MANAN OS: INDEFINABLE LOVE

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Kaju.acacia

@Kaju.acacia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Hey hi!

Sweeettt n nice OS

Loved it

Awesome '

Want more like this from u

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Your first OS, Yayy..👏

For a start it was awesome.

It was short but sweet. I liked both pov's. The situation you created was nice.

Just a little advice for your future write-ups, you need a little more polishing in your writing, but don't worry it will come by practicing.

Loved it, really!

Do write more!

Do Pm Me next time when you write.

Love

Shivani

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SalmanShahidSm

@SalmanShahidSm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

My multitalented baby...🤗
Superb OS
liked their pov
Diva in love with monster

Would love to read more of ur works

love u
Jyoti

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A true Shantanu lover *_*

@--Ana--

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Chtoupie 🤗

Tune itna aacha likha re 😃

I mean even though I'm not a manan fan and nor do I know the characters... I still could understand their POV'S very well and could comprehend the story very well 😃

I'm proud of u chotupie

First write up and WO bhi itna achha 😃

Keep writing more so that you can improve too 😃

And haan mere fav pe likhde kuch 😛

Just kidding 😛

Tu padai pe dyaan laga 😛

And haan likhna mat chod 😃

Love ana 🤗

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Mind blowing os yr
I so loved it

It was really very cute
Nandani the diva of college

Awww manan secretly loves each other
Bt scared to confess

Pls yr if possible continue
Would love to read it yr

Love u
Keep smiling

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ishq2051

@ishq2051

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

It was awesome re item!!

I loved it..

A cute little situation which had such a big effect on them..

The last part was really nice..

Keep writing..

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payal

@Payalchoudhary

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

What a os vichaar 🤗
I loved it ...
Morning me romantic os padna .like
Your whole going very nice 😳
U describe pov is very nice way :)
Thank for the scarb bacha
Love u ❤️