New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was awesome update...i lik the concept..pls continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so guys here is third part i hope u enjoy and like it.
Hope for positive response from u all





Part-3


Manik-bo...boss!

Boss-(cross arms in chest and ask) Yes mr malhotra..
do you have any so called excuses which u always created? what kind of behavior is this sleeping in office hours? why u can't focus on ur work always?
Just look at nandini how dedicated is she towards her work always manage to solve case by her hard work and intelligence. I will always appoint u both as patner becoz u can learn something from her but tumhe toh hamesha hi bahane marna hota hai. Kam toh dhang se karo.Tumhare ese behaviour dekhke mujhe toh doubt hota hai ki tum sachme apne batch ke topper rehechuke ho...
Anyways tumhe itna daat ke bhi kohi faida nai hai tum toh kutte ki doom ho sidhe honasarahe ho. u want to say something mr malhotra do be a statue.

(manik was still slient what to he was cursing his fate and nandini was giggling and making innocent face in front of boss as if she is working really hard)

Boss:god damm speak up something manik!

Manik:sir woh actually(but cut in middle by boss)

Boss:forget it tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta...Anyways kal jo maine case diya ta uska report tayar hogaya

Manik:yes sir..
(Nandini was shock to listen this because she haven't completed her report. As she was thinking what to do her eyes fell on the table where there kept manik report so she silently exchanged reports.. Manik took the report and gave to his boss but next second he was dumbstruck. His boss start to yell at him)

Boss(throws file in table and yells):What kind of joke is this how can u be so irresponsible u zst told that report is complete but this file is whole blank. Manik come out from ur la la la land and concentrate to work this is not a joke...

Manik(takes the file and looks at it its whole blank he zst don't know how does it happened): But sir i ve completed but i don't no what happened trust me

Boss:trust u really tell me specific reason to trust u. U always show this type of immature behaviour..
Forget it(turns to nandini and ask) nandini have u completed ur report..

Nandini:yes sir and give him the report

Boss:Impressive actually excellent wow nandini ur such a genius that's y i really like u u have so dedication towards ur work

Nandini:(proudly smiles glare at manik give i m the best look to him) Thank u sir!

Boss:nandini m giving u half day leave today and u mr manik (turns towards manik) complete the work and here are 10 more files by tomorrow morning make all the report keep in my table and without completing ur work don't u dare to leave the office other wise i will cut ur salary for this whole month..
(Nandini was very happy but manik was still in shock)

Manik: but sir

Boss: no ifs no buts that's an order aur nandini ese kuch sikhau apne zaisa banau

Nandini: yeh meri baat sunne tab na and manik gives her angry glare (she quickly grabs her bag and winks at him and says best of luck and runs out of office)
((Boss also leaves from their cabin leaving a fuming manik behind)

Manik(to himself): u have to pay for this nandini murthy (frustatedly throws the things)

...


Nandini home

Nandini: mom m home

nandini mom: nandu beta tu aza itni zaldi agae kuch tha office me

nandini:no mom woh boss ne mujhe zaldi chuti dedi acha woh chodo plz kuch khaneko do m damm hungry

nandini mom: ok tu zakar fresh hoja mein kuch banati hu tere liye ok

nandini:ok mom(goes to her room)

After getting freshen up she goes and have her favorite pasta

nandini:ur the best mom ur worlds best cook

nandini mom: i no nandu toh manik kyu nahi aaya lunch pe yeha ya kahi aur gaya gain

nandini (still eating and says): mom woh actually office mai kam karaha hain boss ne usse 10 files report karneko bola

nandini mom eyes popped out: what 10 files bechara mera baccha tere boss ki satkgayi hain kya khasmanu khanna bhagwan kare jis company ka malik hain woh uske niche bhik magte hue nazar aaye kitna satata hain mere bacche ko usko hamesha manik se problem kya hoti hain

Nandini: mom chill aur aap kya hamesha mera baccha mera manik kya karti reheti ho aap ko pata hain woh ek num ka vampire hain hamesha mera khoon ka pyasa hai

nandini mom hits her slightly and says : uska iss seher main kohi nahi hai pata nai kaise manage karta hai agar mein usse pyar nahi karungi toh bechara akela padjayega...
accha sun nandu az tu uske liye office mein tiffin lekar jaa bechare ne kuch nai khaya hoga mein dinner banati hu

nandini:no mom uss vampire ke liye mein kohi tiffin nahi lejaungi but her mom gives her do as i say look

nandini; ok mom fine am going (she rushed to her room to room and evil idea strike in her mind) ab ayega maza

phew ok guys and silent readers if u cant comments then hit like buttons


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahahaha!
It was damn funny..
Feeling really bad for manik..
This chapter was amazing..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys i m not able to post
Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: suraiya77

Hahahaha!
It was damn funny..
Feeling really bad for manik..
This chapter was amazing..



really thanx for the appreciation i hope u will like this ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

nice story

continue soon



tx and sure i will
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Posted: 10 years ago
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[B][/B] Guys as i m sry for delay so here goes the part 4 i hope u all like and leave the comments below



Venue:Office

Its night 8 pm all of almost left the office but one person is completely deep down in his work its non other then manik

Manik pov:
oh god abhi bas char file ke report bana paya huh aur abhi 6 file baki hain lagta hain main az ghar nahi ja paunga aur mujhe bohat bhuk lagri hain. kuch khaneko bhi nahi mangawa sakta aur khud khaneko bhi nahi jaa sakta ita bada pahad hai mere sammne. Kal us chipkali ko milne do usi phuch pakad ke ulta nahi kat diya toh mera nam bhi manik nahi hain. Mujhe phasake khud ghar me aaram karihogi kal toh us chipkali milke batahu (his thought were interrupted by peon)

Peon:Sir aap abhi tak yaha ho aap ko ghar nahi janna office band karneka tym hogaya

Manik:Nahi mujhe dher hojayegi tum jao

Peon: ok sir

(now manik was all alone in the office suddenly the lights goes on and off he was confused whats going on. He sees some shadow behind the curtain and move towards it)

Manik: hey whoes there( but sees noone and goes and sit in chair again start doing his work but again get disturbed by someone crying sound he gets up and goes near the sound and ask) i ask anybody is their dammait speak up something (the sound is growing louder and louder and he sees a girl sitting behind the sofa and crying)
Who r u? (he ask to her)

Girl: m a ghost and want ur blood i m thirsty

Manik: yeah right as if my blood is a milk shake (he says sternly) ur thirsty ok wait he goes to the fridge and takes out ice water and gives to her) have it and zst get lost from here

Girl:(in thought with ghost also he is so rude) no i don't this water i want human blood which can relax my thirst

Manik:don't irritate me i have / lot of work to do go and search another client.

Girl:m living in this building more then 100 yrs so i zst ur blood.

Manik(yelled): can't u see m working zst get lost otherwise aur 100 saal bathakti rahogi.Agar tumhe khoon hi chahiyana toh zake us chipkali ka khoon piyon oh how can i forgot that nandini murthy is ur soul sister how can u drink her blood now get lost us chudel jina haram kardiya mera

Girl: what did u zst say chipkali aur chudel main tumhe ese lagti huh (she almost ran to beat manik but he caught by her waist)

Manik: nandini tum ese pachkane harkote se bazz nahi aaogin maine tumhe pehelehi pechan liya

Nandini: what...Nan...dini m a ghost not any nandini (she starts stammering)

Manik: just cut the crap mein tumhara rag rag se wakif huh tum yaha kya kariho

Nandini: woh mom ne tumhare liye tiffin beza aur maine socha but cut ny manik

Manik: aur tumne socha ki mujhe irritate karneko tumhe aur kuch kam nahi hai

Nandini:woh...woh(she couldn't see into his eyes he was tightly holding her waist she was feeling chill shiver through her spine she zst lost in his touch. another side manik was completely gazing on her)

Manik goes near her ear and say huskily: bolo nandini say something (she was feeling weak on her knees. suddenly their gaze was broken by some sound on the window and move apart their was an akward silence which is broken by manik)

Manik: woh tumne kaha tha aunty ne mujhe khanne ki liye kuch bheja hain mujhe bohat bhuk lagi

Nandini : haan woh table parr hain tum jakar haat dhoo main khana lagati hu

Manik: umm ok and leaves from there

Nandini: yeh kya hogaya mujhe aur tujhe kyun accha lagra ta when he was holding u in his arm oh god kya sochrihu mein uoh ek vampire hain jo hamesa tera khoon pita hain par ek baat toh hain az jo kuch bhi hua usne mujhe kuch nahi kaha itna bhi bura nahi hain

in bathroom

Manik: manik tu kya soch ra tha us tym tu kyun us chipkali mein itna kho gaya kyun tu use chuke khushi hui esa toh pehele us saath rehenese mujhe kuch farak nahi pada par az kyun nahi manik tu ese kuch nahi soch saktha jo past mein hua bilkul nahi tujhe bass use dhur rehena hai ( and leaves from there and after coming out nandini is all ready with the plates )

Manik: umm bohat achi khusbhu aare hain acha tumne khaya

Nandini: haan acha ek baat batao tumhe kaise pata chala ke ghost mein hu

Manik (eating and says) : kyun ki main ek detective huh aur bohat intelligent zo hamesha class mein top karta tha tumhari tarha nahi jo cheating karne baad bhi fail hojata tha

Nandini: hawww how can u say that i was a cheater

Manik: maine ese hi nahi bola that m a detective samjhi aur baat rahi tum itni dumb ho jisko bhi ye pata chal hi jayega

Nandini: idiot manik what u zst say m a dumb and see grabs the pillow and start hitting him manik tries to stop her both fell down in the sofa they are so near nandini could listen her heartbeat his eyes fell on her pouty lips and leans close to her and she closes her eyes...



ok guys here it goes if anybody needs pm plz send buddy request

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okk it was vry diff story as compared to others over here ...aww yaha to nandini cheater nikli total opposite ta ye ...it was too muchh fun ...i enjoyed while reading it all the time smiling ...I liked it aloott ..n now to spice is also on the way between dem..😉..do continue it n ha dnt leave it in half way plz ...do continue n complete ha I would love to read it ...do let me know if possible when u update ...continue soonish. ...
LoTs of lovee❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrutha.shetty

Okk it was vry diff story as compared to others over here ...aww yaha to nandini cheater nikli total opposite ta ye ...it was too muchh fun ...i enjoyed while reading it all the time smiling ...I liked it aloott ..n now to spice is also on the way between dem..😉..do continue it n ha dnt leave it in half way plz ...do continue n complete ha I would love to read it ...do let me know if possible when u update ...continue soonish. ...

LoTs of lovee❤️



tx a lot for ur appreciation that means a lot to me if u like this ff that much sure i continue plz do me a favor that plz make this ff to acknowledge to everyone that Will be really grateful to u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Quite a interesting story
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