MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE INDEX ON PG 1 - Page 60

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
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Love they were towards each other
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was awesome
Loved it
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Let's see who will say those magical words first
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 109 :

With in few seconds manik holds nandini and pins her to wall.

MANIK : I got you now

NANDINI : manik

MANIK : I don't want to waste time by talking and bends down

She blushes and closes her eyes.

They hear some voice and come out of their world.

They both look each other

NANDINI : ye papa ki awaz hain

MANIK : haan chelo dekthe hain

They move down and as soon as manik sees the view in front of him burns with anger. Nandini looks him and doesn't understand anything.

MOHAN : ye tum kya karri ho apne hosh main aao

NANDINI : manik wo kon hain aur papa ko

Manik runs down towards mohan.

You know what and saying this a women raises her hand to slap mohan

Manik holds her hand and stands in between mohan and her.

MANIK : how dare you haa how dare you

MOHAN : manik tum

MANIK : tumhari himmath kaise huyi dad pe hath utaneki

MOHAN : manik wo gusse main hai tho

MANIK : wo kuch nahi bolthe hain tho iska matlab ye nahi hain ki tum jo marzi aaye wo karo

Nandini was standing behind silently trying to understand what exactly was happening.

"Manik hath chodo mera you are hurting me"

MANIK : ooo tho dard hora hain

"What is wrong with you manik koyi apni ma"

MANIK : don't even complete that nyonika

MOHAN : manik please

NYONIKA : beta kya hua tu aise kyu bolra hain main tumhari maa ho beta

MANIK : nahi nahi nahi!!!!!!!

He jerks her hand and shouts on top of his voice "tum meri maa nahi ho na hi kabi thi aur na hi kabi ban paogi"

NANDINI : maa???????

NYONIKA : manik beta tum

MANIK : just cut this bulshit nyonika main tumhara beta nahi hoon isliye mujhe baar baar beta bolna bandh karo

MOHAN : manik tu kamre main jaa main ise bath kartha hoon

MANIK : nahi dad isne apko already bohuth dukh dediya ab aur nahi

NYONIKA : beta tum ye dekhe gussa ho na ki maine tumhare papa pe hath utaya hai tho let me tell you wo tho hum bas aise hi jagad rahe the tho

MANIK : kitna jhut bologi haa

MOHAN : beta thu ja andar

MANIK : sharam nahi athi ye sab karthe hue

NYONIKA : manik kya bakwaas karre ho

MANIK : main koyi bakwaas nahi karra hoon

NYONIKA : manik main tumse baad mai bath karungi lekin philal mujhe tumhare papa se bath karne do

MANIK : kya bath karni hain tumko papa se

MOHAN : manik please thu andar

MANIK : am waiting nyonika

NYONIKA : mujhe ek deal ke bare main bath karni hain

MANIK : teek hain tho phir karo na

MOHAN : manik nahi tum

MANIK : speak up nyonika

MOHAN : nahi nyonika nahi

NYONIKA : wo actually bath ye hai ki and stops

MANIK : kya hua main bolu

Nyonika looks him confusingly

MANIK : tumhe dad se property leke usse apne bf ke naam karni hai na

Mohan and nyonika get hell shocked and look each other

Mohan have tears in his eyes

MANIK : kya hua nyonika kuch bol kyu nahi rahi ho

NYONIKA : mohan how could you

MANIK : mujhse bath karo nyonika dad se nahi kyuki wo khud bi nahi janthe hain ki main ye sab jantha hoon

NYONIKA : tumhe patha kaise

MANIK : usse tumhe kya ha

NYONIKA : dekho manik bath ye hai ki

MANIK : bath ye hain ki tum na hi dad se aur na hi mujhse pyar karthi ho bath ye hain ki tum dad ko sirf aur sirf dukh pohanchana chahthi ho bath ye hain ki ab tumhe ek naya bf mil gaya hain bath ye hai ki tum uss bath ko mujhse chupane ke liye papa ko blackmail karri ho

NYONIKA : dekho manik jaisa tum sochre ho na vaisa kuch nahi hain

MANIK : aur kitna natak karogi

NYONIKA : manthi hoon ki main mohan se pyar nahi karthi lekin beta main tumse bahuth pyar karthi hoon

Manik laughs loud and great joke nyonika sach main and laughs once again

NYONIKA : main sach bolri hoon beta

MANIK : acha

NYONIKA : haan main tho tumhare bagair apni life ko imagine bi nahi kar sakthi hoon

MANIK : tho phir mere sath kyu nahi rehthi hmm chelo teek hain main tumhe ek chance detha hoon apni bath prove karne ka tum na apne bf ko chod do aur mere sath raho

NYONIKA : manik main

MANIK : kya hua tum nahi kar sakthi

He stops for a while and then haan actually main bi pagal hoon tum kaise apne bf ko chod sakthi ho its very important to maintain relationship with him na physically and

Nyonika widens her eyes and looks him

MANIK : kya hua itna shocked kyu lagri ho listen don't tell me ki tumhe usse pyar hain kyuki tumhe kabi bi kisi se bi pyar nahi ho saktha you just have your own personal needs which have to be fulfilled tum samjri ho na

NYONIKA : manikkk and raises her hand but before she could slap him a hand holds her and stands between her and manik.

MANIK : nandiniii!!!!!

NANDINI : agar aap apni hath se zyada apna zuban isthemal karengi na tho teek hoga aap ke liye

NYONIKA : listen tum

NANDINI : ahhh chilayiye math aur haan philal ke liye chup chap yaha se chele jayiye

NYONIKA : ye mera gar hain

MANIK : nahiii

NANDINI : ap kyu yaha rukke apni beizathi karvane pe thuli huyi hain

MOHAN : nyonika leave

NYONIKA : fine and tries to free her hand from nandini who was still holding it tightly

NANDINI : ayinda se kabi bi manik pe ya papa pe hath utaneki koshish bi math karna

NYONIKA : kyaa main jan sakthi hoon ki tum hothi kon ho ye sab mujhse kehne vali

NANDINI : main inki apni hoon jo kisi bi haal main inhe dhuki nahi dekh sakthi hoon

MANIK : tumhe isse kuch bi batha neki zarurath nahi hain nandini

Nandini leaves nyonika's hand

MANIK : are you leaving now or

NYONIKA : fine and leaves from their giving nandini I will see you look

Nandini turns back and sees manik and then mohan.

Mohan silently walks towards room while manan too silently follow him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for updating
Well nice chapter
Maniks family truth is infront of her
But sad one
Poor mohan nd manik
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 110 :

Mohan goes and sits on bed.

Manik slowly goes and sits on his knees holding his hands while nandini stands a little far.

MANIK : dad

Mohan doesn't look him

MANIK : dad please aap meri tharaf dekhiye

Tears roll down from mohan's eyes

Manik wipes his tears and isliye isliye main apse kuch nahi kehna chatha tha

MOHAN : am sorry am really really sorry

MANIK : dad aap kyu sorry bolre hain jo bi hua hain ya hora hain uss main apki galthi nahi hain

MOHAN : nahi manik meri vajah se hi tumhe ye sab and breaks down crying

MANIK : dad please and hugs him tightly

MOHAN : agar main usse pyar nahi kartha tho aaj hame ye din nahi dekhna padtha

MANIK : dad apne pyar karke koyi galthi nahi ki hain

MOHAN : nahi manik sab meri galthi hi hain

Manik breaks the hug and apki koyi galthi nahi hain dad please aap aisa math bolie

MOHAN : manik

MANIK : haan

MOHAN : kya tu kuch der ke liye mujhe

MANIK : haa and gets up

He walks out of the room without turning back.

Nandini just stands and looks mohan.

MOHAN : usse tumhari zarurath hai

NANDINI : aap

MOHAN : main teek hoon thu uske paas ja

NANDINI : kuch bi ho tho mujhe bula lena

MOHAN : haa

Nandini walks out of the room and goes towards manik room. She sees that door was slightly opened. She goes inside but couldn't see anything except darkness.

She closes her eyes and slowly feeling his presence walks towards balcony. She doesn't on the light and simply goes to balcony. She finds him sitting on ground leaning to wall.

NANDINI POV : I haven't seen him like this. He always smiles and does naughty things around me but this manik was really different from the one who I always see. When I saw him talking to that women I felt goosebumps. I couldnt feel any anger in his words and instead I saw pain in his eyes. seeing his pain I couldn't talk to that women normally even though I knew nothing about her

She closed her eyes and taking a long breath slowly sat beside him.

NANDINI : manikkk

He slowly turns towards her and tears roll down from his eyes.

Nandini looks into his eyes

He looks her and keeps his head on her lap placing his hands around her stomach and cries out loud.

Nandini have tears seeing him and holding his hand places her head on his assuring him that she was with him.

He cries and cries and only cries.

She doesn't say a single word and allows him to cry silently crying along with him.

He cries for almost half an hour and
slowly falls asleep crying. She looks him and seeing that he was asleep takes a sigh and kisses his hairs.

She lies in the same position looking him. Though he sleeps her tears doesn't stop rolling down. She wipes her tears and slowly leans back not wanting him to wake up due to her tears.

She caresses his hairs with her one hand while the other hand was holding his hand.

She hears some noice so slowly without disturbing him makes him lie on ground and goes out of the room without making any sound.

MOHAN : arrey do na

RAMU : saab nahi chodiye

Nandini runs down from where the sound was coming and sees mohan.

MOHAN : nahi mujhe chahiye

RAMU : saab apne already bahuth peeli hain

MOHAN : haan tho mujhe aur peeni hain

RAMU : nahi saab aap

Nandini comes in between and holds the bottle.

MOHAN : beta dekho na ye mujhe peene nahi dera hain

She takes bottle into her hands

NANDINI : papa aap yaha baitiye

MOHAN : nahi mujhe pehle bottle do

NANDINI : aap baitiye phir main dethi hoon

Mohan sits on couch and "do"

Nandini sits beside him and "aap abi nahi pee sakthe hain"

MOHAN : kyu mujhe peeni hain do and tries to take bottle from her

Nandini gives bottle to ramu

MOHAN : arrey tumne phir bottle usse dediya and tries to get up

NANDINI : papa aap baitiye and holds his hand

MOHAN : mujhe peeni hain and makes sad face

NANDINI : papa

MOHAN : kyaa hai

NANDINI : kya aap mujhse pyar karthe hain

Mohan looks her and haan aur wo bi and moving his hands itna nahi itna nahi itna sara

NANDINI : tho kya aap meri ek bath manenge

MOHAN : kyaaa

NANDINI : aap abi aur nahi peyenge

MOHAN : nahiii mujhe peeni hai

NANDINI : iska matlab ap jhut bolre hain aur aap mujhse pyar nahi karthe hain

MOHAN : nahi main sach main tumse bahuth pyar kartha hoon

NANDINI : tho aap nahi peere na???

MOHAN : teek hain

NANDINI : thank u and love u

MOHAN : hmm lekin ab main karunga kya

NANDINI : so jayiye

She gets up and asks ramu to help her so that she can take him to his room

MOHAN : nahi mujhe yahi par rehna hai

NANDINI : lekin yaha kaise

MOHAN : maine kaha na mujhe yahi par rehna hain

NANDINI : teek hain cheliye let jayiye

MOHAN : par mujhe need nahi ari hai

NANDINI : aap letenge na tho need khud bakud ayegi cheliye and makes him sleep

MOHAN : nahi

NANDINI : kyaa

Mohan makes her sit and places his head on her lap "ab teek hai"

She smiles and he takes her right hand and holds it tightly with both his hands.

She makes him close his eyes and starts caressing his hairs.

He slowly falls asleep and she smiles looking him.

RAMU : beta

NANDINI : haan

RAMU : Saab ko upar

NANDINI : nahi teek hain aap jayiye

RAMU : jeee and leaves

Nandini slowly leans back and closes her eyes

Manik wakes up and not finding nandini beside him gets worried and runs out.

He goes to mohan room and seeing that even he was not present in the room gets more worried and starts running out shouting their names.

While he was running from one corner to another his eyes suddenly fall on the couch and a smile appears on his face.

He gets relieved and slowly walks to them.

He just stands seeing them for sometime and slowly walks towards his room without disturbing them.

Dont kill me for this I know you were excepting manan romance but life is all about unplaned things na so the same happened here with manan am sry if I disappointed you and now please let me now how are the updates
Edited by anu22sweety - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
The updates were fantastic.
Though Manan Romance was expected but what you wrote was also important.
Happiness is not always there. Sometimes sadness creeps in too. Nd how we find our happiness in those difficult times depends on us. Coz finding positivity in every small thing should be the way to live life.
How nandini stood for manik nd mohan will make their bond stronger and they will soon come out of this mess.
Nyonika has threatened nandini nd it will be interesting to see what she does to her.
Pm me too from the next time plz
Edited by rimsha01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update...
nyonika ruined everything...
she is so mean...
cnt see beyond money n property...
manik was so vulnerable...
nandu became so brave...she stopped nyonika even when she doesnt knw anythng...liked it...

aww..my baby cried soo much...
bt thank god at least nandu was there to console him...
i loved father daughter duo...
wanna see manan convo abt all this...

cont soon
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was so emotional.
This way Manan so much more connected.
Love u for writing this part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
The bonding btw Nandini n Maniks dad is really comendable ...wnt Manan romnc...pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
This update of urs mohan and nandini part really touched my heart carry on girl u have amazing talent of expressing words waiting for next ch..

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