The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21 - Page 24

Originally posted by: love_manan

I loved ur story..bt only one thing..dnt make things to go so easily...i mean what manik did with her after that she shoulf be angry with him..and you are showing her too much mental and dramebaz..pls improve her character a little...sorry i dnt wanna criticize u..loving ur story from the bottom of my heart..bt u need to improve her character...everyone just cant say her mental...as u showed cabir alya and navya three of them were saying her almost mental...

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

What did do ? Kya mind blowing update tha ...by god ek Dum jhakass..maza aa gya ...
Samajh nhi aa rha how u manage to do all dis lyk humour toh har ek line m tha ...u should join aa comedy show top show bnn jaega Vo...
Coming to the update
Nandini & Navya bond was superb
Cabir Manik & Navya awesome trio
Manik teasing madhubala maaza aa gya or Jo Manik ne maze liye cabir uff dat was damn funny

Selection of songs the best part of the update ...hats off to you 👏 👏
Songs were superb ...mujhe itni hasi aa rhi thi bs puchna mat meri mom ko paga m pagal ho gi 🤣 🤣 ...
50 shades of grey part was so thoughtful superb
Pizza boy kya scene tha bang on 😃
Manik's confession was awww...moment but he totally deserved nandini's reaction ...
Cabir Ki kya waat lagi nandu ne he totally deserved it manik's partner in crime.

And do take care of ur health...

P.S. - I am big fan of urs a tight hug for my side luv u

Originally posted by: Kritika_05

Awww dear uhh were just amazing 👏 👏
I'm still laughing out loud Hehehehe
It was amazing don't hav words
Keep it up 😛
And yeah lastly hav a request i read in beginning that uh will end it in 6-7 ch
Plzz dear don't end it soon requessttt 😳

Originally posted by: mananneetu

hey..i came to know about this story today nd i jst read all the parts without wasting a second...frm the first part to the recent parts i was laughing like a maniac. 😛 my mom thought i becme mad seeing me laughing.
nd ur story is jst out of the world..ur concept is superb nd ur lines are amazing...i luve the way u narrate the characters ...nd nandu is a package..jst amazing... 😃
i know my comment became so long bt still i m nt tired admiring this story...plz dont end it soon cause we wanna read it more...waiting fr the nxt update... 😳

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Hey Aqsa

Sorry for being late

Just now read the 2nd and 3rd chapter

They are simply awesome

Cabir really had made her life a live drama by telling her about HALLUCINATION

And, The drunk scene, it is the best drunk scene I've ever read. She was singing and expressing whatever she wanted to say... Haha...

And then later on when she saw the MD of Malhotra Industries entering, at that time, I was really feeling bad for Nandini as her hopes to complain to the MD got crushed..

And at the end, her Appa???

Cont Soon

And thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: shoana

Hi aqsa ...sorry for veryyy late comment...but u are really awesome writer...this ss had made me crazy..seriously i keep reading it repeatedly...amazing story...just loved the way manik is teasing nandini and the drunk scene was just hilarious👏👏👏btw i too belong to hyderabad..i'm so glad to meet ny hyderabadi here⭐️ take care of ur health..get well soon..waiting for ur nxt update😊

Originally posted by: seharash.hasan

Hey aqsa this the frist time i m commenting...hehehehe...wat a chapter suicide!!!...lol...manan makeout.????...finally nandu ko pata chal gaya ke manik md hai...plzz nandu should forgive him..itna mafi mang raha hai bechara...and at last... Appa!!!!...awsome update...plzz add me in ur buddy list...n plz pm me...
Lots of love..
Seharash...!!
Bye... 😊

Originally posted by: princypriya

hey girl am frm hyd after seeing arya 2 i was aaa

bt the way u pinned each chpter was literally wow

ther was no words to explain hw brillant u r writing r story

am totally fell in love wh u r sory

fristly the way mnaik made her irrtating by his ways

n then cabir by saying hallucination making her gng to totally bad state

then navya wth her idea ly andu came to knw the real truth

i jst loved it

hw manik knw abt her everything

he really meant by this

continue soon

stay blessed

keep smiling

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

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😛

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has hasker pagal hogayi hui

kyaa kar diyaa hai yaar

miss murthy ,,,,,,,,,,,,appa r u a virgin ??

amma se poochna padagaa

miss murthy never thinks

hallucination n woh bhi pizzawale ko bhi

kabir n manik best pair

navya manik scene also cool

but nandini murthi rocks

drunk nandini double rocking

ayyappa maine tho signal dene ko bola tha yeh kiss denen keliyae nahi

mei md ko complain kar doongi ooops

damn good

waiting for next part

please update soon