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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anu22sweety

PART 110 :


Mohan goes and sits on bed.

Manik slowly goes and sits on his knees holding his hands while nandini stands a little far.

MANIK : dad

Mohan doesn't look him

MANIK : dad please aap meri tharaf dekhiye

Tears roll down from mohan's eyes

Manik wipes his tears and isliye isliye main apse kuch nahi kehna chatha tha

MOHAN : am sorry am really really sorry

MANIK : dad aap kyu sorry bolre hain jo bi hua hain ya hora hain uss main apki galthi nahi hain

MOHAN : nahi manik meri vajah se hi tumhe ye sab and breaks down crying

MANIK : dad please and hugs him tightly

MOHAN : agar main usse pyar nahi kartha tho aaj hame ye din nahi dekhna padtha

MANIK : dad apne pyar karke koyi galthi nahi ki hain

MOHAN : nahi manik sab meri galthi hi hain

Manik breaks the hug and apki koyi galthi nahi hain dad please aap aisa math bolie

MOHAN : manik

MANIK : haan

MOHAN : kya tu kuch der ke liye mujhe

MANIK : haa and gets up

He walks out of the room without turning back.

Nandini just stands and looks mohan.

MOHAN : usse tumhari zarurath hai

NANDINI : aap

MOHAN : main teek hoon thu uske paas ja

NANDINI : kuch bi ho tho mujhe bula lena

MOHAN : haa

Nandini walks out of the room and goes towards manik room. She sees that door was slightly opened. She goes inside but couldn't see anything except darkness.

She closes her eyes and slowly feeling his presence walks towards balcony. She doesn't on the light and simply goes to balcony. She finds him sitting on ground leaning to wall.

NANDINI POV : I haven't seen him like this. He always smiles and does naughty things around me but this manik was really different from the one who I always see. When I saw him talking to that women I felt goosebumps. I couldnt feel any anger in his words and instead I saw pain in his eyes. seeing his pain I couldn't talk to that women normally even though I knew nothing about her

She closed her eyes and taking a long breath slowly sat beside him.

NANDINI : manikkk

He slowly turns towards her and tears roll down from his eyes.

Nandini looks into his eyes

He looks her and keeps his head on her lap placing his hands around her stomach and cries out loud.

Nandini have tears seeing him and holding his hand places her head on his assuring him that she was with him.

He cries and cries and only cries.

She doesn't say a single word and allows him to cry silently crying along with him.

He cries for almost half an hour and
slowly falls asleep crying. She looks him and seeing that he was asleep takes a sigh and kisses his hairs.

She lies in the same position looking him. Though he sleeps her tears doesn't stop rolling down. She wipes her tears and slowly leans back not wanting him to wake up due to her tears.

She caresses his hairs with her one hand while the other hand was holding his hand.

She hears some noice so slowly without disturbing him makes him lie on ground and goes out of the room without making any sound.

MOHAN : arrey do na

RAMU : saab nahi chodiye

Nandini runs down from where the sound was coming and sees mohan.

MOHAN : nahi mujhe chahiye

RAMU : saab apne already bahuth peeli hain

MOHAN : haan tho mujhe aur peeni hain

RAMU : nahi saab aap

Nandini comes in between and holds the bottle.

MOHAN : beta dekho na ye mujhe peene nahi dera hain

She takes bottle into her hands

NANDINI : papa aap yaha baitiye

MOHAN : nahi mujhe pehle bottle do

NANDINI : aap baitiye phir main dethi hoon

Mohan sits on couch and "do"

Nandini sits beside him and "aap abi nahi pee sakthe hain"

MOHAN : kyu mujhe peeni hain do and tries to take bottle from her

Nandini gives bottle to ramu

MOHAN : arrey tumne phir bottle usse dediya and tries to get up

NANDINI : papa aap baitiye and holds his hand

MOHAN : mujhe peeni hain and makes sad face

NANDINI : papa

MOHAN : kyaa hai

NANDINI : kya aap mujhse pyar karthe hain

Mohan looks her and haan aur wo bi and moving his hands itna nahi itna nahi itna sara

NANDINI : tho kya aap meri ek bath manenge

MOHAN : kyaaa

NANDINI : aap abi aur nahi peyenge

MOHAN : nahiii mujhe peeni hai

NANDINI : iska matlab ap jhut bolre hain aur aap mujhse pyar nahi karthe hain

MOHAN : nahi main sach main tumse bahuth pyar kartha hoon

NANDINI : tho aap nahi peere na???

MOHAN : teek hain

NANDINI : thank u and love u

MOHAN : hmm lekin ab main karunga kya

NANDINI : so jayiye

She gets up and asks ramu to help her so that she can take him to his room

MOHAN : nahi mujhe yahi par rehna hai

NANDINI : lekin yaha kaise

MOHAN : maine kaha na mujhe yahi par rehna hain

NANDINI : teek hain cheliye let jayiye

MOHAN : par mujhe need nahi ari hai

NANDINI : aap letenge na tho need khud bakud ayegi cheliye and makes him sleep

MOHAN : nahi

NANDINI : kyaa

Mohan makes her sit and places his head on her lap "ab teek hai"

She smiles and he takes her right hand and holds it tightly with both his hands.

She makes him close his eyes and starts caressing his hairs.

He slowly falls asleep and she smiles looking him.

RAMU : beta

NANDINI : haan

RAMU : Saab ko upar

NANDINI : nahi teek hain aap jayiye

RAMU : jeee and leaves

Nandini slowly leans back and closes her eyes

Manik wakes up and not finding nandini beside him gets worried and runs out.

He goes to mohan room and seeing that even he was not present in the room gets more worried and starts running out shouting their names.

While he was running from one corner to another his eyes suddenly fall on the couch and a smile appears on his face.

He gets relieved and slowly walks to them.

He just stands seeing them for sometime and slowly walks towards his room without disturbing them.

Dont kill me for this I know you were excepting manan romance but life is all about unplaned things na so the same happened here with manan am sry if I disappointed you and now please let me now how are the updates


Nice part

Yaa i aGree with u life isall about unplanned thing
And ab har time to romance ni ho sakta

And bonding between them is also required
So i love this chapter
Bt plzz update nxt part soon

Wese ek baat bolu nandu na malhotra ki bhu sound kr ri h aaj ke chapter s me
I like it
She is taking good care of manik and hs dad

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Posted: 10 years ago
No..its not at all sounding wrong in fact i just loved todays update...life is always with unexpected things and by todays encounter manik and nandini will come more close to each other and understand each other...
Just loved the bond between nandini and Mr.malhotra...
Update faster...
Thank you...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Manan romance nahi hai tho kya hua...nandu's and maniks dad's scene was somethng that i always wanted to see in the show.. but wo tho hone se rahi...I am happy that i am getting it atleast through your stories.. damn good todays upload is... i never commented gere.. but this update.. i luvd it somuch dat it forced me to.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super awesome updates..loved how nandini stood up for manik and his dad though she didn't know much about their past but she trusted them and cared for them..she consoled manik and then the bond between father and daughter is beautifully penned... manik and his father both behave as kids infront of nandini love their bond and hope soon the mess gets cleared..and nyonika what to say about her the only reason for mentioning the name I'm scared what is she upto the way she left giving a threat to nandini..and nandini family members doesn't know much about what is happening in her life..well looking forward for another amazing update..please continue soon :)
Edited by Kuushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nai nai...
Dnt be srryy
Wat r u being sry for...
Hamesha sirf manan scenes nai ho sakte..
To understand them better yeh sab characters aur unki history bhi imp hai story aage le jaana ke liye...
In fact I loved today's update
Very touching
Keep it up :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was such an awesome update !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.. Manan romance as very much expected. But it was more interesting. Lived it. M glad u updated.
Love you
Myra
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...all three updates were amazing...romance action and emmotion a complete package..read all 3 in a go...
So sweet of manik wen he confess but bieng the naughty manik made nandu challenge n sweet romantic moments were the best...
Then that nyonika 😡 how dare she tried to slap mohan n manik...that heartless and wicked lady...but our nandu was the best...she stopped her...proud of nandu and how beautifully she calmed both her papa and love and can feel their pain and made them sleep in her lap...lovely...

Do continue soon...and thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
All d three updates were fabulous...
In first part manan romance was super Awsm...
In next part nyonika n nandini's tashan was Mind blowing...
In next part nandini n mohan's bonding is so loving..
I always like manan wala part but today I just love nandini n mohan wala part
Nandini ne dono father, son ko sambhala I just love that part when Mohan sleeps in nandini's lap n obeying her like a baby.. ...
it was so emotional nandini has become very important part of their life's ...
she knows very well how to handle both of them ...

Thanks a lot for writing this part...
Thanks a ton n hope to see more such emotional n loving parts ...

Update next part soon... 😊
Edited by purswani50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love Mohan and Nandini bond
That was the highlight for me in the entire story

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