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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 5 - MaNan Off to Drive

There was complete silence in the car. Nandini opened the windowed and was enjoying the wind. Her hair blew in the wind, Nandini actually liked it, she felt relieved and happy after soo long. Her smile had no ends, she enjoyed everything as if it was the best day of her life, she totally forgot that she was with Manik. Manik was mesmerized by her smile and kept on staring her. There was a smile on his face too. Manik realized he could not take his eyes from her. Suddenly he that Nandini had almost put half of herself outside the window her pulled her inside.

Manik - Pagal ho kya? Lag gayegi.

This came as a remainder for Nandini that she was with Manik, her lawyer.

Nandini (her eyes down) - Sorry Sir. I won't repeat it again.

Manik was so touched by her innocence and could not hide his huge smile. He controlled it and asked her sarcastically,

Manik - Tumhe apna school days yaad aa raha hai na ?

Nandini didn't expect such a question from him, in confusion without understanding his reason for such a question she said "No, nahi. Par sir aap ne aise kyoon poocha ( with a cute questioning face"

Manik was now all the way to break into a laughter, but he again controlled it and answered, "Tum aise answers kar rahe ho jaise mein tumhara teacher ho ! Yes Sir, No Sir, Sorry Sir, I won't repeat it, I won't do it" after saying this he could control his laughter and started laughing.

Nandini - Oh ! toh aap mera Mazak udha raha tha ? Seriously Sir

Manik - Accha ! toh mein utna budha(old) dikta hai kya ? ( Saying this he looks at the rear mirror.

Nandini - Nahi ! aap toh bada handsome lagte ho ( she said excitedly. After completing the sentence she realized what blunder she had did.)

Nandini (to herself) - Ayyo ! Nandu bakwaas mat karo.

Manik ( smiling)- Handsome ? Hmm ! aise pehli baar ek client bol raha hai ! Office mein I'm used to hearing Loyal, Strict, Successful and all. Handsome pehli baar hai "Client se".

Nandini - Woo ... (stammers) mein...

Manik - Nandini relax. Vaise mein handsome lagte ho old uncle nahi toh phir baar baar "Sir .. Sir" kyoon keh rahe ho ? Yam era naam bhool gaya.

Saying this he gives her his visiting car and says "My name is written there. Manik Malhtora. Manik bula sakta hai. Remember we are friends ?(raises his eyebrows)

Nandini (smiling) - Okay Manik ! Vaise yeh hi comfortable hai. Tumhe dekh ke Sir bulana kafi boring hai. (Again she realizes she has made a big blunder)

Boring nahii...

Manik starts laughing, and Nandini too joins him.

At The Times Office

Mukti comes and sits in her seat. She looks at Abhimanyu's table and finds that he is not there. Suddenly someone taps on her shoulders, it is Vinnie her friend in the office, she shows her Abhimanyu coming with a few girls around him. Bachke zaraa zaraa Shaitaaniyan meri Oh ladies.. Oh ladies.. Karke zaraa zaraa Bemaniyaan meri Oh ladies.. Oh ladies.. Kare seena zori Seena zori tumhe ho na ho manzoor Tere dil ki chori Dil ki chori Hai mera kya kasoor Kya karoon oh ladies Ho.. Kya karoon oh ladies Main hoon aadat se majboor (Plays in background)

Abhimanyu (Abhi) Thakkar represents the new age man; one who is self-confident, efficient, cheeky and occasionally even smug. He is also extremely handsome and gives the impression of being a skirt chaser. He enjoys female company and makes no bones about the fact that he has a weakening knee effect on women. He is close friend is Mukti and shares everything with her, he is unaware of Mukti's feelings for him.

Abhimanyu comes and hugs Mukti.

Abhi - Hello jaan...

Mukti (Seriously ) - kya hai yeh sab ? Tumhara ghar nahi office hai Abhi !

Abhi - Mukti.. relax yaa ! Chachu nahi dekhe ga ! Chal sit, vaise aaj tumhe mera bohat kaam karna hai toh right now you sit kya pata iske baad tumhe time nahi milega betne ka !

Mukti - koi kaam nahi karne wali ho tumhara (frowns).

Abhimanyu pulls her nose and asks "kya hua baby ? Pakka kal tumhe shopping leke javoonga ! aaj kaam karodo na mera !"

Mukti - Tumhe kya ? right. Tumhara chachu iss office ka owner hai ! Tum aise flirt karte raho, aur mujhse kaam karvate !

Abhi laughs hearing her complaining about him and says "Chachu ka office hai, yahi sabse bada problem hai na!"

Mukti - mujhe kal pakka shopping ke liye leke javoonga na ?

Abhi ( giving a cunning look) - soch thi hoon.

Mukti starts beating him, and later they start laughing.

Mukti - Chalo masti bohot ho gaya ! Kam karte hai ?

Abhi pretends as if he didn't hear what she said. Seeing his actions Mukti starts laughing again.

Mukti - Ek baat bata ! Tum se good looking hai mera buddy Manik, par girls zyada tumhare peeche kyoon hai ? Andha hai kya wo ladkiyan ?

Abhi - Accha mujhse good looking ? Teekh hai teekh hai ! Par who ek number ki boring insaan hai ! Ladkiyan bhagte hai usse dekke ! (He jokes) "Adv. Manik Malhotra" (mocks Manik)

Mukti - aisa kuch nahi hai ! Usse pasand karne wali ladki iss duniya ke kisi kone mein hai ! Tum dekhna ! Ab chalo who file pass kardo !

At Bhirla Builders Office

Navya goes into Javed sir's office.

Navya - Good Morning Sir.

Javed - Bad Morning Navya. Tumhe pata hai Mr.Dhawan kabse shor macha ke rakha hai office mein "abhi dekna hai plan, abhi dekhna hai" he almost took the office in his hands.

Navya murmurs "half an hour early aya hai uss mendak ke liye."

Javed - Tumne kuch bola (seriously)

Navya - Na.. Nahi sir. Mein toh yeh pooch raha tha ki Dhawan sir hai kaha ?

Javed - Yes.. Woh guests room mein hai.

Navya murmurs again - Usse red carpet bichake guests room mein bithaya hai ! Aur mujhe suna rahe ho.

Javed - What javo Navya.

Navya - Sir, jaa rahi hoon.

Navya comes out of Javed sir's room and is really angry. "Iss Dhawan Mendak k otoh mein dhowoonga (wash him). Jeena haram kar ke rakha hai. Yeh last plan hai, agar yeh pasand nahi aaye na toh mein redraw nahi karne wali hoon. Dekhte jaavo tum Mr.Dhawan."

Navya enters the guests room, she sees a guy playing car racing in his phone. Navya identifies him as the guy who fought with her in the car showroom. "kitna low hai yeh car, bilkul tum jais" his words echoes in her ears." She recalls their fight.

Cabir's car crashes. "YOU ARE DEAD" it shows in the game.

At the same time Navya says " You are dead"

Cabir (looking in the phone) - Shit !...

He turns and sees Navya standing folding her hands and Frowning at him. He too identifies her and also recalls their fight and how she scratched him. "kisse jagda karke aa raha hai ?" Mukti's words echoes in his ears. Mukti and Manik's reaction when they came to know that a girl had torn his shirt.

Chak De Chak De Chak De ,Chak De Chak De Chak De, Chak De Saare Gham, Chak De Chak De Chak De, Tere Sang Hai Hum (plays in background)

That's the next update ... hope u all like it 😃... Please post your views and comments 😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
I loved Nandini's innocense
She really seems to blurt out what she thinks

The Abhi Mukti Part and Navya Cabir part was also nice
Although I had some understanding problems 😳
Written Hindi is really hard for me 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Awesome
Cont soon
And thanks for pm
I want more manan scene
Coz i love manan scene so please if you can than please do that
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Wow dis stry is interesting..
Nandini manik Mukti cabir navya abhi loved dese characters..
Navya is so dead...
Abhi & Mukti is cool...
Manan is great...
Thanx for d pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Hehehehheheheheh awsome
What a update
Cont soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Wow yaar
Ur story
Is so
interesting
it's really a different
story
I never read it
now I Wonder
I mean how
they started feel
for each
Other
I can see
manik have some
feeling
for her but he
didn't know
about it yet
bus I just wanted
to make them
together😛😛😛
really love Ur writing
please update early
am eagerly waiting for it
Love
Diya😛😛😛



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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Awesome update...
Manik has started liking nandini ...
Heheh navya...
Abhi a playboy.. Ohh...
Superbly written..
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Thnk uh soo mch fr d pm. ...
I jst read all d parts...
n all of them r really good

d plot is very very unique...
Navni bonding...
Manan friendship
cavya fights
n
mukhbi bonding...
everything is very nice

keep writing
😊
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
awww,,,manan's conversation was sooo cute😳...awesomee😆
mukbhi was also very nice...abhi is completely different here...and mukti also is different types.😊
cavya are the most hilarious ones as alwayss...😆😉
loved it to the core.
thanx for the pm dear.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Lovely update dear,
continue soon and take care.

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