MANAN OS: INDEFINABLE LOVE

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Posted: 10 years ago
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MANIK'S POV

I was all set to go home but I felt my heart wanted something else. My eyes wanted to see her. I searched for her everywhere for nearly 10 mins. But I was getting late. With my disappointment, I turned to go back. Suddenly I bumped to someone. She is a girl and I caught her in my arms before her fall. I looked her face, her eyes were closed. But something was there that was very cute. She was holding my shirt so tightly that it was going to tear. She opened her eyes and loosened my shirt. The most beautiful girl of the college with whom every guy wants a dream date, the college queen was in my arms. I wished not to leave her anymore, but it was the situation's demand...NANDINI MURTHY..!! The diva of the college was in my hand..!!

Bull Shit! I left her, made her stand straight. All the eyes around were upon us! I didn't want to create a scene. I hope the time repeats again.

We had an eyelock..!!

I wish I could swim in that pool of her dark chocolate eyes..!!

Sorry she murmured..!!!

which was quite audible to me..!!

Its okay I said..!!of course with my killer smile...!!

~end of his pov~

Nandini's POV..!!

Why the hell did I ran..??!!!Just to be bumped with someone...!!!god knows who is he..???nandu hold him or you will fall..!!I closed my eyes eyes in fear..!!after sometime when I was sure I was safe..!!I opened my eyes..there he was my first crush.. Manik's P.O.V

I was all set to go home but I felt my heart wanted something else. My eyes wanted to see her. I searched for her everywhere for nearly 10 mins. But I was getting late.I had to pack my stuff for the overnight at cabir's place.Where obviously she will be present..but yeh dil manta hi nahi. With my disappointment, I turned to go back. Suddenly I bumped to someone. She is a girl and I caught her in my arms before her fall. I looked her face, her eyes were closed. But something was there that was very cute. She was holding actually second one...first was in my school days..!!! that was awkward for me..!!to be in my crush's arm for more than five minutes...is heaven also and awkward also..!!stupid of me...what the hell I am thinking..!!! seriously about my crushes's at this point of time..!!!but how I wish I could be in his arms for more time..!!my bad luck whole college eyes were on us..!!!idiot nandu..get back...!!! He helped me to stand straight..!!i murmured a sorry to him..which I think was audible for him..!!its okay..!he replied..with his killer smile...which definitely made me blush..!!

His voice brought me back from my dreamland..!!!

~end of her pov~

Shall we proceed...

Ya sure manik...umm..no..wait..let navya arrive..

Ohkk..and he stood with her...!!

Umm...manik..aren't you were getting late..???

Yaa..but will wait for you...!!!he looked into her eyes saying that...

And had an eyelock..!!

Chale nandini..which broke their eyelock

Haan chal navya...

Thank u manik for saving me...she shouted as she disappeared..!!!

It was my duty nandini to save my love...i whispered...

that night both couldn't sleep..they were thinking about each other and their clash...I wish it could happen again nandini..i wish it could happen again manik...I love you manik...I love you nandini..!!!

both were in love with each other...but was afraid to let out their feelings...but these feelings made them awake whole the night thinking about each other...he was in love with his diva..and she was in love with her monster...

P.S SEE THE NOTE BELOW
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HOLA MANAN FANS..!!
I NIDHI..a new member on this forum...my first writing piece on manan..
this OS is wholly dedicated to my sneha di🤗 adita di🤗 and srisha di🤗
thank u for your support..!!!

please do hit like button...(if you liked it)
and do comment...criticism are also allowed..!!

~thank you~

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is adorable... short and sweet, terrific job!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome work dear..
As nandini being college diva is kinda new concept..
Nice story..
U shd make it a ff and continue it..
I m sure all wd love to read..i too loved reading it..
Plz cont..ok..and post ur other works too..i gurantee all wil like it..and yeah,

To ky2 forum..as a writer..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww nidhi 🤗... finally u posted...proud of u sisy ...😃
fantastic os ...!!!!
beautifully penned ...!!!
amazingly written n executed ...!!
u described their povs so flawlessly...
amazing writing dear...
do make it a ff If possible 😳
will love to read more from ur desk ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Cute Os Shona
Do write more stories
Will love to read them 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
well done sweetu..!!

it was amazing..

do write more...

Love,
Shirisha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oyeee meri sexxxyyy
nidhs waah tu bhi iss forum mein aagayi
welcome welcome
pehle tera swagat toh hojaye
aur welcome to d forum yrrr
coming to ur os
its cute like u
sweet like u
awesome like u
loved it
do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww that's sooo cute
luvd it
Nandhini is sooo adorable.,..
And manik as usual charmimg..
nice work dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os plz make it a ff...
Cont soon...
Thanx for pm...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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