MananSS: Chupke Chupke Chori Chori ||COMPLETED|| ( Ch 10 : Pg 22 ) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
We want more of Manan!!
Anyways, smart move by Mukti!!!!
Waiting for the nexe update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: manya_189

Could have made it longer!! Wanted to see MaNan romance :(


Guys, as promised next part will be only manan. And I'll try my best to update it today itself. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Ur story are short but sweet nd fabulous
nd I loved it
thanks for PM
keep writing nd smiling
Take care
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Awww so cuteee
But so shorttt ishaaa plz thora to lamba sea kero naaa hahahah anywaysss update soonnn really wanna see manannn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Not fair...want manan moments...
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
isha ...kya yaar...update soon big wala...I m dying
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
short and sweet part...
loved manik and mukti convo...
finally cabir...wow...cupid meets cupid ...loving mukti and cabir bonding...
now eagerly waiting for our manan scenes
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm


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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
I love Mukti for this... the way she was protecting Nandini and said to Manik that Nandini has a boyfriend who might arrive any moment and will show him stars if he sees the random guy googling at her was so sweet :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

I love Mukti for this... the way she was protecting Nandini and said to Manik that Nandini has a boyfriend who might arrive any moment and will show him stars if he sees the random guy googling at her was so sweet :)


That's what friends and boyfriends are for. ;) hahahahaha! Thanks darling. :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 7:

Nandini entered the room with teary eyes.

She saw Manik facing the other side, his back towards her.

Nandini: Manikkk!! (Suddenly, all her sadness flew away)

Manik turned and looked at her. He scanned her from head to toe. She looked beautiful. The kohl perfectly outlined her bright eyes, her pink gloss was inviting him to consume it all, her earing twinkled like stars, her open hair tempted him to touch her and her sarre? Oh my my, she looked like an angel.

Nandini shook manik.

Manik: where were you subeh se? (yes his anger was justified.)

Nandini: wo...mai..maine socha tumhe surprise du esse ready hoke and issiliye

Manik made a serious face.

Manik: Well in the case let me tell you miss.moorthy (he took a few steps forwad, nandini was scared of his anger, so she took her steps back until they reached the wall)
You've succeeded!! (He smirked)

He started laughing.

Nandini hit him playfully.

Nandini: manik..tum..tum pagal hoo!!

A tear escaped her eye and she instantly hugged him and hid her face in his chest so that he couldn't see her tears.

Manik: I don't necessarily need to see your eyes to know when you're crying Nandu. You don't need to hide.

Nandini: mujhe laga tum mujhse gussa ho

Manik: han tha. Nahi hona chaiye?
Tum bina kuch bole full day gayab rahogi toh kaise chalega baby, I was worried.


Nandini: sorry, next time se no being out of touch. Promisssh!

They then broke the hug.

Nandini: ab batao, how do I look?

Manik: tch tch tch, kya puch liya baby. If I go on to explain how amazing you're looking, I know I'll run out of words, so only my actions can talk for themselves I guess.

Manik came closer to kiss her but she stepped aside.

Nandini: you'll have to earn it!

Manik: acha kaise?

Nandini: game!

Manik: game? Whattt!?!

Nandini: han. Its called "I love.."
We both one by one will have to say unique things about each other that we love. I'll start.


Nandini: I love the way you care for me.
Manik: I'll never loose in this game, I can bet.

Umm, I love the way you smile.


Nandini: I love your hair.

Manik: I love your eyes.

Nandini: I love your understanding nature.

Manik: I love your sweet & bubbly personality.

(She blushed)

Manik: I love the way you blush!!

Nandini: I love your compliments!

Manik: I love to give you compliments.

Nandini: cheater!! Acha anyways, I love our lunch dates.

Manik: I love our walks.

Nandini: I love the warmth of your hug.

Manik: I love it when I have your hand in mine.

Nandini: I love it how you know what's wrong with me even before I say it.

((Their I love.. continued for a while, noone ready to give up))

Manik: I love it when you shine for me.

This was enough for Nandini to give him his reward. Her smile was widening.

Manik: I love youuu!!

Nandini wasted no time and came towards him for his reward. She smacked her lips on his and dug her nails in his hair. They kissed until they became breathless.

And as her habbit, she was blushing too much so she hid in her favourite place, Manik's arms.

Manik: madam hum yahan waise business ke liye aye the

Nandini: but mai toh bas tumhare liye ayyi thi (she made a cute pout)

Manik: perfect..toh ajj yahin issi room mein rehte hai

Nandini: tumhe bas excuse chaiye na romance ka?

Manik: Ofcourse (he said like a cute kid)

Nandini: chalo bahar sabse milke atte hai

They went outside and met all the business men/women present there.

Mukti messaged nandini "Come to the same room with Manik!"

She showed the text to manik and without coming into anyone's notice they sneaked out.

They opened the door and found Cabir and Mukti sitting there.

Mukti: close the door isse pehle koi dekhe.

Nandini: Mukti yeh manik hai and manik yeh meri..

Manik: I know. Yeh tumhari second boyfriend. Mujhse zyada toh yeh possessive hai tumhare liye.


Mukti laughed as she knew what he meant.

Cabir: and I am Cabir.

After everybody's introduction they all settled.

manik: so plan kya hai? Yeh introduction toh hum bahar bhi kar sakte the

Cabir: mukti batao inhe plan

They both gave an evil giggle
Mukti: we want to hear your love story over some drinks!

Nandini: no no, no ways

Manik: its personal yaar

Mukti: nandu you promised yaar

Nandini was helpless so she looked at manik for his approval. He also nodded.

Cabir: so that means a yes?

Nandini: fine!

Mukti: great, yeh lo, drinks. Cheers.

*****************

Manan's short cute love story and how it started. Excited? Do comment. ;)

Also, me before hand telling I am not that good at writing roamantic stuff, so you'll have to kaam chalo with this. Sorry. :p

Stay tunned. :*

Love,
Isha :*

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