The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21 - Page 23

Originally posted by: dhrits_24

Ohhh Myyy Goooddd...2 looonnnggg parts...👏 Thank u 4 dat

N what are u up2 girl...u cracked me up badly...I had a hard time controlling my laughter...🤣...like seriously

Ok cmng to the update...CaVya romancing n Manik interupting 😆🤣 sounds like deja vu bt in a different way, through role reversals😆🤣instead of Cabir interfering in MaNan's romance it's the other way round,...😆🤣 Navy'as Rakshash n Manik's Madubala continuing n poor soul Cabir being shuttled between the two😆🤣...n wait - this was the only thing left to crack me up more badly - A Drunk Nandini 🤣 n the songs...seriously tl me girl what got into u while writing - what songs 😆🤣 Sarkayeliyo khatiya 😆🤣 Mera Piya ghar aaya 😆🤣 n the epic one - Raat akeli hai 😆🤣 She called her appa 🤣 n the cab driver - free k slaps pade bichare ko n he ran away 😆🤣

N finally Happy Realization time for Nandini😛 I loved Manik's entry as the MD n also his confession. Now waiting for Nandu's confession😉 N how nicely Manik handled her...he did not cross his limits for Nandu's trust...I hope everything gets sorted soon between the two...they both r sooo cute...n wait did Nandini's Appa really arrived...whts gonna happen...*bitting nails*...

U really cracked me up badly with this update...plzzz update very very very sooonnn...MaNan-ish lamba vala update...grt work👏...tc😉

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

that's very interesting yar .. super duper awesome.. n loved to the core.. wat a dialogue yr... nandu k dialogue just killed it...n our lover boy manik isss shooo nice.. finally secret revealed.. n m damm happy... n itss ok dear u don't hav to be sorry... n yaaa u r mind blowing n fabulous writer .. luv ur writing skills... vry shock note or end h soo.. eagerly waiting... waiting... update soon... thanksss 4 thisss.. :-) :-) :-).;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D.;-):-) :-D ;-) :-).;-)

thank u so much for loving it and appreciating me... Thanks alot😊

Originally posted by: alisha_ash

hahahha wht an awesum chp yarr serriouslyy i was laughing was a idiot coz i was sitting with my parents n bhai when silently i was reading ur chp n smiling n sumtyms burst out in laughing cozz of nandus song yarrr ahhahah i cant tel u how much i enjoyed n yaa u didnt pm me yarr tell me wht shuld i do ??? n yaa pls update loving her was red too n yaa when u gonna update the next chp tell me pls i m again dying to read the next chp of elevator as the precape felt like shit shit... so pls dnt make ur fans wait allot n update asap i knw i m being greedy but kya karu i m nt able to live without reading ur story yarr

ps:ur great fan n ya pls pm me whenver u update the next chp!!!!!

keep writting i m ur big fan if possible reply once...

heheh I hope u r alive now cuz i've been lost far from updating and thank u so much... Sorry for not pm'ing u must have slipped put of my mind... But next time pakka... Heheh chotu advice family ke sath baithkar kabhi aisi cheeze nahi padni chahiye q ke trust me agar hum pagalo ki tarah haste rahe na they might find it fishy or they can ask u about what was it and they may even read what u read... Heheheh this has often happened with me and damn I was being scolded badly😆... PR thank u for so much love towards me...

Originally posted by: Ashmita18

It was a mind boggling update... uh NAILED it girl... it was a rocking update... seriously... the craving manik, cavya romance, navya's plan to get back on manik, drunk nandini, her singing sessions, then her maniac dance, manik controlling his anger, feeling to bang his head somewhere, then sometimes getting mesmerized by her pretty glowing face, then the taxi driver fun, then the apartment romance, the morning hangover, manik's sweet good morning coffee for nandini, then pizza and flowers for her, revelation of some truths, confrontation in the office, manik's love confession, nandini's self respect coming in between, then nandini having fear of stairs, manik trying to help her, then confessing his genuine love and now nandini's appa's entry... amazing... what an update... HATS OFF... uh are a superb writer... FLAWLESS... uh write sooo very well... great going... loving this story sooo damn much... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it... please continue very soon... will be waiting sooo eagerly for your update... keep up the wonderful work... best wishes to uh... stay blessed... :) :D

hey girl am frm hyd after seeing arya 2 i was aaa

😆

superbbb update ...loved it.
I really loved your writing style ...the dialogues,nandini's attitude ...everything perfect.


update soon

pls post the chp 4 n pm me yarrr now the wait is killing me allott kyaa karuu

it was dam gud or i like say awsome poor manik ek pagal se luv kar betahe becara 😉 bt it luv story was awsome plz next part jaldi post kar wating for the next part