aur nandini ki friendship se ap sab ko problem kyu hain

ALIA : kabir wo isliye kyuki wo wo

DHRUV : buddy se bi close na ho jaye islie alia hmm

Alia doesn't say anything

KABIR : manik thuje nandini pasandh hain kya???

MANIK : what

DHRUV : simple sa question hain

MANIK : mmm nahi

KABIR : jab manik ko wo pasandh hi nahi hain tho unke beech dosthi kaise ho sakthi hain

DHRUV : aur in fact aaj jo buddy ne uske sath kiya uske baad wo iska chehra thak dekhna pasand nahi karegi

Nandini was silently listening all this.

KABIR : alia ye ek hi reason hai ya

ALIA : nahi aur kuch nahi

DHRUV : buddy ab teri bari hain

MANIK : meri baari matlab

KABIR : thuje kya problem hain nandini se matlab nandini aur hamari dosthi se

MANIK POV : kaise batao agar tum log usse bath karoge tho mujhe usse dur rehne main aur mushkil hogi

DHRUV : kya hua buddy thuje bi kayi dar tho nahi lagra ki

MANIK : dar kis bath ka hmm dar var kuch nahi hain

KABIR : ok so something is atleast cleared

DHRUV : guys FAB 5 dosti ke liye famous hain aur sab kehthe hain ki hamare alava dosti ko koyi aur ache se samaj nahi saktha hain

KABIR : isiliye hum request karna chahthe hain ki please please aur please nandini aur hamari dosti ko samjiye

DHRUV : we promise uske bare main tum logo se kabi bi koyi bi bath nahi karenge

KABIR : aur tum log bi hamare samne uske bare main bath math karna

DHRUV : hum uske bare main bath nahi karenge tho hamare beech jagda bi nahi hoga

KABIR : we also promise ki hum tumhe aur nandu ko ek sath balance karne ki puri koshish karenge aur tumhe tumhe naraz hone ka ek bi mauka nahi denge

DHRUV : bas ek baar ek baar kehdo ki hum nandini se bath kar sakthe hain

Nandini had tears in her eyes listening how important she was for both of them.

ALIA : tum usse bath kar sakthe ho

Kabir and dhruv look each other

MUKTHI : arrey keh diya na acha chel phir se kehthe hain tum dono usse bath kar sakthe ho

Kabir and dhruv look manik

MANIK : saale sunayi nahi diya kya bol diya na ab aanke phad phad ke kya dekhre ho

ALIA : guys am sorry am really really sorry main sach main nahi janthi thi ki tum log nandini ko itna chahthe aur shayad Jana chaha bi nahi and am really sorry ki main gusse main apne limits cross karke tum logo se bath ki

MUKTHI : haan yar main ne bi nahi socha tha ki nandini itne short time main tum logon ki itni acha dost ban jayegi aur haan main bi sorry ab thak nahi samaj paye par ab jo samaj gaye age se tumhe torture nahi karenge

Kabir hugs mukthi and dhruv hugs alia and say thank u thank u thank u

MANIK : meri tho koyi value hi nahi hain yar

They smile and drag manik and share a group hug

Due to air door gets closed and mukthi and alia sees nandini standing near door.

MUKTHI : guys nandini

KABIR : main ne kaha na hum uske baare main bath nahi karenge tho

ALIA : guys nandini is standing near door.

Manik, kabir and dhruv turn back and see nandini.
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PART 44 :

Kabir and dhruv slowly walk towards nandini while FAB 3 also walks to some extent but stop themselves at a little distance behind kabir and dhruv.

Nandini was crying & staring kabir and dhruv. They reach near her &

KABIR : galthi nahi mohabbat ki hamne...

DHRUV : bewafayi nahi vafa ki humne...

KABIR : saza dena hi tha tho jaan mang lethi...

DHRUV : yu ankhon se aansu jhalak ne ki kya zarurath thi...

Kabir and dhruv wipe nandini tears.
She smiles and simply looks them. kabir and dhruv say in unison "kya hua".

NANDINI :

dosthi ke chaman main phool sa kila hain...

Jo mujhe ap dono ke surath main mila hain...

Upar vale ka jitna shukr ada ki jaye kam hain...

Na Jane ye meri kis neki ka sila hai...

KABIR and DHRUV : wah wah!!!!wah wah!!!! And clap

FAB 3 also smile but immediately hide their smiles from each other

DHRUV : wow nandini sach main kyaa bola tum ne.

KABIR : arrey dhruv itna acha boli yar is main na samajne vali bath konsi hain

DHRUV : arrey mujhe samaj main ayi hain

KABIR : acha tho phir thu ne ye kyu kaha usse "kya bola tum ne" bolke

DHRUV : arrey thu and then both start laughing.

FAB 3 also laugh.

NANDINI : tum dono naa and pouts

KABIR : acha listen sorry hum ne adha adha karke apni shayari tho puri kardi par hamse aur shayari nahi hoga kyuki hum tumhari tharah ache nahi hain

DHRUV : haan nandini hum sharayi main ache nahi hain lekin & looks kabir.They both smile at each other and hold nandu hands &

KABIR : bathe ache kar Lethe hain

DHRUV : nandini tumne kya kiya hain wo tho hame nahi patha par haan hum ne bahuth achaa kaam kiya hoga jiski vajah se tumhe hamari zindagi main pa liya

KABIR : and trust me you are the most precious gift which god gave us after FAB 5 aur iske liye agar hum unhe apni sari zindagi thnx kahenge na tho bi kam hi hoga

DHRUV : par haan hum tumhe thnx bol sakthe hain

KABIR : hamari zindagi main aneke liye

DHRUV : aur hamari zindagi khushiyon se bar dene ke liye

KABIR & DHRUV : we promise that we will never ever hurt you and leave you

Nandini smiles

KABIR & DHRUV : kyaa tumhe bi promise karna hoga

NANDINI : I promise main hamesha tumhare sath rahungi tum logon ki best friend bankar.

She hugs them & they hug her back tightly.

MANIK POV : I really hope that ur friendship lasts forever and ever sach main jab apne dono best friends ko apne pyaaa and then stops and again ye kya bolra hu main.

ABHI : jaan!!!!

MANIK POV : yaar ye phir vapas agaya!!!!

Nandini breaks hug and then haan haan honey bolo na

ABHI : kyaa kyaa bolu patha hain kabse dundra hoon tumhe tum class se bahar kyu nikli aur ye

MANIK POV : ab kya iske liye ye madam class se bi bahar nahi nikal sakthi

NANDINI : achaa achaa bas bas am sorry pehle tum inse milo ye hai kabir aur ye dhruv aur guys ye abhimanyu hain mera first bestest friend right from childhood.

MANIK POV : first bestest friend from childhood, my foot.

Kabir and dhruv smile and say ooo

ABHI : hiii actually main ne tum logo ko class main hi dekha vaise jaan unlogo ka kya naam hain

KABIR : aa this is mukthi & alia and this is manik ho of course u might have remembered him na.

ABHI : ya ya how can I even forget him.

KABIR : jaan vaise tum

ABHI : am sorry kabir par meri jaan ko jaan bulaneka hak sirf mujhe hai

MANIK POV : meri jaan matlab paise dekhe karida kya usse hadh hothi yar sach main

KABIR : cool sry yar mujhe patha nahi tha

ABHI : hmmm teek hain yar tumhe jaldi hamare bare main sab patha chel jayega and keeps his arms around nandini's shoulder

MANIK POV : goddd ye hamesha isse itna chipak tha kyu rehtha

Manik slowly walks towards them and stands between them parting them away by placing his both hands on their shoulders

MANIK : yaar sach main kyaa dosthi hain Matlab right from childhood haa and looking nandu presses her shoulder tightly

NANDINI : guys we need to go its getting late and saying this jerks manik's hands

DHRUV : haan let's go

MANIK : chel abhi philal ke liye chelthe hain vaise bi hame bahuth kuch bath karna hain sath main dosth jo ban gaye hain hmm

ABHI : haan chelo

Nandu starts leaving with abhi but kabir calls her so she says abhi to start and that she will join him later Mukthi and alia also leave.

KABIR : sun ye chekkar kya hain

NANDINI : kyaa chekkar

DHRUV : arrey ye abhi matlab hamesha tumhare age peche gumtha rehtha hain

KABIR : jaan jaan boltha rehtha hain aur

NANDINI : shhh stop it yar and then looks manik seriously as if asking him what he was still doing their. Manik too gives her look like fine and leave

NANDINI : haan tho kya bolri thi ya aisa kuch nahi hain aur aisa ho bi nahi saktha hain

KABIR : achaa ho bi nahi saktha matlab kyu kyu nahi ho saktha

NANDINI : mujhe der hori hain isliye main jari hoon agar tumhe ana hain tho aa Jana and starts walking

Kabir and dhruv also follow her and irritate her by continuously pulling her hair.

NANDINI : enough guys ab tum log age chelo aur main peche chelthi hoon and now nandini starts walking behind them.

DHRUV : yar aaj party karne ka man hain

KABIR : haan yar party tho banthi hain hum sab sath main Jo hain

DHRUV : haan par kya kare matlab

KABIR : idea thu vaise bi mere gar ara na tho nandu ko bi sath le chelenge aur mere gar main party karenge

DHRUV : haan grt tho nandini tum chelri hoon na hamare sath

KABIR : behri ho gayi kya bolna and they both turn back & see nandini. They both can't find her and then look each other and say in unison "MANIK MALHOTRA" & then laugh.

While they were walking manik suddenly comes and puts his hand on nandini's mouth and take her to teracce.He pins her to wall and places his hands on her either sides.

NANDINI : tumhari problem kya hai

MANIK : tumhari kya problem hai

NANDINI : tumhara matlab kya hai

MANIK : tum kar kya rahi ho us kuthe ke sath haa

NANDINI : what kutha kaun kuthaa and then how dare you ha how dare you call him like that

MANIK : main use aur bi bathar naam se bula saktha hoon aur tum ye school ko samaj kya rakha hain koyi club ya kuch aur haa class main padayi karthe hain naach gane nahi aur tum dono ko itni choti baath samaj nahi athi kya tum uske sath wo sab kaise kar sakthi ho

NANDINI : main jo bi karu kisi ke sath bi rahu wo meri marzi hain and am not answerable to you.saying this she jerks his hands and starts leaving.

He pulls her closer and twists her both hands backside.

MANIK : stay away suna tum ne stay away from that jerk

NANDINI : nahi tho kya kya karloge

He presses her hands tightly and
Main uska wo haal karunga Jo thum apne sapne main bi nahi soch sakthi ho

NANDINI : kaun hothe kaun ho tum ye sab karne vale haa

MANIK : jitna bola hain utna karo

NANDINI : kyu haan kyu karre ho tum ye sab kyu tumhe usse farak padtha hain kyu tum usse mere sath nahi dekh sakthe kyu ha kyu

MANIK : kyuki main tumse...

Saying this he went so close to her that they were feeling each others hot breaths. He slowly loosens his hands grip and leans forward.

NANDINI : Jab tumhare paas mere sawal ka jawab ho na thab mere paas vapas ana and pushes him away and runs out

MANIK : goddd!!! Why does this girl always drives me so crazy...
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PART 45 :

Nandini while walking to the class
Ayyappaa uski problem kya hain Wo akhir chahtha kya hain usne khud kaha tha na mujhse ki wo meri shakal thak dekhna pasandh nahi kartha hain tho phir tho phir main kuch bi karu kisike sath bi rahu isse use kya wo kyu chahtha hain ki main honey se dur rahu main bi na pagal hoon is bar jab milega na tho usse hi puchungi ye sab hmmm and leaves to class.

Kabir and dhruv smile seeing her. She comes and sits beside abhi &

NANDINI : guys main nahi chahthi ki mukthi aur alia

KABIR : shhh hum janthe hain vaise bi class ke beech main baar baar peche palat ne ka mauka bi miltha hain

DHRUV : haan aur in fact tum dono ka view yaha se bahuth achaa hain

Nandini laughs.

ABHI : jaan mujhe kuch samaj nahi aara hain tu mujhe bathayegi ki akhir tum logon ka chekkar kya hai

NANDINI : its a long story tho baad main bathayungi

Manik comes and sits beside kabir
Giving a angry look to nandini.

ABHI : jaan seems like teri life main bahuth kuch hora hain jo thu mujhe bathana nahi chahthi hain

NANDINI : honey aisa bilkul nahi hain trust me main tumhe sab bathayungi par abhi iss tharah nahi hum baad main aram se baitkar iske bare bath karenge hmm

MANIK POV : tho ye madam sab kuch bathayegi iss kuthe ko fine acha hi hain aur easy ho jayega mere liye iss kuthe ko handle karne main.

ABHI : hmmm fine

ALYA : guys guys guys

Kabir and dhruv turn front

DHRUV : kya hua alia

ALIA : wo actually manik main tumse ek sawal puchna chahthi thi

MANIK : haan pucho na

ALIA : wo main kab se puchna chahri thi par didn't get a chance aur ab

MANIK : listen listen alia just cut it short and ask directly

ALIA : wo kal store room main did something happen between you and nandini

Manik mind gets flashed with all those cute and romantic moments he had with nandini

MUKTHI : alia thu pagal hogayi hain ab dekh usse wo kuch bol bi nahi raha agar gussa kiya na tho

ALIA : manik please tum gussa math karna wo actually jab nandini aur tum jo bath karre the I just guessed ki you know kuch kii matlab manik manik

Kabir shakes his hand slowly and

MANIK : haan haan

ALIA : what matlab you kii Kii

MANIK : nahi nahi and slowly looks back.

Kabir slowly tells manik wo hame nahi dekhri aur use kuch sunayi bi nahi dega kyuki wo log bi bath karre hain.

MANIK : haa alia aisa aisa kuch kuch hua nahi

ALIA : par wo tum kehre the ki if she wants it anytime you will

MANIK : nahi nahi main ne kaha na aisa kuch nahi hua tum janthi ho na mujhe aur jaha thak wo bath ki tho actually I I slipped and kissed her her hair that's it.

MUKTHI : hair????

MANIK : haan hair par wo uske liye pehli baar tha shayad tho

MUKTHI : seriously usne hair par kiss karne ki vajah se matlab she took that small thing so seriously ki

KABIR : wo kya hain mukthi bath ye hain ki wo tum dono ki tharah utni fast forward nahi hain jo sab matlab sab sab kuchhh

ALIA & MUKTHI : shut up kabir

ALIA : phir tumne aisa kyu kaha ki

MANIK : alia main wo sab bas aise hi kehra tha uska mazak udane aur wo sab chodo na kya tum bi

KABIR : haan alia kya tum bi wo sari bathe yaad dilari ho tum janthi ho na kitna mushkil raha hoga iske liye wo sab karna main

MANIK : kyaa

DHRUV : buddy chod na kya tu bi iske bathon main aara hain

ALIA : guys vaise tum logon ko "abhini" ke jodi ke bare main kya kehna hain

FAB 4 say in unison what jodi????

ALIA : ooo sorry sorry wo maine na abhi aur nandini ke naam milakar unki jodi ka naam abhini rakha hain

MANIK POV : god please save me from all this please please aaa

KABIR : wow yar ausome blossom masth zabardasth aur patha nahi kya kyaa

DHRUV : haan alia nice name it sounds interesting

ALIA : mukthi aur manik tum log kuch bol kyu nahi rahe ho

MUKTHI : yar am not at all interested am sorry

MANIK : guys hamne decide kiya tha na uske bare main hum koyi bath nahi karenge tho phir ye sab kya hain

ALIA : haan wo main tho bas aise

MANIK : oo please hum baad main bath karenge

KABIR :

Jiya jale jaan jale
Jiya jale jaan jale
Nainon tale dhuaan chale
Dhuaan chale

Manik looks kabir angrily and then

KABIR : thu ne kaha tha ki hum baad main bath karenge tho main ye gana aa

Manik goes forward to punch him and then

KABIR : sorry sorry sorryyy

DHRUV : kabir thu kyu hamesha usse pitwane ke liye thayar hotha rehtha hain

KABIR : arrey main tho bas gana gara tha yar and then both start laughing hiding there faces from manik.

DHRUV : vaise dekha na thuje kaise un dono ke naam sath sunthe hi uska chehra gusse se lal hogaya

KABIR : haan yar aur ab tho main 100% sure ho ki isse nandini pasandh hain magar kisi vajah se usse paas nahi ane dera hain

DHRUV : haan aur khud ko usse door bi nahi rak para hain

KABIR : hmmm hame jaldi se sab kuch patha karna hoga

MANIK POV : pagal mujhe kehra hain ki main jelra hoon nonsense vaise ye dono kar kya rahe hain inki awaz bi sunayi nahi deri

He slowly turns back and then looks them with a very angry face making his eyes widened

DHRUV : ye unhe aise kyu dekhra kabir looks manik and then they both also turn back and see nandu

Nandini was sleeping on abhi while he too closed his eyes placing his arm around her shoulder.

DHRUV : bahuth gusse main lagra hain patha nahi kya karega

KABIR : gusse main tho hain par pehle dekhthe hain ki ye kartha kya hain uske baad kuch sochthe hain

Manik looks them angrily for some time and then turns front and girls listen na. Mukthi and alia turn back and haan kya.

MANIK : wo actually main apna guitar ka chord bul gaya tha yar kal yaha school main aur yaad hi nahi aara hain ki main use kaha bul gaya

KABIR : ye kya bolra hain

DHRUV : haan mujhe bi samaj nahi ara kair chelo dekhte hai age kya kartha hain

MANIK : kya ap log please use dundne main meri madad karoge

MUKTHI : haan yar of course

ALIA : haan par abi class

Some student comes and informs that even next class was cancelled and that they would have class only after lunch. Listening this all the students rush out happily.

MANIK : haan tho ab koyi problem bi nahi hain right

ALIA : yaa

MANIK : great tho tum log neche ke floors pe check karna aur hum upar ke floors par

MUKTHI : haan

MANIK : please haan jab thak nahi mile thab thak vapas math ana agar hame milegi tho hum khud tumhare pas ayenge

ALIA : teek hain manik relax and they both leave.

KABIR : chel ham bi chelthe hain

MANIK : kaha

DHRUV : buddy thu ne hi kaha na ki hum teen upar jayenge chord dundne

MANIK : nahi hame kayi bi jane ki zarurath nahi hain and saying this gets up and goes near abhi.

Kabir and dhruv look confused.

Manik looks nandini and then taps on abhi's shoulder. Abhi looks manik and then asks what.

MANIK (slowly) : principal is calling you.

ABHI : kya

MANIK : shhh and points towards nandini.

Abhi sees nandini and smiles. Manik hits him harder and then

ABHI : kya hain

MANIK : sunayi nahi detha kya principal is calling you its urgent it seems you need to go right now

ABHI : goddd fine and was going to wake up nandini.

MANIK : tumhe jana hain usse nahi

ABHI : jantha hoon par isse bina utaye main kaise ut saktha hoon

Manik slowly removes abhi's hand from her shoulder and holds her head straight without disturbing her

MANIK : aise aur ab tum ja sakthe hoon

ABHI : fine main isse sulake

MANIK : principal said that if u won't meet him soon your admission might be cancelled from school

ABHI : what but

MANIK : fine you waste u r time here itself mujhe kya phir mujhe math bolna ki maine tumhe warn nahi kiya bolke

ABHI : ok deal with her carefully and runs out.

Manik slowly holds her and sits beside her. She moves a little bit but then soon settles herself on his chest. He slowly places his arm around her and look her smiling.

Kabir and Dhruv smile looking them and then look each other and smile.

KABIR : hame bi chelna chahiye

DHRUV : haan and they were about to leave but manik calls them and signals them to close the windows
They close the windows and silently leave without saying anything since manik was lost in nandini.

DHRUV : hame yahi rehna hoga

KABIR : haan bai aur kar bi kya sakthe hain

DHRUV : arrey hum bhul hi gaye

KABIR : kyaa

Dhruv close the door and ye.

Kabir smiles and haan ek kam karthe hain na "do not distrub" board bi laga dethe hain.

DHRUV : kabirrr

Kabir smiles and leaning towards wall wo badal raha hain and again smiles looking dhruv.

DHRUV : haan aur ye bahuth achi bath hain

KABIR : par patha nahi kuch samaj nahi ara hain thodi der usse gussa hotha hain phir thodi der usse naraz hotha hain.

DHRUV : thodi der usse dur bagtha hain aur thodi hi der main uske bahuth karib bi jatha hain

KABIR : sach main nandini ko bi ye akela hi mila tha sari duniya main

DHRUV : hmm pehle hum watchman ki duty par concentrate karthe hain aur uske baad un dono ke bare main sochthe hain and both laugh.

MANIK : how can some one look so beautifull while sleeping. she is looking like an angel and in fact more beautiful than an angel. She is, she is looking cuter than the word cute and more innocent than the word innocent.

Few hairs fall on her face and he slowly place them behind her ears. She moves a little bit and while removing his hand back she holds his hand with her both hands & "sone do na manik".

He gets surprised and look her for a while. She holds his hand with her both the hands and moves a little bit and settle herself under his chin on his chest.

He smiles and then "she can feel me and my touch even while sleeping".

He looks her smiling and all those sweet moments he had with her flashes in his mind again making him smile more.

He gets lost in her beauty

"Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave.."

He places his forehead on hers

"Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere."

He kisses her earlobe

"Tainu takda ravaan"

He brushes his nose on her ear

"Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan"

She loosens her grip on her hands and he cups her cheek

"Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan"

She smiles and place her hand on his chest

"Tu hansdi rave, main hansaanda ravaan
Tainu takda rawaan"

(Nandini feels that she was dreaming and hence didn't say anything)

She slowly opened her eyes

"Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di"

They have a beautiful eye lock

"Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di"

He kisses her forhead

"Ae to nazraan nazraan di gal ve
Tu vi sun le zaraa"

She cuppes his face

"Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa rehna kol tere."

He pulles her closer holding her waist tightly

"Tainu takdi rawaan"

He brushes his nose on hers

"Maina 'ch tere main vasdi ravaan"

He kisses her left cheek

"Paagal main khud nu banaunda ravaan"

She smiles and turns her face

"Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tainu takda ravaan"

He turnes her face and make her look into his eyes

"Ishq bulavan jaane kab aave
Ishq bulavan aave jab aave"

She blushes and closes her eyes

"Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main taa baitha kol tere"

He kisses her left eye

"Tainu takda ravaan"

He kisses her right eye

"Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan"

He kisses her right cheek

"Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan"

She smiles & holds his hands tightly

"Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan"

He too holds her hand tightly

"Tenu takda ravan"

He places his forehead on hers and closes his eyes

"Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tainu takda ravaan"

They slowly open their eyes and get lost on each other. He slowly leans forward looking her lips and she closes her eyes again feeling very shy. There lips were inches apart and and and shall be continued in next part.
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