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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

it was nice...but is it the continuation of what u had written earlier or is it a complete different story...??

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dontstop

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Devanshigupta14
it was nice...but is it the continuation of what u had written earlier or is it a complete different story...??

It is continuation... and as i can't start it from the beginning i'll write few of the past scenes as flashback😊

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Ananya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

a lovely ss!!
would love to read more!!

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dontstop

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey, people how are you all?? As i told you that i am free i'm in a mood to update it so here it is but before that thnkq so much for the appreciation compared to the people in this forum its actually quite low but koi baat nahi i'll try to make it interesting so that sab atleast padh sakte hai no worries 2-3 readers hai to bhi mai likhungi coz i love to write, but haa thodasa alien type feeling ho raha hai coz i'm new here and kisiko janti nahi hu, i know Manan fans are so welcoming i'm sure i'll make friends here, and haa if anyone wants me to PM them when i update then feel free to send me buddy request at least aise i'll get to know kithne log are reading this, acha enough of my bakwas and here goes the update...

Nandini had enough of ice cream and with that happy smile she looked at Manik who was already staring at her with so much of love, as she had some ice cream on her face which got spread during the feeding session she slowly moved forward and playfully rubbed her tip of the nose on his, Manik was already lost in her and this action of hers made him go crazy he grabbed her waist with one hand and cupped her nape with the other making her stay still and gently took her lips into his and he kissed as if he was caressing her lips and sucking out the left over ice cream it was very smooth and gentle that Manik never wanted to break the kiss but Nandu had to because they were not at home so had to break the kiss...

Nandu: Manik we are outside this not our home.

Manik: *smirking* acha agar hum ghar pe hothe then??

Nandini blushed and got up and started walking then it crept her mind that they were not at home, they broke into someone's shop and ate the ice cream and were leaving she turned around to say somthing to Manik when she saw him writing something on a paper and some money was placed there she smiled and came near him and gave him a side hug and while hugging she said...

Nandu: You know Manik the first time i...

Manik: The 1st time you started liking me... I know jaan chalo its late we have to go home.

He kissed her forehead and both went back to home

*Flashback*

Fab5 were speeding in their car (to be more precise in their jeep) and without honking the horn Mukti took a sharp turn to park their jeep in the college basement but *BHOOM* there was a man in his early 30's on his bike Mukti accidentally hit him and that man fell down from his bike and the glass vases that he was taking along with him were now broken and shattered on ground.

Mukti: Abey andha hogaya can't u see??

Cabir: Mukti chodna *looking at fab5* is everyone fine??

Manik hit Dhruv's shoulder and signalled him to go and help that man and Manik too got down and helped him, the man was about to say something but Mukti interrupted in between

Mukti: Ab kuch bolega to iss baar gaadi ko nahi tujhe thok dungi samjha?? Chal nikal yaha se

Saying this she came back to the car and everyone sat in and she drove away, after parking Manik excused himself and Cabir just smiled and Fab4 without Manik went in, while Manik came back running to this man. Nandini had some important work to complete so she came early that day and witnessed this scene she was very much frustrated and walking towards that man to help but she saw Manik running towards him so without making any sound she hid herself near a tree so that she could hear their conversation.

Manik: *to that man* aap thik ho??

Nandini was surprised as well as shocked because he was the MANIK MALHOTRA who never cared for anyone except for Fab5, and hearing this from him she was confused.

Man: Ji sir i'm fine.

Manik: Ok, let me help you *he started picking up the bike and helped him*

Manik: *looking at the broken glass pieces* "i can see we made a huge loss to you please take this money" saying this he handed him some money and the man took it and went away and so did Manik.

Nandini who was hiding herself now came out with a much more shocked face while witnessing the entire scenario she was so much concentrating on them that she didn't notice when Cabir came and stood beside her.

Cabir: Manik vaisa nahi hai jaise vo dikhta hai..

Nandini who was not aware of his presence took a gasp and jumped a bit on realising that it is cabir she breathed normal.

Nandini: Cabir tum?? Acha now i understood tumne hi Manik ko bheja haina to help that man??

Cabir: *laughing* Nandini how could you even think ki koi Manik ko convince kar sakta hai to do something like this??

*thinking to herself* Yes, Manik is a tough nut vo aise matters mai fab5 ka bhi nahi sunta but i just saw him helping someone other than fab5.

Cabir: Nandini, Manik aisa hi hai to know the real Manik try to be close to him, i'm sure you will be totally surprised and kya pata u may even like him *wink*

Nandini couldn't think of any smart reply and she just blushed WAIT What?? Did i just blush?? *hitting her forehead* "Nandini Murthy what are you doing" and she looked up to the sky folding her hands "Aiyappa this guy na, he troubled me and Navya so much and today i'm blushing ye kya ho raha hai please mujhe aur confuse math karo"

*Flashback ends*

They both reached home but were surprised to see 2 cars in front of their mansion it was 3AM and they were not sure on who would be coming to their house this early but as they saw the cars they realised that it belongs to fab5 but why did they come at this time was the lone question running through their mind brushing their thoughts aside they went in to find everyone in their PJ's without any makeup they seemed as if they just came out of their sleep Alya Mukti and Nyonika (Manik's mom) were sitting on the couch resting their head in their hands and Cabir and Dhruv pacing to and fro in the hall and trying to call someone restlessly and all the servents too were gathered there on seeing them tensed.

Manik: Guys kya hua?? tum sab yaha is everything fine??

Everyone shot their head up and took a sign of relief when they saw these two safe and sound Nyonika on seeing their children safe came and hugged them and kissed them on their forehead.

Nyonika: Tum dono kaha chale gaye the i was so worried, maine pura ghar dekha i couldn't find you anywhere so i called Cabir and all to come over.

Manik: Wo... mom... hum aise hi bahar gaye the.

Cabir: Manik tujhe bahar jana hi tha then you should have informed anyone.

Mukti: kisiko kuch bataye bina aise koi jata hai kya.

Dhruv: and your phone me and Cabir got tired of calling you it just said that ur out of coverage area

Alya: hum sabki pyaari neend uda dia tum dono ne milke. What is this guys??

All the while Nandini just lowered her head and listened to all of them and she couldn't take it more because of her everyone was scolding (just warning) Manik and finally she opened

Nandini: *guilt written all over face* Guys vo mai... mujhe ice cream khane ka mann kar raha tha and ghar pe nahi tha and vo bhi mere hi vajah se i emptied the entire ice cream boxes in the evening and again i wanted to eat so maine manik se kaha ki i wanted... *and a lone tear escaped from her eye*

Everyone was looking at her in awww while she was speaking but this wasn't something they expected as soon as they saw the tear rolling down her eyes Manik was about to hug her when Cabir pushed Manik and hugged her and mukti hugged her from side and Alya started rubbing her back comforting her. All the while Nyonika had a smile dancing on her lips seeing their bonding she went near Manik and hugged him. Everything has changed in his life his friends used to hate Nandini but eventually she made them love her and now they can't even see a single tear in her eyes. Everyone thought that M=Nandini was lucky to have Manik in his life but no Fab5 and even Nyonika thought that Manik was lucky to have her in his life.

Manik: Sorry mom it totally slipped my mind i should have informed.

Nyonika: Its ok beta, i understand and i'm very much happy that you wanted to fulfil her wish.

Dhruv who was seeing all this went and hugged Alya from behind and soon it turned into a group hug and as they were now assured that everything was fine they left to their respective houses. Manik and Nandini too went back to their rooms. Manik made Nandini sit on the bend and placed a pillow behind her back so that she could rest properly on the headboard, Nandini was very much aware what was going in his mind so she just took his hands and kissed his hands and gave him an assuring look to which Manik just gave her a smile.

Nandini: Manik jo bhi hua na vo past tha and what matters now is we all are happy, i know that your still guilty due to the way you used to treat Nyonika before, but Manik that's past and everything happens for a reason so please mere lie just leave all that see na how happy we are, you, me our baby and she took his hand and placed it on her stomach this brought back the real smile on Manik's face.

Manik placed a kiss on her stomach and placed his ear on her stomach and said

Manik: *To their baby* Papa loves you a lot and i'm waiting for you please come soon...

Nyonika Malhotra in this SS is different from the original Ky2 she is kind, caring but Manik never liked her because his dad married her after his mom's death and that's why he never even called her as mom. Nyonika was just a care taker for him until Nandini came into his life and after Nandini came into his life he understood how much Nyonika loved him and how much she wished him to address her as his mother.

Edited by dontstop - 9 years ago